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Tuesday, 29 April 2014

TFS:8 - Update out of the blue..hum hum

Dear Fans of Corruption, Good Morning/Evening/ Arvo

As you would have understood it, this chapter is going way beyond what I had initially planned.
Despite the fact that, I'm planning every issue to the picture, with a nice and neat storyboard, there's not a single scene which has not to be lengthened >_<

Tho' it's for the greater good, this had led to the progress bar going backward lately, and I know this is not easy to swallow. Gloups.

That's why I'm coming to you today with a new (big) update, a few pics to help you pass the time, elaborate new theory or confirm your suspicions (or not gnark gnark gnark).

To give you a bit of background, I've just finished rendering the 104th scenes out of 190.
It's hard to measure the progress based on the number of scenes done, as some of them are as small as 3 pages, while some are bigger than 30.

I also had one question. 
I feel like there's a massive loss of quality when I export the comic on E-hentai, under the common "comic" format, I mean with several pictures on each pages, like an actual comic book, compared to the quality of the pics I upload here, which are in full resolution mode.
So the first question would be, Is it me or there's actually loss of quality ?
I'm working my ass off to try to get the best quality as I can, it would be a shame to see all those efforts crushed T_T

And directly linked to that, if you ever feel like there's a loss of quality, would you like me to go for another comic format, more like a visual novel, each page consisting of a single 1920x1080 pic?
Let me know what you think, as I may adapt the format for future release.

In the meantime, enjoy those 12 pics...that's not Easter everyday ;-P
Next Update at...70% - otherwise I'm showing you too much >_<

The Oracle...a little bit upset
Ding Ding Ding...Recess is over!

This is my prey!

Obey, my daughter

Ouuuh seems like there're a lot of... but a lot of what ?



We've been really naughty, please punish us...

the return of the prodigal daughter

wooohoooo, open the door!
Hello Mr Director...

A new kind of nun ?

Special Big up if you can guess who this perfect body belong to ^^ (ps: I won't give the answer gnark gnark gnark)

Carla, sexy as hell...



 

146 comments:

  1. That Carla tan looks really great!, shes now my new favorite!

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  2. Carla is also my favorite! Cant wait to see the finished chapter. Keep up the awesome work :)

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  3. Will carla get a new form or outfit if she becomes one of the nine princesses of hell?

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  4. Just another guy29 April 2014 at 06:08

    If the 11th picture is Tethys (you don't have to tell me) I'd prefer she got corrupted through an actual sex scene (with the Devil or another high ranked male Demon) otherwise it's just kind of pointless.

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    1. I am pretty sure she gets corrupted in the red alien pod thing in the supposed 60% Update, this is just a scene, i hope...

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  5. Why don't you just compress all those pages into a zip file, then upload it onto a cloud drive instead of E-hentai?

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  6. duuude seriously you are putting so many pleasurable things into this chapter and i can only imagine what is going to happen in this one. no wonder that it is this huge.
    to the ehentai thing, i didnt notice any loss of quality. but a solution could be that you can upload it there and days later you can do a zip rar torrent data and put it as an extra to the blog. for people that think the quality is better or just prefer it that way. because if you stop uploading it on ehentai i think many people (including me) would go crazy to wait until the download of the data is finished xD
    P.s. it might be that you have actually put something in this chapter that i requested at the far beginning of the blog where i did not had a name, so for everybody in this blog this guy is one of the only comic designer that is remembering many requests and thats impressive. so i dont care how long it will take until this one will be finished i will watch the shit out of it, good work shinra and stay beeing awesome

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  7. 加油画,H3N,永远支持你。

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    1. wat. are you actually chinese or was that a simple google translate?

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    2. 我真的是中国人好吧,我看H3N的博客都要翻墙的,借助别的翻墙软件才能实现。所以很困难,但是就是喜欢H3N和G9的漫画,中国天南地北有好多喜欢他们漫画的人。都在默默支持他们。哈哈。

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    3. oh I know you're chinese, I was asking shinra if he was

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    4. Ahah not I'm not chinese, but I, from time to time, have to go over there for work, so I'm trying not to be illiterate and learn what I can.
      Not easy tho' ;-)

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  8. Hey Lisa !!! She really has changed. She's now half-human, half-demon beast ?
    That's nice.
    And I guess that Lilith kept her promise to her ^^
    And thanks for bringing brown hair girl in pic 3. As I said she's cute !

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    1. He transformation is slowly taking over her, yes

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    2. Don't overdo it. I think she already looks good. If you change her too much we won't recognize her ; )

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    3. I like the violet hue on her skin. looks great.

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  9. The schoolgirls look good and all but Carla is too tanned now. I preferred her before.
    Looks like she had too much time in the UV machine.

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  10. Nice to see the two Sister of Order of Kael Dress like Schoolgirl !:-)
    is lisa tf more in this one?
    Is now "Miss T" becoming a real daughter of A..?
    Will we ever see the face of the Oracel?
    it look interesting that Tethys skin look now like a mannequin !
    or it could be oil!
    but the hand between her legs looks a little bit to unrealistic or is that the hand from someone else?
    I not sure this some the skin color in picture 5!
    or that Zombis girls ?! :)
    but a very good job!!! the only problem is that we must wait now to see the comic :-( :-)

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    1. Nice to see the two Sister of Order of Kael Dress like Schoolgirl !:-)
      yes, very nice picture!
      to Anonymous you think, that the two girls in the pictures 6 and 9 the Sister of Order of Kael are?
      I was thinking the same thing! the right one could be the same as the woman in the middle of the Picture 10!
      and the left one could be the girl from the update 40% the "Nice one" or from picture 3 but now in the School more sexy!:)

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    2. I think they're just school plain (evil) schoolgirl.
      I guess we'll see.

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    3. No, those schoolgirls are not part of the order of Kael.
      It happens at 2 different places.

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  11. Nice!
    In order:
    p2 Back to the school ! (After all this where all began)
    p3 I think I recognize this girl. That's a very nice pose.
    p4 Did I say how much I love the look of Lumiel ? Her corruption form looks so good.
    Arachne I like less.
    p5 I think it's related to p3, don't want to spoil but...an epidemic of naked girls (lol) ?
    p6 Yep schoolgirls, what else is there to say ?
    p7 Lilith and Lisa fun to see how they ended and points for the continuity.
    p9 It's a trap but I can't blame him for falling into it. Maybe he'll become the demon director of an highschool of hell ? That'd be nice.
    p10 Yeah a new kind of nun ! Better to be corrupted ? That's Faye right ?
    p11 Okay, that's new but why not as long as it doesn't take the time between her and the Devil (if I guessed right).
    p12 Yeah...You went too far Shinra. That new tan is too weird. Shame I liked Carla.

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    1. Went to far?!? Wth!

      It's Shinra's comic, he can put and change whatever he likes; it's his story and on top of that we don't even know the context of the change.

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    2. Red skin? Hot. Purple skin? Hot. Blue skin? Sure. God forbid he puts a dark tan on a character.

      There are a couple things in certain chapters that are not to my taste, but you can't expect something this involved and lengthy to completely conform to your exact tastes. Be thankful we even have him, as he's one of the only corruption artists we have.

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  12. Personnally, I would prefer you stay on the comic format, I think it's far more dynamic ... and I do not see any loss of quality ^_^

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  13. What a great new set of pics!! Always nice to see new updates. I like the comic format of showing the art as opposed to each page being a single shot. The comic form I feel allows for you to better emphasis things by showing just that and not a whole scene that might be captured in one large shot. As for noticing the quality between pictures here and E-hentai, I can see a slight change but I don't think it changes greatly to any effect. If it does bother you enough, you could do what others suggested and put it on a zip somewhere; but I would still put it up on E-hentai because a large part of the fanbase might be there and not here reading the blog.

    Once awesome pics to help or destroy my theories on what's going to happen. Keep up the good work!!

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  14. NOOO!!!
    What did you do to Carla ? She looks like Ganguro now !!
    Rest is good but nooooo!!!!!!

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    1. Well carla has the ability to change her appearances so it might only be a one scene thing. Some people do like the tan though, end of the day its still shinras comic ^_^

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    2. Meh, I'm cool with it, she still looks good, though I'm interested to see what prompted the change :)

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  15. Thanks for your support guys.

    Let's first clarify something, I was not questioning the fact of uploading the comics on eHentai or not, I was just talking about the format. No need to freak out, I'll continue uploading the future issues over there, no worries ;-)

    Second point is Carla, that's funny some people think I've change her skin tan because
    I haven't ^^
    she has the exact same skin texture since the first time she appear in the comic in chapter 4. The only time she is different is when she turn into her demon form and has a more alabaster skin.

    I think it comes from the lighting which is way better than it was before, and contradictorily, you can spot all the imperfection more easily.

    But all in all, I like the tan marks of her underwear but I don't like the look and feel of her face. Don't worry I was the first one noticing that strange look her lipstick is giving her with the tan on her face.
    There's only a few picture in which she appear so far, so I think I will try to "rectify" her ;-P

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    1. Whoah...Lightning can change appearances this much ? I really thought she was much less tanned before.

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    2. Have a look at opening scene of chapter 6 ;-)

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    3. Yes, if you get zapped by lightning, you can expect it to have some impact on your appearance. ;P

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    4. She already looks fried >_<

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    5. I have checked. There is a big difference. She looked like a healthy tanned girl but now looks...well black.
      I don't have anything against a character of color but I don't think Carla was one and now she looks weird with the skin tone vs the lipstick and blonde hair.
      That's not an attack btw !!! Just what I think.

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  16. Another set back huh? Hmmm. You know instead of expanding every picture and every issue, it would be better to just release a solid and genuine comic. I mean, make us wait so long for each issue because you keep adding to it can get repetitive and while it may be worth something in the end, this has been a common practice for the past seven issues. Would be best to just set a story plan and stick it, or even if you add, just do small bits and pieces, wouldnt you agree?

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  17. I mean in a sense it is not a small set back, but it goes back like 50-60 pictures. So I mean in the end what do you lose in terms of what you gain? Just a theory though. No point in arguing since you are the person at the helm.

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    1. I won't argue as people will have different opinions on the subject, but just wanted to let you know that, I'm not adding anything to the story, it has been written a while ago.

      That's also not the truth that I've been been doing this for the past 7 issues.
      For each chapter, I had a script and a storyboard detailing each and every pictures to be rendered, and none have been added, so I knew exactly how many pics and pages I had to do.

      For this one, that's a little bit different ^^
      I still have my script and my storyboard, which I'm not being carried away from, but there's a lot of scenes for when I'm rendering them, I feel like they are too quick, too abrupt. So they need a little bit more pics in between, some just to lay some more text and explain the story a bit more, some to have a better transition and avoid scenes where a girl is all dressed up and the next pic, she's naked on all four and moaning...

      And at the end, you may think this is not worth the wait and I won't blame you. On the other side, I'm not gonna apologize, I'm already spending way too much time on those comics >_<

      But don't worry, the message is clear. This will be hard to split the rest of the Fallen Star in smaller issues, but I'll definitely try to stay around 100 pages maximum for all the other chapter of series to come.

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    2. I'm good with making it more complete. There's been a lot of moments in TFS that I wished were longer.

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    3. I can assure you, anonymous, that it's nearly impossible to plan ahead so well for these big chapters to be able to predict exactly how many pics each scene needs to work well.
      Don't forget that Shinra works alone so there is no one around to help him review everything and construct the scenes in advance.
      And no matter how well you plan ahead, when you actually make the pictures, it happens often enough that they turn out different than what you had imagined. Sometimes you're just unable to make what you want, other times you suddenly get a great new idea while making a scene, but in the end, a scene can turn out quite different than what you were originally making. And when that happens, you need to adjust your plans to make the new idea fit, usually with new or different transition pictures.
      In the end, we want to make comics that don't contain parts that we're not happy about because we know we were rushing to get it done in time.
      So much time and effort are put into the comic to begin with, so it's a waste to ignore ideas to make everything even better.

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    4. That is all fine and valid points. But issue is there has to be a way to make the comics quicker to put out yet retain the quality. You can make it as big as you want and I don't disagree with the idea of adding more pictures to show a more fluent stream of pictures, but when the pages keep going up and up and up one has to think why not just release more comic issues instead of book sized issues which will be easier on the artist and also fans will be able to enjoy it more. I just see the comics extending to the point that each issue takes a year to make. Its fine that you do it your way, but this is something that has been plaguing many artists lately, and something worth checking into on the side. Don't take anything away, just dont overextend to too fa stretches of time is all.

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    5. Yes, G9comics is guilty of the same "sin" of making issues bigger and bigger so it's an actual problem that I need to deal with as well.

      No matter how you put it, it's a sound argument to release the next issue earlier with less pages if we notice that we're suddenly adding too many pages. There are usually plenty of climax points in the story where a nice cliffhanger could be created and the words "to be continued" slapped on.

      The only downside to this (and I believe Shinra faces the same problems) is that the balance in the chapter turns out completely different this way.
      Just think of the easy-to-imagine balance of including story, sex, tf, and hooks (creating suspense and questions for the next issue) in each chapter.
      The chapters are planned ahead with this balance in mind. If we suddenly end a chapter at a very different (but way earlier) point in the story, it could mean that that one juicy sex scene or that one epic tf scene gets taken out of the chapter, resulting in an issue that feels lacking to most readers.
      Not everyone is a die-hard follower who is happy with whatever we release and patient (or impatient!) enough to wait for the next book so we want each and every issue to be as juicy as possible, pleasing everyone with each release (and maybe get new readers interested).

      Of course all books combine into one big story, but you should view all seperate books as single, seperate productions that we feel should include everything they were meant to include.
      Needless to say, this still doesn't solve the problem of every reader being forced to wait for so long, but that's why it's such a problem to find a good solution.
      I understand your viewpoint perfectly though. I myself have made the same suggestion to Shinra following the release of the latest Fallen Star chapter (you can read that in the release thread), but it's only after facing the same problems as a comic maker that I discovered that it's a problem that isn't solved so easily.

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  18. is the school impoten for the story?
    how many new characters will you show us in this one ?
    15 or more:)
    has the cocoon a cocoon of the corruption of the orakel and the guy ?
    how long do you think are you need for the rest of the comic a month or more two month or more?

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    1. I don't know how many character, but there will be a lot of side characters.
      Both Angels and Demons have armies.
      We must see them in action if we want the story to be realistic.

      I can't say how long I still need, more than a month that's for sure >_<

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  19. o man that is really a very long corrosion of Tethys will we see her in action in this one also?

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    1. Tethys has a really huge role to play in this story, and people really wanted her to suffer for a long time gnark gnark gnark, so yes I took my time with her :-P

      Hope you guys will like what I came up with for her corruption.

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  20. Now I'm really looking forward to this chapter!
    Keep up the good work and don't let the delayed deadline trouble you any longer! ;)

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  21. Dear Shinra,
    I think the visual novel format is a great idea: it's easier to read and it encourages you to dwell on each and every picture and enjoy them better.
    Thank you so much for your wonderful free comics (although I'm not really a fan of the Galford9-style monster-like transformations you have recently embraced). You're great!

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    1. Typo: it encourages _the reader_ (that is, us)

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    2. P.S.: By "visual novel" format, I meant "single-picture format".

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    3. I agree I think a release with just the single images would be great. Sometimes I find myself missing an image or two in the panel format because some other ones distract me. If uploading to e-hentai would be too much of a pain, a torrent only release would be great.

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    4. Thanks
      I have to admit that I've been going down the monster-like transformation path lately, but G9 has never really done any Monster TF.
      Or I need to go back on G.E Hentai and re-read all the G9 comics ^^

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    5. Glad you see it that way too, Shinra, because I was getting pretty confused myself.

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    6. Monster like transformations are great. Looks more real than just adding a new dress or leather boots ^^. My favorite look has been Lisa. We recognize her but she has a very physical transformation. Also she has a theme that goes with both mental and physical transformation and that's great

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  22. Shinra...Shinra....Shinra!!! Did you say Nuns?!?!?!!?

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  23. I love nuns. Demonic nuns. fuck yeah!

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    1. With a big ass priest-demon reigning over all those sweet ass demonic nuns ^^

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  24. I said other "kind of nuns"...
    Don't get overexcited, I would not want you to be disappointed afterwards ;-)

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  25. Hell of a Critic4 May 2014 at 04:01

    I think it could be interresting to offer the opportunity to have both the comic format on g e hentai and the full resolution pictures to download (maybe through a given link on your site). I did notice that the comic seemed slightly less clear than the teaser pictures we had seen before. Which is probably due to the resizing that you need to do to fit in your comics' pages.
    Either way, even if you decide to give us only the full resolution pictures I'd be okay with it, as it'd allow us to take our time to appreciate the variety and subtlety put in each scenes .

    Concerning the teaser pictures, I obviously think it looks great. I really like the fact that we seem to see much more of the order of Kael and POSSIBLE SPOILER Tethys.

    Like most people I'm kind of baffled by Carla's new skin tone, especially when you say that you didn't change it !?

    But all in all, from what I see, the amount of fan service thay you seem to do in this chapter is enormous and you should be praised for such dedication to your fans.

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    1. oh guys is that such a big Problem for you the skin tone of Carla?
      I think it is fine!!
      if it is such a big problem, than I have two answer to helpe you with that problem
      1. Maybe her skin become Darker in the hell! :) it is very hot there!
      2. Or if you can see in the Picture she is not a (17) old and a teen now and must go to the school! now she is a hot teacher that means that she is older than (17) maybe (27) old that means her skin tone altered in the years! (she tf into that age and into the a hot teacher !)
      If this is the truth, then a tip for H3N, give her a other sexy hairstyle to, that we can better see now she is (27) or (17) or (113) age old :)
      but if this now on that point to much on work!
      than leave it!! if not then make two picture more were she is (17) and then tf she into a hot teacher:)!
      if I wrong with the teacher thing it is only the light or the tone from the hell!

      but I like the I Idea that she is plays now a teacher !

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    2. nice idea with the teacher !
      With her new glasses and her big tits and her "skin tone" and her uniform looks she older !
      a new hairstyle for her new age nice idea !!
      even if I Love her normal hairstyle ! But only for the role as older teacher!
      maybe shorter or a curl or longer or "haar bun" or ...:-)
      now is only missing the teachler stick ;)

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    3. I swear I haven't touch Carla's skin lol ^^
      But as a lot of people were complaining about it, I've changed and toned her skin color down a little bit, so that she still has a tan, but does not have this ganguro look anymore ;-)

      To reply to your remark HoC, in fact, this chapter is maybe one chapter with the less fan service in it. I only have one scene in mind, that has been specially added for a certain someone ^^ (let's hope he will appreciate) + Saga's final form.

      The rest, even if it's hard to believe, was part of the original story ;-)

      As for the comic format, it would give me twice the work to produce both.
      With the software I'm currently using, I'm adding picture and bubbles on pages with already existing templates I've created. If I was going for the single pic format, I don't have the formatting into pages to do, but I would have to manually add all the bubbles with photoshop >_<

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    4. Hell of a Critic5 May 2014 at 07:56

      I hope this certain someone will appreciate ^^
      Concerning the format you decide to put your renders in, I think the choice ultimately is yours to make.
      There are arguments for both, and I think the community is split.
      I for myself would love to experience your renders in their optimal quality but the comic book format does help for the fluidity of the stories. And I would hate to lose that.
      Some of the 3d comics I've seen that only used the "one box per pages" technique felt a little stale and frozen, always using the same angles and not focusing enough on the expressions of the characters.
      And of course there is the question of which methode gives you the most work.
      So...yeah...I can't help you...Good luck ! XD

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    5. Another idea would be to continue to release the comic in its current multiple pic per page format, and release the full resolution renders with no text. Keeps the current format for those who prefer it but also makes available the better resolution pics for those who want them, without adding a ton of work for you. I imagine many here would be interested in seeing the full resolution images for previous chapters if you still have them and made them available.

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  26. is that a female school?
    Oh man I would love to see the two girls before Carla has her hand on them!
    maybe the right one has a black or blonde hair and normal hairstyle and the other girl has a hair plait and after a "some days" the girls look like that!

    I think this will be the best comic of yours ever!
    If I think on the girls of Arachnea or the tham nuns or...
    I hope the we see a lot of the Corrupt girls, and not like the last time that we musst wait to see lot of not satisfied storys!
    This was not nice from you 2 or 3 the that was ok but not like that!
    I hope not that you plan is to put a lot of girls into spider cocoons so that we will see then in the next comic, when they come out!

    ps. has the "cocoons" im hindsight a big meaning of the Corruption of the oracle and Zell or were they just holding them and make they sleeping and weak ?

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    1. The story would not be interesting nor believable, if I was corrupting all the angels in one go and without any resistance from their side ;-)

      And no, the cocoons have no corruption power, just make them weak.

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  27. Maybe the two girls are some former nuns of the sister of perpetual indulgence ( ps. why has you take this name? have you contact to this type of humans ? :) )

    or they two girls, was the former Police women and saleswoman! there are similarities!

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    1. He already said the two girls are just normal (corrupted) schoolgirls.

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    2. Ahah I was searching for a good name for my convent, and I remembered this article I read about those very sympathetic sisters of perpetual indulgence. Do not see any mockery in this, I just thought it was a good name to depict a freedom-loving convent ^^

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  28. now Carla transformed into her older self!??
    nice idea, but is it true??
    H3N can you say something about it ?

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    1. Euh I've never said that.

      Some of you must hear my voice when they're dreaming ^_^
      Youhouuuu, it's Shinra the sandman talking to you...
      I'm gonna tell you all the major spoiler of the next chapter...
      but don't worry, you won't remember when you'll wake up...
      Carla is in fact an angel, disguised in demon to infiltrate hell.
      So yes she is a teacher, because it's well known that, in Fallen Star, all the teachers like Miss-T, are in fact high ranked angels.
      Carla is just waiting for a good opportunity to revert back to her old(er) self and back-stab the devil, uncorrupt all the poor corrupted girls, and come back as a hero in heaven. They all lived happily ever after. The end.

      Aahaaaa, you think I'm joking but this might be the real ending, who knows...:-P

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    2. The Corruptor5 May 2014 at 02:18

      You just killed me you know ^^

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  29. Plz Plz, Shinra-Kun, let the demon takes the control, dont let him become useless. he is my favorite character

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    1. Why would I let him rot in hell, or become useless?
      I know he may have'nt been involved directly, but the whole scheme is his evil deed. After all, he's the main protagonist, and rest assure, we're not done with him ;-)

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    2. Thanks you!

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  30. A bit selfish but will we see a new update for the 60% line?

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    1. No, he said it would spoil too much so we all have to wait for another 10%

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  31. Just another guy10 May 2014 at 00:21

    60 % !!!!
    Oh wait,

    ^^

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  32. dear Shinra please tell me you are going to change the way Saga looks? Please give her some proper heels like those of Lumiel ..

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    1. yes Saga will reach her final form in this chapter ;-)

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  33. I love the corruption you did lately. More organic and physical. I love what you did with the arms of Mariach or the skin of Lisa (+ slightly more make up on the face etc...)
    Last thing did you ever think about doing some pregnancy ? I'd love to see some angel become one of the wife of the devil and become his pregnant wife .

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    1. And this is the kind of corruption I'd like to improve myself on. I have a lot of stuff in mind for my next big comic but unfortunately I still lack some skills >_<

      Pregnancy has already been asked several times, but unfortunately, there won't be any corruption of that kind. The story is slowly coming to an end, and one heroine becoming pregnant of the devil or others, would require some deeper developments, developments which I don't have room for, in what remains of the story to be told.

      In the meantime, it does not mean it's a lost cause for other project ^^

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    2. That's some hard, hard news but you let a sliver of hope shine through.
      You give good arguments so...I'll have to wait for it in another project.

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    3. That's a shame.
      But I guess there always is the your next project.
      Hope I'll still be alive by then ^^

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    4. As long as it's well done !
      Not glossed over but showing how the young independant heroine becomes really dependant of the villain and being his hot wife/queen.
      She wouldn't have to look pregnant all the time. At first it would be really hot to see her realize it and not knowing what to do, not telling anyone.
      and despair about the fact. Especially if it's a heroine that's not likely to be knocked up (either a young independant or cute type).
      That shouldn't be the only reason she turns evil but it could play an important role. Like, she's so confused and lost that she accepts the demon/villain to corrupt her just because she's shameful of being pregnant (she wouldn't have told her friends the demon got to her and had sex) and doesn't know what to do as she would be having a half demon spawn.
      Once corrupted she would embrace it and become his hot demon wife, corrupting other innocent heroines.
      That's my perfect scenario.

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    5. O man some of these commentaries should never become a psychologically investigate ! guy is everything ok with yourselves??

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    6. It's this guy's fantasies. Everyone have them.
      Only in this type of comics do they realize themselves. Anybody who thinks that's something that could/should happen in real life should get himself/herself checked. But here it's catharsis (check it out) and it's pretty healthy.
      You're the one who has a problem if you don't understand that.

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    7. Just another guy16 May 2014 at 05:22

      His scenario sounds good to me (:-)

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  34. Will HC come after this or will it be Yoru No Majin?

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    1. I'll work on Yoru and HC at the same time 50/50
      But, most likely, HC will be release first...Not because I want HC to prevail on Yoru or because I like HC better, but just because the next chapter of HC is tiny, I would say around 50-60 pages.

      Now let's not talk too fast, as both project have their dose of challenges >_<

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    2. Is the new succubus going to have different look from the 1st succubus? Like outfit, or different skin tones.

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    3. I loved the first Succubus transformation but I found the jewelry and outfit added after a bit unnecessary and gaudy.

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  35. has lisa a little meaning in the next story?
    will she transform more in this one?

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    1. No Lisa barely appears in this one.
      She might have a role to play in the future tho' ;-)

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  36. have we seen this schoolgirl before and have there a big meaning for the story?
    I think the the woman in picture 11 is not Tethys !!!
    I think it will be the oracel!
    O Man 9 % to the next update :( ;-)

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    1. Yes, but I think next Update will worth it ^^

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    2. yes to what?

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  37. are you finished with "Miss T" or will she also become a "update"?
    If she can hear the voice of the angels that means it is still good in her?
    what is she now? How many percent of what?

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  38. angel 20%
    demon 39%
    monster 41%
    :)

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  39. From the previous story starlight changed her looks and maybe even powered up, does she have an important role in this chapter?

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    1. there's not s lot of scene dedicated to her i this chapter, but yes, she will have an important role to play in the last part of the chapter ;-)

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    2. will we see her update (look and power) in this one or is she hiding her new look for the devil and for us as well?

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    3. Yes, she's revealed in this one

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  40. Im really liking how picture 737 is shaping up. Looks like these two lovely students have something under their skin :)

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  41. A simple question in hopes of a really simple answer.
    Do you think you will be able to finish the chapter by the end of June?

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    1. To keep it simple, and without going into the details...It's unfortunately unlikely to be finished by the end of June >_<

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    2. What about july?

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    3. Unless the chapter is really close to be finished, July will be as hard as June. I'll be on holidays for 3 weeks, I'll have my laptop but won't be able to render a lot.
      August would be a better pick, I guess

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  42. has the "Order of Kael" a big meaning for the next comic and for the story?
    or is it more like the "sisters of perpetual Indulgence" too bring Faithful servant too the hell ? Maybe Arachnea can also catch some of them, for her army!!
    or is the "Order of Kael" more like a fourth force in the story?

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    1. Mmmh No,
      the order has a more powerful meaning than the convent of sisters.
      I would not say much, to avoid spoiling the story, but it will have its role to play

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  43. will we see Vipra in the next "Legion", or was she she only a villain and we will see her in some future comic of "Legion"?
    Is "Rachel" I mean " Hexxia" now the big villain or will become the big villain, or is there someone behind like the a "dark Emperor" the power behind?
    Or i the story more like, the Heroes be infiziert by a dark power and become the new villains and now they fight and infiziert the old villains?

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    1. Let me answer your post in the appropriate section, the Legion page ;-)

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  44. You told us, in the last comic that this Comic, will we see alot about Saga in this one! but in you update there are not so many Picture over her, cut it by that she will become a udate in this one and you wants show us? Because it will be a surprise how sie will look!

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  45. 64 % !
    Is it a real 64 % rendering or does it need to have its dialogues written yet ?
    I like the teasers pics btw. I get the feeling the universe is building with characters reappearing (the nuns, Lisa, Maria, Justine...) even the ones that are just cameos.

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    1. It's a real real 64% ;-)
      I'm adding the text, FX effects, and post-work corrections as I'm rendering the pictures. What's left when I have rendered all the pics is the cover, and what I call the edition, which is correcting all the mistakes, spelling, typos, and poke through. and then we're done ^^

      Indeed, a few characters are doing their comeback, and that's also the reason why this chapter is that big, there's a lot of characters to play with ;-)

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    2. how many real new characters has this comic?
      and how many besides characters will have that comic like the girl that hidden behind the trash!
      Are she like the girls in the ceremony in (The Fallen Star Ch. 6: Guardians p. 148... ) will we she some of that girl again like the Police Woman and the saleswoman? or has this girls her part in the story?

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  46. O man, almost have I not recognized Tethys as a Schoolgirl, but the similarities with the right girl in picture (6 and 9) is very big and good!! nice idea that her hair band becomes paar of her hair color!

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    1. And the other one is Rama! Because if something is happen too Tethys, it happen too Rama also, they are connected with each other:-)

      But I must admit the Schoolgirl has the same mouth, eyes, nose and body structure as Tethys a new hairstyle and the body color is brighter! but this could be the light or has something to do with her veins!

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  47. Could we get that kind of corruption for a heroine transformed by or having a sex scene with a demon ?
    http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/InCase/224288/Commission-Forest-fucking

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  48. I mean that kind of savage sex scene.

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    1. Actually, yes and no...^^

      No because, this exact scene is not planned in the Fallen Star, not with a centaur in this case.

      And Yes, because this exact scene is planned in my future big project after Fallen Star ;-)

      ahahaha

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    2. That's more of a big ass satyr than a centaur (he's just got two legs).
      And I meant just the idea of enormous, towering demon/satyr/man pounding a cute girl silly.

      Pregnancy is a very nice addition if you can.

      And after Fallen Star ?! What will it be 3/4 years ?!
      That's harsh but you ensured yourself a faithful fan ! Was it the plan all along ?!

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    3. Yes I know, actually, I made the mistake on purpose for a specific reason, which you will understand when you'll see this new comic, and most of all if you can remember my comment in 3/4 years time ;-p

      Joke aside, I really hope it won't take another 3 years to finish the fallen star, as we are slowly going toward the end. Only 3 chapters to go after this one, and they should not be as enormous.

      I don't really want Fallen Star to end, as I really enjoy what I did with this universe, but in the meantime, I'm really looking forward to start on this other project.

      Plan is first finish off this big chapter then alternate chapter 2 of Yoru, H.C and Legion, with the rest of the Fallen Star coming right after.

      I also understood the frustration of all the fans having to wait, and wait and wait for each chapter. So after this one, I'm gonna try another model when it comes to release chapters. we'll see ^^

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    4. Sounds interresting. I don't know what to think about your comment about centaurs though.
      I like the idea of a big, male anthropomorphic creature fucking the heroine but a centaur sounds very impractical. Also their sex scenes look really different than the way we do it. Harder to identify with.

      But I'm nitpicking what you plan sounds good.

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  49. Will the 70% update come this week?

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    1. I still have exactly 37 pics to render, before we hit 70%.
      So yes, I would say that an update is likely to be posted somewhere this week ;-)

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  50. today maybe?

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  51. how many pics have you to render now? for 70%

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  52. Will the 70% update hopefully be posted by tomorrow?

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    1. today or tomorrow, Yessss!

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    2. hehehe 69 hehehe... i can't belive i did that :(

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    3. eh, somebody had to :)

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  53. Who will be the main focus in this 70% update ?

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  54. today maybe?

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  55. today? one two .. hours?

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    1. still nothing
      here I am refreshing every fifteen minutes

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    2. :-) o man

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  56. Thanks, Shinra!

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  57. how many picture?

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