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Monday, 9 December 2013

TFS:8 - 20% Update

Alright Boys,

It's time for another "Fallen Star" update, Yeaaaaaah !

I think I've been working quite good lately and the first big (read long) scene of this chapter is now done, and I'm happy to start working on some other scene. Now the real fun should start !

90 pages have already been rendered, it's quite a lot but remember, a lot will happen in this chapter.
And no, it doesn't necessarily mean a lot of corruption/transformation * wink * wink *

So this update may look a bit bland as this one was really hard to pick pictures without spoiling too much.

Hope you'll enjoy them.











83 comments:

  1. Nice update.
    My expectations from this chapter are a full corruption on Tethys and Leto and of course a release as soon as possible.

    There are several questions that I'd like you to answer:
    Is every angel character going to get corrupted?
    Are you going to kill some of them?
    Is the Oracle a main character - will she get corrupted too or she was just part of Lumiel's story.
    When can we expect the full chapter?

    And my main question - last year you were able to release chapter 5 in October and chapter 6 in December. Why can't you do that now? I enjoy all your works but the main reason why I browse this site is The Fallen Star.

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    1. Thx
      I'll try to answer the questionwithout spoiling too much.

      No they won't get all corrupted, some will have different fate>
      Some of them may die, but they are angels, can we really kill angels ?!
      Yes the Oracle is on a main character, so she'll come back for sure. she won't have a lot of appearance in next chapter tho'

      As skittle summarize it quite, even tho' I'm going way faster than before to render comic those ones get bigger and bigger and more and more complex >_<

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    2. Disappointed that all the angels won't be corrupted.
      I hope at least Tethys and Leto will. That's a must be.
      Still, I think I can deal with one of the male angel not being corrupted .
      If you corrupt Zeliel or Hyperion...I hope his relationship with the other angels before will play a role when he goes to corrupt them.
      I'm disapointed when a character gets corrupted and isn't the same person at all after.
      I hope there will be some couples formed even on the evil side. That the person corrupted get "attached" to her corrupter. Otherwise what's the purpose of it ?
      Starlight/The Devil ; Lumiel/Zeliel...
      I still can't understand why the Devil corrupted Starlight if it's for her to turn against him.

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    3. First they don't get corrupted for specific reason ^^ but don't take this comment to seriously, I'm not gonna reveal such important info that easily ;-P
      secondly, I haven't introduce love affairs and relationship just for the fun, again it's all for specific reason. They will play their role in the story.

      As for Starlight and the Devil, it's true they're sharing a special relationship but that's because I don't like mindless sex slave or the heroine madly in love with her tormentor. She's the queen of hell, she's malicious, she's cunning, and at hell's court, they're plotting not playing in the sand. She's not happy and she's showing it.

      But I already say it a million times ^^ the devil is the big bad villain and...the big bad villain is always right of course ;-)
      The king of hell won't let his prey go rogue that easily.

      Again, each step at a time, everything won't happen in this chapter and the story still has things to unfold

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    4. Good !!
      But wouldn't it be Zeliel/Oracle as he well,was her first...everything ?
      I'd love that evil couple. In fact I can see Zeliel corrupting 2 or 3 female angel for himself.
      But the devil should keep Starlight and get the rest of them and maybe some of the angels stationned on earth

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    5. Anonymous2 here,
      Thanks for your response
      Of course I'm not into the mindless sex slave thing it's kind of boring and not very corruption-like anyway.
      But if well done,I'd realy like to see the heroine once corrupted both "madly in love" with the corruptor and an evil lustful creature, showing only sadism and cruelty to the innocent.
      Doesn't mean you have to lessen the character or anything.

      If the corruptor in question introduced the heroine to darkness I can understand her getting attached to him as he is the one who made "her" into what she is.

      Me, If I put myself in the shoes of the villain I'd like to take the sweet sexy and yet innocent heroine and corrupt her to reveal her "sexual side" so that she becomes my own concubine.
      Obviously it's not possible in the real world so that's why I hope to see that in your comics. The big villain just taking the heroine and making her his through savage sex we'd all love to be able to do.

      Sorry I've written so much. Hope you will understand me and that I wasn't too crude or unimaginative.
      Of course you have to do your story well for the elements I mentionned to create any emotional response. So do it the way you want.
      Just wanted to mention what I like in corruption comics.

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  2. @guy who posted above me.

    if you take a look at the chapters you'll notice they keep getting larger and larger, secondly shinra is now working on multiple projects unlike last year. Also he has a life outside of these comics :D

    keep up the good work shinra it's looking good.

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    1. I didn't mean to be offensive or anything, I just asked a simple question. There is no denial in that every new chapter looks better than the previous one.

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  3. Oh very nice update!
    Thank you !
    and thanks, to see Emika again :) with black hair very nice and a nice outfit !
    and karin looks also very interesting!
    What is with picture 6 why is "Miss T" cover her mouth or is someone other in on that picture ?
    Is picture five the evil Queen or someone from the hell?
    bedecken
    Do you think that you will make it to 30% before the 24 ;o)

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    1. This is not Emika. She'll come back in this chapter but a little bit later.
      She's not covering a mouth but rather removing her blindfold ;-)

      I'm gone for 2 weeks of holiday as from the 20 so I don't think I'll have the time for another fallen star update before Christmas T_T

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  4. has tethys a picture 2 a vibrator between her legs ? :)
    nice update ! Lots of Questions! but answer first the other
    Questions;)

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    1. I really want to know that too :P

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    2. Of course it's not a vibrator!
      ...
      It's where she keeps her bazooka!

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    3. looks like a dildo:)

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    4. As always guys...you should listen to the wise answers of MpGrey ;-)

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    5. dont know how u cud fit it in but it wud b awesome if tethys was 'addicted' to sex toys n always had a vibrator in her that saga controlled n she'd make it vibrate at bad times like in group meetings. can picture tethys havin a little frustrated orgasm while saga's behind her with a knowin grin on her face. wud b hot.

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  5. ooooh karins transforming look at those eyes n that horn!!! cannot wait for next update (or the whole thing tbh)

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  6. This all look very well done .
    By the way p3: Game of thrones reference much ?
    p7 looks amazing also. I think the corruption's look is really getting to the next level.
    The skin itself getting transformed instead of giving new clothes and calling it done is just great and much more realistic.
    Finally p4: yeahhh !!! Sexy time. Wanted to see a sex scene with a girl getting it from a big bad demon from some time now.

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    1. Fly my dragons !!!
      Yes I'm trying to make the corruption more "visible" and deeper to their core

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  7. the "Emika" outfit looks like a snake outfit ;P

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  8. When will you give us, the latex lovers something? Maybe some girl will get corrupted like the black form of the teacher from the last chapter. And the powers will be something like Alex Mercer's .. changing her hands the way she seem fit.

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    1. Just latex might be boring...

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  9. is in picture 5 someone coming to a portal or is that a transformation of someone?
    look very nice all of this pictures!

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  10. 90 pages at 20%, so that means we shall expect 300 pages roughly at the end?!

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    1. answer!!!
      Euuuh if I say this now, people are going to kill me...
      The storyboard is not totally finished, so I can't tell you exactly how many pages or pics, but according to my calculations...over 500 pages >_<

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    2. yes between 450 - 500 pages should be a more accurate answer

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  11. In Picture 2 will Hanu tell the other angel the Karin is missing after she spoke with Lighhouse "Miss T" and that she has a "antidotes" for the Dark matter! and on this point the angel are fighting back! But Tethys looks not really straight, something must happen to her on the earth!! :)
    oh man !
    Next update in too weeks or earlier !
    90 Pages? not 100 Pages? I think it will be more then 500 Pages!?

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  12. nice update !
    is that Emika in the first picture?

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  13. Probably some random civilian hiding

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    1. don't look like that! Look her clothes! normal Street clothes??
      and look closer to her face, it look like Emika, but a little more... I don't know "Corrupt"! no longer the nice girl from next door ;-) !

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    2. Nope doesn't look like her.
      Emika was blonde with glasses + tatoo. That's not very girl next door. She already had a little punk look that was very nice.
      The picture is too much of a change.
      Anyway we'll wait and see. I migh like to see Emika again and see how she evolved since the shattering evil orgasm she got. But it's not a reason to see her everywhere.

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    3. first the tattoo is on the left side and not on the right side ! so that you can not see the tattoo on this picture ! and I know, that she is Blood, Saga hair as angel
      are Brown but as monster she has a other color! Ok this girl has not glasses and...! what is with karin that is not a good argument !

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    4. Will see when th comics comes out

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  14. is the foot on picture 5 a creature of monster or Demon or ... ?
    and is it a "New" corrupt or tf person?

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  15. Yeah among the rest, your corruptions are getting better and better Shinra !

    I have a proposition if you're still open for ideas. The Devil/Lucifer (does he have another name ?) manages to augment his power by somehow reproducing the monster transformation on himself. He might have sent Saga to the mother to observe how to do it. He becomes this "super demon" thanks to this (maybe bigger badder and darker than he was before) and then goes to reconquer Starlight definitely. Maybe impregnating her in the process (I know some people on the blog fancy the fetish). It serves his plan as it allows him to create a strong "royal family" strong enough to keep the throne of Hell.
    Then, a contest of will and power with Arachnae that he ends up killing (she's ugly anyway) allowing him, for the first time, to reign both over Hell and the monster realm. This way he can finally face heaven with the necessary forces.
    His aim of a "balance" now restored he can proceed to make it tip into his favor by using the agents already in Heaven now back into his cause.

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    1. arachnea ugly ?
      Poor her ! she was just wondering if she should register for Miss Heaven 2014 >_<

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  16. That last one has me uber excited! :)

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  17. What a great new update!! Very excited for what has been shown especially the plant/monster with Karin. Pic #7 with the great skin detail looks especially great. I didn't comment on the HC update but those also looked great. So is that Emmika in pic #1 or just random person caught up in Saga and Tethys battle?

    Another question a little off topic though, has Yoru No Majin stalled out? It's been sitting at 10% for awhile and every other project has more or less passed it...

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    1. No Yoru has not been stopped,
      Chapter 2 should be a big bigger, so the plan is to release H.C first cause it's a tiny chapter, then I will start to work on Yoru again.

      Experience has now taught me I can't really work on more than 2 comics at a time >_<

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  18. nice update!
    the only thing is, the little horn of karin I don't but if it is Growing over her head but very close on her head too her neck ( spinal column) this will be looking cool!
    Just a idea, you are the artist ;- )

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  19. Pics so far look great! Karin's transformation is especially intriguing. Will there be some degree of breast expansion in the corruptions for this chapter? Especially Karin's?

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    1. I tend to grow them bigger when I'm corrupting girls, so I guess some sort of breast expansion yes

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  20. im wondering if miss t truly is workin for arachnia (or for how long), she may be loyal cos of the blood but there may be a way to nullify that. i feel a lot if twists coming on.

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  21. Thanks Lou !
    Thanks Roland Plaß !

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  22. Great new skin on p7 Shinra!

    Also, any chance of chopping this Chapter in half? 500 pages is super awesome (more story!), but the waiting period prolly less so.

    PS: loved the sideline with the family in the last one, missed the nuns a bit. Anything that gets back to the 'normal' people on the ground is great for scaling the epicness. Might be fun to return to the school and see some lingering corruption effects in that place.

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    1. Agreed chopping the chapter in half wouldn't be a bad idea.
      I can easily deal with 250 pages

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  23. will the girl in picture one tf into a monster?

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    1. Maybe...
      She's among monsters and Demons, that' for sure ;-)

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  24. Is karin becoming now, one of the new, nine Princess of Hell?
    have or will we meet, one of the old nine Princes"s" of Hell or are they really dead?
    have you plan to create new one?
    have the nine Princes"s" of Hell samething to do this the "relationship"or opinion differences between Leto and Rhea or is Hyperion olso a part of this story ?
    and has the thing of the island something to create new Princes"s"?

    Was Arachnea one of the Princess? the Princess or Mother over the monster! Karin looks now like the Princess over the plants! >_<

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    1. Arachnea is the mother of all Monsters, she's not related to demons no.

      The theme around the Princes and princess of hell will come back at some point in the story. I haven't thrown this in the game for nothing ;-)

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    2. have the nine Princes"s" of Hell samething to do this the "relationship"or opinion differences between Leto and Rhea or is Hyperion olso a part of this story ?

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    3. you'll know more about this at the end of this chapter and beginning of chapter 9 ^^

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  25. hey shinra just a suggestion for you to cinsider. if you decide to make a promo image like the 2 miss t's or the girls of hell image wud u be able to film it being made from scratch n post it here (or somewhere) so us fans of your work can see how hard you work for free, may get those ppl who complain about how long it takes to be more appreciative.

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    1. I may try some day
      good suggestion ;-)

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    2. i've seen it done by an artist called lemonfont n he uses livestream but i dont know how it works

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  26. when is Legion: Thrall of the Mask 2 coming out?? > _-

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    1. chapter 2 storyboard is still being written, so I can't really plan anything before this part is done

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  27. i cant wait till the next FALLING STAR because i want to see what the corruptions of the ORACLE, & the pod corruption of KARIN..ESPECIALLY THE ORACLE & KARIN (because they both seemed & represented purity that couldn't be turnes evil..)....they looked mighty yummy......THEANTJACK

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  28. That notion of sex being taboo prescribed to by nuns I think is a big part of your appeal, no?

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    1. what is taboo is always appealing ;-)

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    2. hmmmn..thats the whole appeal of corruption/moral change/mindcontrol in a nutshell..the harder it is for evil to take one over, the much sweeter it is when a heroine,female finally gives in..the appeal of Shinras FS comics are that he doesn't instantly corrupts a character...he builds up on it..(the best for me)..that's what sets his out from among the rest, from a (lets say) Uzobono, & Mccomix, where there characters are instantly converted all the same way & very monotonous...

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    3. & if you love nun corruption? (First) Shinra's Falling star chapter 5 must read/see then there's xMLx DEVOTION (sizzling hot) http://www.hardsextube.com/video/2147851/SHINRA-KUN-YORU-NO-MAJIN-THE-TOWER-OF-SIN-BONUS-xMLx-DEVOTION--UPDATE http://g.e-hentai.org/g/650164/761bfe586d/ & also..there's (THE CONVENT OF HELL) http://www.xvideos.com/video2917906/nun_corruption-female_possession-_the_convent_of_hell_ check them out....those are how corruptions are done...

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    4. Definitely 2 of my favorite comics as well.
      That's a shame Devotion has not been progressing a lot lately >_<

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  29. is there some update coming before christmas?:)

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    1. should have one for H.C normally
      not sure if I will have done another 10% on Fallen Star till there >_<

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    2. I know you can do it! We believe in you, Santa!

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  30. next time you show us some picture of island of mayira i mean not the island more the order of kael ! ps you know what kael means ?

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    1. I just want Shinra to tease us with either Leto's or Tethys' corrupted form. Just like he did with Lumiel in the last chapter or Lilith in the fifth one. That's all I want for Christmas.

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    2. Yes next update should have a few pics of Moyira Island.
      It's a bit early for Tethys or Leto's corruption tho'
      But I'll try to make something

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    3. Take your time. Don't rush your work just to make a teaser.

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  31. I just hope you have something good in the bag for Tethys. I kinda want to see an amazing transformation from a noble fighter to a vile *whatever you will do about her* !

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    1. yes I have something good in my bag for her or at least I really like what I'm gonna do with her in this chapter. Hope you'll like it as much as me guys ^^

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  32. last 4 days 20% ?

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    1. C'mon let him breath a little.

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    2. Too much *real* work lately >_<

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  33. Read some of your comics, really enjoyed most of them (HC, Yoru No Majin...). Kudoes for the dialogues in Thrall of the Mask by the way. Pretty good.
    Now I'm just giving you my humble opinion, if you care for it, on what could be improved in your comics:

    Concerning the corruption, while they are the nicest in their style, I'd advice not to add to much accessories in it. It might seem strange but I have some reasonable reasons:

    + It distracts from the transformation itself. Too much accessories (bracelets, piercings...)
    just confuses the reader I believe.
    + If I understand right, the corruption transform the person physically so why would she have clothes armor or even jewelry apparing on her ? How did she get them ? Is it part of her power set ? Example: I don't get how Saga keeps having her armor apparing on her when she turns back into her demon/monster self. Contrary to Lumiel it isn't a organic/symbiotic "armor" that seems to be part of her. It just...bothers me. Plus, as I said it's jst distracting from the main transformation and looks just added for the sake of it.

    I'm obviously nitpicking. Your comic is great and It's just a small thing I observed.

    Concerning HC (that is coming next I believe) I'd advice you not to be afraid to sometimes put more dialogue. I saw some pages (sex scenes for exemple) without it which is something to avoid in any graphic novels. Even though it might seem silly, we need text to understand what happens in the mind of the characters. Also if you can make someone else check for spelling mistakes.
    Here you go, happy holidays !



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    1. Thanks for your review. It's always appreciated when people take the time to properly formulate their opinion.

      For the dialogues in Thrall of the mask, all the credits goes to MasterShake, but I have to admit that the way I positioned bubble speech was really good as well ;-)

      Regarding the corruptions, bah I'm getting better but they're far from perfect. I guess I still have room for improvement.

      In my humble opinion, the dialogues are the major dowfall of HC >_<
      They can be really blant at some point, and I know this is something that could prevent this serie to become more popular, so yes this is something I have to discuss with JnightShade.

      And last but not least, spelling mistakes and grammar will as from now be checked by a super grammar guru so it should get better ;-)

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  34. too bad you are leaving on the 20th. We won't be able to see the next update before the new year. ;/

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