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Monday 31 March 2014

TFS:8 - 60% Update...Or nearly...

Is it me or you guys are getting more and more impatient with each update...^^

Let me remind you that this blog is supposed to be a community for all fans of Corruption and MC comics, everybody's here for the same thing, I guess, so please be kind to each other.
 I can't render faster, not because I don't want to, but just because making those damn comic take ages >_<

This being said, we here to enjoy the 60% update of this 8th chapter.
Actually 60% isn't really accurate and should be reviewed to something close to 50% T_T
Unfortunately some scenes had to be lengthened a bit but hopefully, I'll catch up later with some quicker scenes. But don't worry, you still have deserved your 10% update, why? because what I did since last update is still equal to 10% worth of work. Yepaaa

I won't tell you the number of pages I'm up to, otherwise some people would roll themselves on the floor till I release the chapter as it is right now. But don't be fooled, a lot of pages does not mean a lot of corruption, transformation or money scenes. Basically if I had to release the chapter now, you would equally roll yourself on the floor, spewing, as you wouldn't have what you're expecting of any TFS chapter ^^

What I can tell you tho' is, including this update, you will have seen more or less 60 pictures while I already have rendered more than 700, and created more than 75 scenes with Daz. A huge work, which, I hope, will pay off when the chapter will finally be released.

On the other hand, I listen to what you're asking for, so here're a little bit of Tethys and Emika for those who can't stand waiting  ;-)

Enjoy dear fans of corruption...


Here she is, the most popular character of all times...maybe I should rename the comic Emika instead of Fallen Star ^^

Ran, all worried about her little sister...Or not...

that, is a nice and comfy position

Or do you rather prefer this one ?!

Looks like Tethys is going through a hell of a time...

Finally managed to get a proper render for water

Greedy Leprechauns

Sneaky little bastard, looking under the girl's skirt

100 points if you hit the target right in the centre...

107 comments:

  1. Thank you once again for another amazing update. They all look fantastic!! It's not you, the "anonymous" are tending to get more and more riled up for each update and don't let them bother you because no one will ever be able to please everyone at once. Working on my own stuff I can truly appreciate the time it takes to get pics renders ready, especially making scenes because it is the details of each one that make them stand out and you are very good at nailing those details. As for changing the name to Emika from Fallen Star, I am very surprised at her popularity after only appearing in about a dozen pages. My personal favorite characters lie elsewhere in the story. Once again, amazing pics and keep up the great work!!

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    1. p.s- the water does look great, huge improvement over the water featured in shower scenes have been (though those have been getting better)

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  2. looks nice !
    question
    will someone die in this comic?

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    1. Maybe...
      Unlike some other artists (general comment I'm not pointing at anybody in particular), I'm not against making characters die, as long as it's beneficial for the story and help it progressing.

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  3. I just donated you 25$ for your great work. If you need another HighEnd-PC for rendering then just ask me for that, but I understand when you not ready to share the source models and stuff with me. So I will just sitting here and looking forward to see the final update. =)

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    1. Thx dude.
      I'm ok with my computer so far and hope it will still last a bit longer ^^

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  4. If Varo is no longer in Saga does this means, that you must corrupt Saga again?
    Is she now her old self, but with a monster body ? ( half monster:) )
    or is she so much damaged, that it would not make a big differs if Vore isn´t Inside of her??
    Maybe A.. must make her a real monster ( update)

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  5. you think it is saga under the rubble!
    maybe now she will fight with the angel against the Monster (:-))

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    1. The one under the rubble is Tethys.
      Also the female arm on the picture Shinra uploaded before Xmas belongs to her too. That means her corruption should be finished by now.

      Just don't get overhyped because you will be disappointed.

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    2. why would they be disappointed ? :-P

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  6. Don't worry about the frequency of the updates, it's hard to wait because everytime we finish reading a chapter, we know we will have to wait a few months before a new one is released.
    Btw your comics are always better than the previous one so all is forgiven ^^

    My favorite corruption was in chapter 3 when the Devil corrupted Starlight. I just loved how brutal it was even though I'd have liked it better if she had been resisting her dark thoughts longer so that we'd have seen her enjoy the sex in spite of herself.
    It's what I like in corruption comics the moment in between when she's still good but you can see her will crumbling.

    That, and the heroine falling for the villain and becoming its girlfriend.

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  7. Just another guy31 March 2014 at 11:14

    What a teaser !
    Don't think I could have hoped for something looking better than the corruption Tethys seems to be soon facing.
    And p3 the way the Devil holds her. I don't know, I love how defenceless she looks !
    It's the good old "heroine imprisoned by the villain to be the victim of his perverted desires".
    What more can I ask ?

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    1. In my humble opinion, Tethys's corruption should be one of the best I've done so far. Now, it's up to me to render it as good as I envisioned it >_<

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  8. have we made in the last comic one of the new Nine future Pinces of Hell?
    will we meet in the the future maybe some old one?
    Will you invite or show us one or two of the Pinces of Hell?
    Is one of them or someone from the island?
    will you show us in the update 70% Picture of Justine maybe?
    will the Neue Pince bekomme more power than before in the the old Body?
    now that the angel know what is happen will you give them a Update also?

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    1. The princes and princess of hell are part of history.
      They should not make an appearance here or rather, not the way you imagine it.
      Justine may be back for 70% update yes ;-)

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  9. Is that correct the this comic will have between 400 and 500 pages have?! :) more 400!
    and around 1200 Picture? :)
    How many text will have the Comic? alot??

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    1. Chapter should be just over 500 pages. Numbers of pics...a lot more than that >_<
      As for the text, really hard to quantify, normal I would say ahaha

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  10. are there more then 2 new Angel becoming a Monster in this comic ? Because if A.. will fight the devil and the Angel she needs more Angel Monster too have a successful!

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  11. Speculation post N#1510i6t45b
    (keep in mind that most of that is meant to happen, given the hints we got so far)

    Lumiel attacks on the Earth so that angels attention will be somewhere else.
    Saga and Tethys go there to fight off the "demons". Meanwhile Karin's transformation is finished and under the influence of Lumiel she changes the antidote to work for them.
    On Earth Tethys is betrayed by Saga and left there, presumely dead.

    Somewhere there, the Devil's plan is working because he will be able to get the help of a cult. Saga returns to Heaven and lies to the others that Tethys is missing in action. They start to search for her. In that time, though, somebody from hell finds Tethys. They bring her there. The Devil starts torturing her, essencially turning her into one of his new Princesses of Hell.

    In that time Saga visits her friend Emika and sees her completely dependant on her. Vore decides to leave Saga's body for Emika's (so that fans can have their favourite hero somewhat important and Shinra-kun can retcon Saga's powers.)

    This is all this is important.

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    1. Pretty solid speculations here...

      And what do you think will happen in Moyira Island?

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    2. That's some pretty nice predictions and I figured it would probably go this way but I think you'd better keep it to yourself.
      Shinra makes the effort to create suspense and keep us guessing but because of the time we need to wait he still posts those "updates".
      Either you'll just spoil something or Shinra will change the way the story unfolds because of what you say.
      I don't mean any offence, I just don't want to know more than what Shinra already teases us with (which is already too much I reckon)

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    3. Based of what happened in previous chapters, some conclusions on what's coming are pretty obvious to make.

      But keep in mind that I work hard not to show you the pics which could spoil the story. In 2 words, I show you what I want you to see, and comfort you in the ideas you already made up ;-)

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  12. On the one hand the wait is terrible, on the other I know that what comes at the end will be more than worth the wait.

    If I might ask, how many episodes are left in this amazing tale of sexy corruption and transformation? And how much of the story is already set in stone, merely waiting to be rendered into images and how much is done on the fly as your ability to tell the story improves?

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    1. The story should comprises 11 chapters, so 3 more chapters to come afters this one.
      Sadly (or maybe hopefully for some others), we're getting closer to the end of the saga T_T

      The script of most of all the remaining chapters have already been written.
      Of course, I always improve this script once I start writing what I call the storyboard. Filling the story gap, enhancing some yet untold part of the story, and adding some scene for pure fan service.

      There's a few elements I changed from what has originally been written but I trying to envision each and every pics I have to render before actually render them ^^

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  13. ALL HAIL THE KING OF CORRUPTION

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    1. LOL
      ...srsly... ROFL

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    2. Hey, don't laugh!^^

      As for you, Shinra, these pics...how should I say it?
      Something like SR0 page033 bottom pic?

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    3. Hmmm I have to check that tonight...
      I usually really pay attention not to use the same models as Ike, if this is the model you're talking about >_<
      Coincidence...or I may have been subconsciously pushed ^^

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    4. Hah! Now it's my turn to ROFL.

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    5. you'll need to explain ;-)

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    6. Huh? Oh nothing big. Just that you were expecting some deep commentary about models being similar or whatever while it was just a few words of praise.

      Seems the Kanon joke from the previous thread also went unnoticed... Man, jokes aren't fun when you have to explain them! >_<

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    7. Arf sorry >_<
      I've been fooled on that one ^^

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  14. Shinra-Kun, I'm so glad your blog exist.
    I just found out about your comics (on g.e hentai org) and knowing another one is coming makes me happy beyond belief.
    Love where the comic is going too (seeing the update). I really like the sex scenes in it.
    Tethys is one of my favorite. I like how honest and frank she is. Hope her sex scenes with the devil will be as long as ossible and that she will be one of his wife like "just another guy" said.

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    1. Thank you for your kind words, they are much appreciated.
      One thing is sure, the devil will take his time with Tethys ^^

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  15. Hello,
    I'm a simple guy with simple tastes
    I like a good story with good characters. Makes the corruption even better.
    But yeah, me too, like most of the guys here, in the end I just hope to see the Villains transform the heroines into their demonic girlfriends ^^
    I just thought I should throw that somewhere ; )

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    1. And what better place to throw that than over here.
      Sure beats putting it on a religious website or in your prime minister's mailbox!

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    2. Hell of a Critic3 April 2014 at 01:29

      Too true those people are awfully judgemental ; )

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    3. that passive-aggressiveness

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  16. What I really still hope to see in TFS:

    +Some impregnation (I really hope one of the heroine (corrupted or not) will be impregnated with the offspring of the Devil or another big demon).

    + The Devil or some other demons fucking some heroines and making them theirs.
    Apparently It didn't really work on Starlight : (

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  17. is the past story important at Rhea and Leto for you story?

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  18. 59% ? you mean 60% :) or more?

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    1. if I really had to update the progress bar right now, it would rather go backward to something more like...49% T_T

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    2. what is happen ?? have you problems with the pc?

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    3. No, just that some scenes had to be lengthened a bit.
      I might catch up this delay later, if some scene ever turn shorter than planned, but right now I'm a bit behind what I thought I was >_<

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    4. No problem.
      We prefer you take your time ; )

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  19. Hello there,
    First of all shinra-Kun i''ve became a big fun of your work. I really dig the devil corruption darkness. My question is to you or anyone else. Are there anymore comics( couple of chapters) with the same genre part from the refferred links on this blog.

    Keep up the awesomework!

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    1. Thank you MrsJimsjim.

      Are looking for 3D comics only or you don't mind a good 2D hentai ?
      In terms of 3D comic, there's unfortunately, not many artists playing in that genre, and even less creating real comic with a rather long or short story. It's rather Image set than proper comic books.

      But I'm sure guys out here must have a few ideas ;-)

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  20. i think that it's because we enjoy your comic so much that we find ourselves on the edge of our seats waiting for it

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  21. it's indeed a very good reason ;-)
    I've actually been in discussion lately with a few members, to try to find a solution, a new model, where you guys have to wait less time, and I have some sort of compensation to work even harder :-p

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    1. You could just do what Hollywood does and instead of releasing the big-ass Chapter 8 all at once, you rename it The Fallen Star: Name Part 1/2/etc; honestly though I'd rather just get the whole thing than deal with too many cliffhangers.

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    2. Forgot to add, or you could release small mini-chapters that show one or the minor characters corrupting/transforming another minor character or random person (like show what's happening in the school without showing the main events) and so on.

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    3. I'd like the idea of mini chapters focusing on minor characters or side events.

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  22. You give me nun, demons, and angels and I don't think compensation will be an issue!

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  23. still 59 % :) no 60?

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  24. No way Tethys ends up on the Devil's team. Shinra always keeps the plot twists hidden from the update. My money is on Saga rescuing her and bringing Tethys to her mother. After all the chapter is called the Mother of All.

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    1. We'll see. I really hope the Devil makes her his mistress.
      But Shinra please refrain from using the BDSM/Leather/percing look on her. It's just so silly and doesn't compare with the looks that Lumiel, Lisa or even early corrupted Starlight have had.

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  25. The Fallen Star Ch VIII: The Mother of All

    Part 1. Upload?

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  26. Can't wait. Love your work :)

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  27. A part 1 upload would be great LOL.

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  28. Have you ever thought of making a pay site so that 1) you get good money for making your comics, and 2) hopefully we would get more regular updates?

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    1. I'm considering a few options for the moment

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  29. Whats the current %?

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    1. less than what the current progress bar is stating >_<

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  30. how many Pictures have you made to this point?
    and how many Picture do you think must you do to finish this comic ?
    how many pages do you think will have this comic in the end, approximately?

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    1. A bit more than 800 pics...
      I would say another 600 to go
      +- 500 pages

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    2. is 800 Pictures! but you show us picture 560!
      must you delete so many picture? why? what is in the last time the problem that you are still under 59% ?

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    3. He needed to add more to certain scenes. Any chance of an update soon? I rather see the current % than guess what the % is :(

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    4. I haven't deleted any pictures, it's that, as Anonymous stated, some scenes had to be lengthen in comparison to my original storyboard >_<
      but at the end, it's for the greater good...

      I'll try to catch up my delay over this week end if possible, and if I managed to do that, I'll also try to give you an update on Sunday or Monday

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    5. is that still standing with with the update at so or mo. ?

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    6. Most likely tomorrow rather than today...

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  31. It's not necessarily that we are getting more impatient. I think the fact that now there are more and more fans just makes it look like that.

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    1. More and more fans...I like that ^^
      On the other hand, I understand the frustration it can cause and I'm taking it into consideration for future release.

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    2. Its because there is nothing out there quite like this in terms of quality

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    3. Corruption comics are pretty rare as is, and the quality of this stuff just makes people go crazy for it.

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  32. After all of the EA games that I've played, I'd rather have things done well instead of done quickly so take all the time you need Shinra :)

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  33. to MRsjimsjim , nothing to do with devils and angels instead of some storys but try 3dmonsterstories its 3d based mind break (corruption) genre with monsters aliens etc.
    if you search good hentai try macxes dinarangers you can find it at e hentai, or try erect sawarus work and last but not least lamuros of seven. I know there is more and i dont know if you already know the mentioned artists.

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  34. First time commenter. Wondering in general how people would feel about paying something here. A lot of people think everything should be free on the internet and Shin Ra doesn't want to ruin a good thing.

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    1. It must be reasonable if it is charged. The McComix site is bad because they charge you for updates but not only do you get updates that are few, you get the artists being pressured immensely. If it were to work, I would pay like $3-5 for the entire issue. For the amount of time that goes by, the length, and the quality I think that's fair. For small side issues, $2. I mean it does not sound like a lot but at $5, if 200 people bought it, that is $1000. Problem being people upload it for free or stuff like that. So it is possible and reasonable I suppose

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    2. You're right. There'll be some people who'll buy it to have it as quickly as possible and there'll be people who are willing to support the artist no matter what, but soon enough the entire thing will find its way on e-hentai anyway.
      Almost everything up there is pirated stuff, why would our comics escape that fate?
      It also feels weird to suddenly start asking money for something that has always been free. Much better to keep it like this and let it remain easily accessible for everyone, I say. We have a nice little community here and on the G9 blog that has become this way partly because everything is free. Why risk reducing the fanbase just to earn a little bit of money, only to deal with the frustration of seeing the most recent work freely available on e-hentai sooner than expected?

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    3. On the other hand, say people paid a yearly subscription, say $12 just for a starting point, and there were monthly releases. I would never upload anything anyway, but if I paid for something I'd be less likely to I think, and if Shinra got a fair price for his work, then is it that big a deal if it goes out for free eventually? Nothing to do with Shinra, but overpaying artists makes them lose their drive. They think they have to be perfectionists and it's mistakes that make things interesting. Personally I hate wait 6 to 8 months for releases. Just discussing.

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    4. If we would use these subscriptions, then this would stop being a hobby and becoming work instead. After all, people are paying in advance so they should be getting their comics in return.
      It's a good idea for artists who work more as professionals or for bigger "circles" consisting of multiple artists. But more someone like Shinra (and G9 too) this really is nothing more than a hobby. If they have time to spare, they'll put it into the comic. If not, then that's okay too and the comic will just have to wait. That liberty is what makes it fun for them and what they need to keep doing this.

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  35. maybe you can make a Phenotype transformation change in you comic!
    that would interesting

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    1. what do you mean by phenotype transformation?

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  36. a change in type
    a girl after a accident or something else..
    gets a makeover an new typ.
    that she herself not recognizes!
    or a girl is on the run from some man! and sie makes a complete makeover and a typ change to hide. but the guys catch and...:)
    you don´t need that the girl becomes a slut ( that is not necessary ) just a other typ of woman like the Move
    The Long Kiss Goodnight
    just some thoughts for you and g9.
    ( what do you think of this Comic ideas)
    you knows Gargoyles

    Elisa Maza is hiding from Thanatos on a day light, because she found something out!
    Now hope she, that Goliath can safe her but it is day light and she geht to a hair salon and and make a typ change... but Thanatos Men
    catch her. Thanatos look at her and he was sure what he will do to her! because her don´t wanted to kill her ! so he said: "ok if you like this little makeover game so much, I will help you!"
    And now see get´s a real type change! like changing her sin and mäke her white und and her Eyes get blue and her hair red and much shorter and give her a new voice, new memories...
    And in the evening is Goliath looking for her and he goes to Thanatos!
    so he meets the new secretary of Thanatos:) but he doesn´t recognizes he that it was Elisa! :)

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  37. Will the Demon have an upgrade so he can corrupt devinitively ?
    If that happens can you make him look bigger like the lord of darkness in legend ?

    Are you doing well also ?

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    1. We'll have bigger version of demons, yes ;-)

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    2. I meant the Devil. But I guess he is a demon ?

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  38. how many pictures will you show us? today?

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    1. between 6 and ,9 I guess. Haven't which ones yet.
      These ones will be tough to pick, not too spoil the story too much.

      But unfortunately, this will be for tomorrow >_<
      I haven't finished the scene I'm working on right now, which I'd like to include in the story.

      Promise, Update will be posted tomorrow.
      Gome...

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  39. Hey Shinra,

    Just wanted to offer some thanks for your work. Probably the best in (admittedly small) genre. Take your time as needed. :)

    Re:your overall plans- do you have a planned cycle for how you intend to work each comic in turn? (i.e. FS8 > Harriet Cooper 2 > Yoru 2 > FS9, etc.) I know Fallen Star tends to alternate with one of your other comics and take the bulk of your time as it was your first, your most detailed, and apparently your most popular- going a year without one in order to give your other comics each an iteration would probably upset the fanbase more than having to wait on those others, but I did actually enjoy the shorter ones quite a bit- especially Harriet Cooper- so I just thought I'd ask.

    Thanks again for all your work and best of luck going forward!

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    1. Thank you for your kind words.

      The plan is indeed to work on Yoru 2 and Harriet cooper 2 when I'm done with FS8. Then the 2nd part of Legion will show up as well.

      I know it could be harsh for FS fans, but I also have to please the fan of those other series, such as you, and give a chance to those other project to take off, and why not, become as popular as Fallen Star.

      And the other hand, I will need to take some time away from Fallen Star, as I will have to work on the storyboard of the next chapter and enhanced the script, before I start rendering FS9.

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  40. Got inspired by you to start my own longform series. Learned DAZ quite quickly, didn't have time for all the tech details, but found a few settings that work for me. Outlined a 10 chapter script. Even produced the first few pages. Honestly... they look awesome. This really surprised me, totally expected to fail, but no. I'll probably share them with you at some point in the far future. The problem is: I got a bit discouraged by the insane amount of time the renders seem to take. Especially in detailed enviroments with nice lighting, which look great but take three hours for a single wide shot. Do you have any tips to speed up the renders and thus making the proces less painfull?
    Second question: any tips for wet skins? I tried a few older mods but they didnt seem to work on Genesis 2.

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    1. Eh eh that's always rewarding to know you are inspiring people as a role model ;-p
      Actually, I started the exact same way, when I was looking at shadow rangers, G9's first comic.

      Indeed, Daz is very easy to use, or rather, the latest version of Daz coupled to genesis 2, make a big difference, as it does at lot for you automatically.
      Once you took the time to understand the basic features, 99% of what you will use, you're ready to start. And for the remaining 1 percent, they are for pros or people which have a loooot of time in front of them ^^

      I would say that it should not take that long, unless you tried to use reality and lux render, but the problem could come from a lot of different parameters.
      What I can do for you, is send me a few pics by PM, which specifically took a long time to render. I'll have a look at them and try to discuss with you what you can improve in terms of settings/lighting.
      One thing you have to know, it's that rendering is like risk and money. you don't make a lot of money, if you don't take risk. Same for rendering, you don't get good quality pictures, if you don't get high res. settings, which means a longer time to render. It's a compromise, the better you want you pictures to look, the longer you will have to wait for them to be rendered.

      But do this in PM, it will be easier for back and forth emails, and will avoid us to flood the blog with techie discussion ^^

      I'll answer your wet skin question in PM as well

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  41. Shinra-Kun,

    I discovered "Fallen Star" yesterday. I read all 7 chapters with great enthusiasm. Your renderings are stunning, and the story is awesome!

    The section where Mother Superior, is captured and transformed is one of the most erotic sections in the series, as is the corruption of all of the nuns...truly amazing. I love how you sneak in little goodies...such as the part where the nerdy girl is testing the egg. It is a great homage to the movie "The Sex Files", where the scientist is examining the fungus sample, and becomes an alien version of the original host. In your story, I love how tentacles appear to start, and hopefully finish corrupting and transforming the nerdy girl. It's a nice twist and addition.

    It is apparent that you love what you do, because it shows in your work. I have seen many amazing artists out here in e-land...such as Varnee. Your story is extremely well rendered, very erotic, and keeps people wanting more. You are a true artist.

    Thank you for all your hard work. I look forward to future releases of your work.

    Sincerely,
    J. LaCrosse

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  42. today? 2-3-4 hour? :)

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  43. Hi James,
    It feels like you take as much pleasure to read the Fallen Star, as I have rendering it ;-)
    It's always very pleasant, to see people aknowledge your (hard) work ^^

    To be honest, this scene in the church was one of my favourite so far, tho' it turned out differently from what I had envisioned. Unfortunately, my skills were less good at that time, and if I had to recreate this scene today, I would make it even more memorable ;-P

    The scene with Karin is indeed directly inspired from one of the sex files episode, which had been recommended by my friend the Antjack at that time.

    That's true that, I really like what I'm doing, I'm still learning everyday, and I hope I'll be able to do it for many more chapters.
    And if you have the patience to wait till the Fallen Star saga is over, something even bigger should come ;-)

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    1. My favorite scene was the convent one and Starlight's corruption scene.
      I wished the sex scene was longer and that Starlight was on the verge of transforming for a longer time (not yet corrupted but still enjoying it despite herself).
      But I can't imagine how much better you could make those scenes look now 0_0

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  44. Tick tock tick tock :D

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    1. Hell of a Critic29 April 2014 at 03:06

      Come on now, that's just tacky.

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    2. I meant no offense, i was just joking and also im from a different timezone, so i commented to check how long more was there before the update :)

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    3. Comics too great, everyone can't wait!

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