In this chapter, the pace of sthe story is a bit slowed down before the next big events to come.
A transition chapter ? Not at all !
This issue brought a whole bunch of challenges, challenges which become tougher and tougher with each chapter but I definitely hope this one will worth the wait !
I'll finish this brief introduction by massively thanking Hell Of a Critic for his commitment to proofread the chapter and offer you an even better experience ! Thank you HoC !
And I think I can also thank you all for your "patience" let's call it like that ^^
Do not forget...this comic is free...but above all, contains content which is only suitable for adults 18+ !!!
All 3D models in this comic are 18+ years old intended.
I also hope this whole thing with the FBI anti pervy squad was a joke....nowadays, we never know...
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new to site...not sure if there is a new place to post...disappointed in the apparent direction the fallen star is going. Seeing the angels falling one by one, and so easily. I guess I'm to Victorian for this comic. God should release the true power in the Light Bringer, which would purify her soul and body, allow her to redeem Saga and the Oracle, destroy the spider queen, and redeem her sister. Judging by others posts, seems everyone wants to see hell win, take over earth, corrupt or kill the final guardians and for heaven to fall. Thats a real feel good ending...smirks. At least the comic is quite well done, but at this point and judging by the ending of 7 at least two more angels are about to fall. Corruption versus Redemption...and God seems strangely silent in all this.
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i still have 20 % :(
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ReplyDeleteShinra I love you, have my babies.
holy hell that's a slow upload!
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Delete15 pages by 15 pages >_<
you can actually upload a rar file...
DeleteThx waterlas I've never noticed you could do that but I will definitely look for it for my next comics
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ReplyDeleteHow are you guys tracking the progress?
ReplyDeleteat the bottom of shinra's post is a upload percent
DeleteI'm an idiot, I thought you guys were seeing something on g hentai. Thanks for the tip.
Deleteapparantly uploading there is a giant pain in the ass, though
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ReplyDeleteAnd then it stays at 95%. You're just toying with our emotions, Shinra-Kun.
ReplyDeleteHouse to myself for several hours. Let the fapping commence. :P
ReplyDeletejust hoping this joke with the FBI on the previous post was actually a joke...don't wanna end up getting sued for a stupid comic >_<
ReplyDeleteIt was a joke. There is no reason for you to be sued for anything in this comic.
Deleteany chance you could link that comment I can't see it anywhere.
DeleteIt could only be a joke, actual FBI agents wouldn't identify themselves or give any clues that they're about to do something.
DeleteYou're fine dude.
Nah your fine they aren't interested in anything like this don't worry mate
DeleteThat's what motivated my caustic reply to that original comment, Shinra-Kun (I was Anonymous, but no longer). It was just some shithead making a shithead reply; you'll find that throughout the internet.
DeleteBut no, there are much bigger things concerning the FBI than your comic, like stopping terrorist bombings.
Not only that, but there's nothing illegal in your comics.
DeleteThe guy was trying to be funny with a smartass comment with no actual bite or foundation, don't give it a second thought man.
The FBI only have power/jurisdiction with in the US and in relation to US federal offenses. An online comic even one as epic as your wouldn't come up on their radar. As the others above have stated the OP was trying to make a comment that they felt was funny/tongue in cheek and in my opinion the failed miserably
DeleteI don't think there are any laws that forbid raunchy comments. And even if that would be the case, there's MILLIONS of them on the net, why would they target you?
ReplyDeleteThis 5% is torture.
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ReplyDeleteyou can actually upload an rar file in the future, shinra...
ReplyDeleteJust to make it clear, g e hentai allows you to upload rar...you don't need to upload pic by pic
Deletewill definitely look at it next time ;-)
DeleteFUCK YEAH!!!!!!!! THE WAIT IS OVER!
ReplyDeleteCould we get a .rar file to download in addition to the g.e-hentai one? It'd make reading the comic a lot easier. Something shared on Rapidshare or some place like that.
ReplyDeleteI will add a torrent on g.e-hentai tomorrow
DeleteGreatest thing I have ever read you are simply amazing Shinra
ReplyDeleteThank you Sanguinius
DeleteHey Shinra-Kun. Just finished your latest chapter, and I really liked it, as always. It did fall a bit flat for me, though, in that the story seemed to move really, really fast. That wouldn't have necessarily been bad, but I was kind of disappointed by the corruptions/transformations. I was hoping for a transformation a bit more noticeable -- I was expecting one of the chicks to turn into that spider woman. I would say Maria's corruption was the most extreme, and it's the one I like the most. Most of the time, corruptions just mean a change to sexy clothing, which I'm not complaining about, but variation would be nice.
ReplyDeleteAlso, as with G9's comics, I had a little difficulty keeping the characters straight due to small changes of their character model. Was that chick with the purple hair and pointy ears, was she the one who was previously tattooed? Because she definitely looks different now.
All in all, though, I really did like the chapter. I like your work so much that I'm trying to save up some money to make a donation, so please don't take my response as a criticism. My response was just what came to mind after reading the latest chapter.
I look forward to whatever your next project is, whether it be the next chapter of The Fallen Star or whatever else.
Thank you Cold Snap.
DeleteDon't worry, as long as it's constructive criticism, I like to hear from everyone ;-)
Yes Lisa is the same character.
And as for the corruption, I will do better next time >_<
that is not nett to stop on this part!:)
ReplyDeleterest assure...it's made on purpose ^^
DeleteThank you for the comic, Shinra. I enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteGlad you did ;-)
DeleteYou have made us all fooled :) Kudos!
ReplyDelete7 months! Now we have to wait? Or More?
I hate when there is a Tf and then we have to wait until next time to see out the result! and now so many! you are Evil :)
Well told!
Don't worry it should not be that long for next one
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ReplyDeleteThe new images of Sister Mariah and Amelia are more Awesome, and more realistic than in the others chapters.
And the new band with the spider queen, i can´t imagined that dominate in heaven with Saga and Miss T likes their bosses, what happens to the friend of SAga, Amike?
she died...killed by Vore's venom >_<
DeleteI'm joking, she went back home and is actually masturbating like crazy ^^
Ps. the next comic is it so big like this one?
ReplyDeletenot sure it will be as big as this one
DeleteAbsolutely loved it! :D I really hope evil ends up winning in this, and things aren't randomly turned around at the last second, to allow for a "oh, the good guys vanquish the evil and win!" sort of ending.
ReplyDeleteBut I feel like we're all on the same page; in that we all are rooting for Starlight and her hordes of demons, so I don't think I have to worry. :)
On top of that, I actually have a few suggestions, Shinra;
Was a huge fan of how this comic started as a superhero story. And though I like where the tale has gone, now that Starlight has made her ultimate transformation - it might be really cool to see her make a return to earth, with more of a supervillain twist to her, rather than a totally demonic one. ;) It might also be neat to see her return to her home city, and start corrupting everyone she meets - without much worry about the Guardians.
Also, it'd be cool to see some more of her first two succubi minions. Maybe they return to earth, and the one who was a former cop attacks the city police, and corrupts them all. Meanwhile, the other could run around corrupting people on the streets or something. Just sort of feel like they haven't had too much to do since they were turned - and they could be like her right hand minions or something.
This one might seem very out there, it was just an idea that went through my head while reading. But going with the superhero concept again, it might be interesting if the girl Saga had a crush on (I'm sorry I forget her name at the moment) was actually a crime fighter (maybe called Luna? Luna Girl? or something) who was inspired by the likes of Starlight. Obviously, she wouldn't have any actual abilities, but she could be somewhat like Batman - fights crime with martial arts and gadgets. And, like Starlight, with Vore's venom running through her system, she begins to have sex with the criminals she's chasing, rather than fighting them. When Starlight arrives and starts corrupting the city, she tries fighting, but soon falls prey to her. She's fully converted when Saga shows up, and fills her with Vore's venom again - leading to her, Starlight, and Saga all having sex. ;)
Finally, I don't know if you have plans still for the Oracle, but I really think you should have Lighthouse corrupt her, much in the same way Lilith corrupted Maria. Would love to see that bitch become truly evil. ^_^
Thank you.
DeleteIt's gonna be hard to go back to a real superheroes story as the actual story needs to progress as well.
The succubi Meghan and Selina will make their come back in next chapter yes.
For the oracle, all I can say is there's a lot going through my head ^^
About the FBI.... Of course it was a joke Shinra :) Sorry, if it got you unsettled. Great work with the comic :).
ReplyDeleteno offense ;-)
Deletethank you pressure cooker
I always thought G9 has the better mods...
ReplyDeletebut now someone's on pressure...
And I will be the one under pressure after he will have released his next chapter >_<
Deletewill we ever see the face of the oracle?
ReplyDeleteo man, in the next one will happen alot of thing!
good story i have only one problem!!!!!!! to wait again 9 Months: ( ,
I now, that the other 2 stories are also very good, but to stop at this point!!!!! this was not nice: (: ( and now to work on the other 2 comic :((((((((((((( not happy!!!!!
will now carla skin become more and more purple ? Nice ears !
No...she's like Kakashi-Sensei ^^
DeleteI hope chapter 8 will be long gone in 9 months
i mean lisa
ReplyDeleteHello Shinra-kun, first time posting on your blog. I stumbled on your work 2 years ago when I read chapter 4 of the fallen star saga. I wondered then was that a discontinued work or work in progress, but I was pleasantly surprised that it was the last one. Since last chapter I wanted to review it, but maybe I wasn't incentive enough to do it but now I am. I apologize beforehand if this review is gonna be long and systematic.
ReplyDeleteThis chapter was very good. It was fast paced, even with its 298 pages. You introduced new villains, new secondary characters that fit the roll in the story and character development, reintroduced secondary characters known from chapters before, that the fans wanted to see again and made some interesting new plots in the overall story. You even took some elements from Greek mythology like Arachne the spider woman destined to "Live on, weave on"(I don't know if you know but Echinda is in Greek mythology the mother of all monsters). I'm happy you introduced her because the only negative points from the chapter 6 were: the rushed ending with saga and the feel from the story that it would end in the stereotypical ending in which half of the good guys get corrupted and betray the other half when the dark side attacks them; Boom darkness wins.
This time you went around that stereotypical ending showing maybe some alternative ending will happen and the ending didn't feel rushed this time ; all pluses for you. A big plus is that you keep getting better and better on their after transformation/corruption look as well as in the process of transformation (still the best so far by my judgement was Gellina's transformation from Harriet Copper) Also have to commend on those excellent pictures of Miss T in her angelic and darkness form with the wings(I don't know but it seems to me that those pictures were hardest to make, correct me if I'm wrong). Also another plus is Saga's turn to the dark side. Her corruption and transformation were, in my opinnion excellent, not too long and not too short.
Second part
DeleteAnd now the negative points, don't worry it won't be that bad XD. I couldn't help notice the increase in english grammar and syntax
errors. You had in this chapter much more errors than, please don't take it to heart, in the rest of your chapters combined. I was reading the first dozen pages and I was looking at it confused, because your english was very good in the previous chapters with only a handful of noticeable errors. This chapter had most of the erros in the beggining and middle with the ending barely having any errors at all. I don't know if it's the time difference of months between the development of first and the last pages of this chapter or something else, but you have to be careful when making the next chapter in this or the other two comics. Please again don't be offended, I'm not some grammar nerd (hell English isn't even my mother language) but it does, for me, diminish the overall rating of the chapter.
The second minus is Miss-T transformation. It was to put it blunt underdeveloped or lacking. Don't get me wrong her after transformation look is excellent but the very process, it was non-
existing. I know that she developed a cocoon and emerged from it,
but you didn't get to see the gradual change on her entire form,
unlike Saga's transformation in which you could see everything, even read her remarks during the process (heck it's ironic that in the previous chapter Miss-T half-transformation had everything that this chapter is missing). And this is in a sense a letdown because after Starlights corruption/transformation this was the second most wanted corruption/transformation from your fans. I apologize to the rest of the fans if this isn't true.
So to sum it all up. A very, very good chapter with a few minuses
that dimish the greatness of this chapter - 4/5. Advices for the
future: proof check your grammar twice, don't make the transformation process a destination, make it a journey and for your own sake don't ever work on a holiday.
P.S. I apologize Shinra-kun if my review was long and at some parts critical, but you listen to your fans and take into consideration their constructive criticism into making even better comics for the future.
Thank you Legion and Don't worry, I like to read people who takes the time to analyse my comics as I'm taking the time to make them, and as long as it's constructive feedback.
DeleteA lot of details of the story are coming from differents mythologies. I like to make some research for my comics ^^
Thank for notifying me my poor english performance. I think I know the reason why this one is way under the other on that point but that's not an excuse >_<
The thing is I've changed my way of working, adding the speech bubbles, SFX, Postwork and all corrections at the very end of my workflow when the comic was all done instead of working on each page at a time as I had done so far. Guess it has not really worked >_< and even for me it was way too long to do that for more than 750 pics all in a row.
My apologies for that.
Aaah the Miss-T transformation...I knew somebody would come across this >_<
If I have to say that I'm disappointed of something is this chapter, it will defintely be that part, as unfortunately, I could not render it the way I had envisioned it T_T
I guess my skills are still not enough to render everything like I picture it in my mind.
Again, apologies for the grammar and typos. I do proofread it more than twice, believe me, but I think you just don't see your mistakes anymore after having looked at those pages again and again and again >_<
But rest assure, I will remember your advices when it will be time to release next chapters
And again, no need to apologize, that was a very good review as far as I'm concerned ;-)
As usual, good stuff and thanks for keeping this free. The amount of work put into it could earn you loads in the industry. On a side note, mariah look kinda cartoony and diddnt really had that evil demon kind of feel, the old mariah looked better. A suggestion i hope you consider, its your comic after all!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the change in direction on the story to some extent, made me see a bigger picture of just good vs evil as we now have different factions of evil. My only concern is that 'Heaven' just seemed to get a good bending over and that the next 'set' of characters were set up for their corruption (Tethy's, Leto & Karin) which is probably what most people want to see but I hope there's a twist in the future chapters which give heaven some sort of foothold in the battle, even if its something like curing Saga and she warns the others but then she gets corrupted another way, because at the minute it seems the guardians and heaven are boned.
ReplyDeleteTo sum up I'm hoping the guardians can put up a good fight even if they do eventually lose (hopefully) rather than seeing different factions of evil slogging it out with no chance for the good guys to win.
Don't worry for the good guys, they still have some resources and...we still have a looooot of good guys...and don't thrust everything I show you ;-)
DeleteGreat job Shinra, great improvement on the graphics too, Love the magic brushes used on this chapter ^_^.
ReplyDeleteCongrats for another HIGH FIVE STAR on GE!
Thanks G9 !
DeleteBut they are not brushes at all...I've painted everything from scratch and with my left hand...hum hum ^^ ahahah I still can dream about it
It's a bit early to say it will be a 5 stars comic, but I have to admit I hope to beat my previous chapter...Go Chapter 7 ! GO !
WOW, what another great one!!! Congrats on another comic. I hope you had a great vacation and didn't work too hard on this while there. I'll break my critique down into 3 parts. First the things that didn't go so well (In my opinion): First as Legion mentioned, the grammar, spelling, and syntax were not the best, actually the worst out any you have done so far. You averaged about 1 mistake every 3 pages. What happened? All previous comics your grammar, etc. improved each time. Another thing, though minor, there were a few times objects or people were put through other objects or people when they shouldn't have, though most people won't notice these. Finally the actually story seemed to have a very fast pace. A lot times it seemed to skip from one point to the next such as suddenly all the clothes were gone. The other thing is, though maybe it will have a more important part in the next chapter, the scenes with Carla and her family seemed a bit unnecessary for the general story though they were well done.
ReplyDeleteNegatives aside, all the amazing positives: I'm switching teams from team Starlight/ Devil (though that might not stay on the same team) to Team Arachnea/ Lumiel/ Saga. Monster team has got it goning on. Also the visuals in this chapter were stunning. The best you've done to date, keep up the great work. The effects such as magic and liquid were done expertly. Transformation sequences were excellent. Saga's was the best so far besides Mariah's in chp 5. The use of a pod to transform Lumiel was a fun and interesting way to get around showing a potentially very complicated transformation. Speaking of Lumiel and Saga, they are trully drop dead gorgeous now. What Peter said on pg 104 pretty much sums it up for the two of them and I did laugh pretty hard at his line happening right after Saga's transformation. Zell's transformation was very interesting, we'll see if he transforms the same way again. It was good to see Amelia again and see what has become of her and I am excited to see the next version of Starlight. Didn't care much for the short haired past version. I know this story started out with her as a major character till chapter 5 when others took the spotlight. I hope with her new looks she once again reigns in more time in the comic other than just pulling a string here and there. I mean the series does kinda carry her name, just saying. I liked Justine and where you sent her, that looks like it could open up some fun options. Karin is in quite the predicament and I love it, enough said. Finally for this section of positives, the future. Scarily enough you said around 11 issues, eeeekkkk!! That means we are more than half way... Don't get me wrong I love watching good fall to evil (or monsters now) but they seem to fall rather easily. Like a previous Anonymous said with Tethys, Leto, and Karin all lined up for chp 8, Good doesn't seem to stand a chance. How did they win the last war? maybe this will end being monsters vs Hell... not a bad idea...
And finally my question section. You can answer all, some, or none (I prefer not none).
Delete1) Saga's friend Emika was hot, will we see her again (please)?
2) Will we see Vore again (great new none human character)? It was interesting to see the worm grow up. Since Saga is a full daughter of Arachnea, why don't we stick Vore into Emika or another angel...
3) The Elohim in the ground...(Hebrew for God for anyone who didn't look it up) God's keeping another army...?
4)Arachnea mentioned a monster realm, will we see it? If so looking super forward to that. It would be a great way to create a different realm other than heaven/ hell/ earth. Maybe that preview pic of large gates outside a forest was for that monster realm...
5) Will whatever was in Amelia's pussy be explained?
6) Was the "oracle" at the end Lumiel or the corrupted oracle? (maybe I'm just thick...)
7) You've mentioned rings of Hell (3 (Gluttony) and 6 (Heresy) maybe others I didn't notice), I'm wondering if this just fluff added or is it a reference to Dante's Divine Comedy/ Inferno or is it just to go with the 9 princes of Hell?
8) Miss T had her anal tentacle in chp 6 and now no mention really in 7 is that just getting swept under the rug since she has basically moved on from that?
9) Lisa looked radically different from where we left her in chp 6, any particular reason why? (for the record she looks better in her new form)
10) Karin muttered nonsensical chemical compounds SilverSeleniumOxygen and GoldBromine, any purpose?
Well thank you for anyone who read trough my essay all the way. Hopefully you will answer my questions. Also these comments are my opinions so I will happily have a discussion with anyone who wants to about them.
In conclusion, GO TEAM ARACHNEA!! (maybe I'll make shirts...)
yo Naptragichen,
Deleteglad you enjoyed it overall.
For the grammar and typos, as I did with Legion, I think I owe you all an apology, Gotta improve myself on this...T_T
And for the poke through, I guess I missed them as well dammit :-@
I also missed the line with Peter but indeed that was really funny ^^
Don't worry for the good guys, I still have plenty of issues to make them stand up for themselves
As for your question, I'll try to answer as many as I can without leaking any "vital" information ^^
1) I have to admit I really like this model, so yes Saga should toy with her a bit more
2) Mmmmh yes we will see him again ^^
3) God is clever ;-)
4) That pic with the garden of Eden was actually a joke ^^
but regarding the monster realm, it may happen that we sneak peek it
5) No
6) It was Lumiel
7) Yes it's a reference to the divine comedy
8) The tail was more a manifestation of darkness within her body
and I did not really plan to keep it on her
9) Lisa is a toy, a guinea pig for lilith and her experiment and she's unleashing all of her deviousness on the poor Lisa
10) ahahah I just wanted her to recite chemical compounds, as she was dreaming on what to add to the formula to make it works ^^
Order on shirt for me ;-)
What about you ? I know you were rendering something as well, how did you progress ?
Ah, I was hoping for a larger explanation for #5, oh well, unless it's a secret... ;)
DeleteAs for what I'm working, it is still being worked on though I recently moved and started a new job so the rendering has been put on hold. Hopefully I will get in the flow better soon and will be able to work on it again. I will send an email about some of the technical aspects that I have questions about.
Once again great comic and I look forward to either Harriet Cooper or Yoru No Majin down the line, we will have patience for when it will come.
Hi Shinra been folowing you since the first comic. Thanks alot for the work done. :) and great job. Hope to see more from you in the future
ReplyDeleteThanks you Kev
Deletegreat to see my suggests about Carla's family and Karin corruption, done in comic .....
ReplyDeleteThanks Shinra
I hope to see Carla's mother also in the other chapters .... ando also Saga's friend (Emika).
I love Your work ^ ^ b
ReplyDeleteHi Shinra. Can u tell me, how u learn make ur models so cute? Maybe u have links to lessons?
ReplyDeleteNot Really >_<
DeleteBut you have to worked on them a lot.
As I was replying to another comment earlier, Before I thought that creating character was one of the easiest part.
But now that I know a lot more, it's one of the most time consuming part of my preparation.
I've never really come across tutorial for that, I'm more trial and errors >_< Guess that's why I can spend so much time on this
Ok, after getting throught this comic, I've got to admit that I'm dissapointed. Let's start with the positives tho. Great graphic improvement, models look great ( apart from the fact that all their tits look almost the same, some more variety in their size would make things more interesting ) and I really liked the motive with Karin ( Sex Files : Alien Erotica huh ;d ? ). Now, the negatives : I know that it takes time to render all those pictures and cover them with story but after waiting so long 300 page are not enought. Second thing : some pictures don't have sense and it feels like a movie is... damn, I'm missing language :D.. for example the pic where Zeliel is sitting with Lighthouse in her apartament and she is laying face down so he is unable to see her face and yet on the next picture he is screaming that she is still tainted... it feels like there is no direct connection between them and it happend a few more times in this release. The third thing : I thought this was your comics, not the publicity. I know that it pleases people to see that their ideas found their way into the comic but there was too much of this in this release and too little of your own ideas.. not to mention, that I personally think that this motive with Carla and her mother was too much... even for mu standards... too pervy, definitely. Well, that about sums it all. Greetings.
ReplyDeleteI'm not agree .....is a great divagation and it's the opportunity to reveal the Starloght ambitious and her new look
DeleteNo worries SadMonkey, your feedback is welcomed
DeleteI guess I unfortunately can't please everybody >_<
Yes the scene with Karin is a blink to Sex Files ;-)
300 pages not Enough O_O
That's a bit harsh. All the rest of the people here would have ripped me apart if I had taken more time to deliver more pages.
The Part with Carla was definitely for fan service but I used it for a very specific reason.
Anyway thank you for your feedback.
I think to know the reason, but pheraps no!
DeleteAnyway Carla's mother is marvellous, and i hope to see her again in chap. 8
I agree with Berluskaz. The part with Carla and her mother was the best part of the chapter, by far. Story critiques I can understand, even if I disagree with them. However, Shinra-Kun, please disregard people's comments if they think it's too "pervy." I want to read "The Fallen Star," not "SadMonkey's Own Personal Sexual Standards".
DeleteKeep up the great work.
Seeing how my post about FBI got you all talking and explaining.. WoW, I never got this much attention, damn :D, it feels good :D.
ReplyDeleteNaughty Spooky :-P
DeleteA question, what happens with the transformation of the guardian Zeliel that was transformed into a dragon hybrid in the picture 176 and next? because in the picture 245 Zeliel is again human 100%, not hybrid dragon.
ReplyDeleteIt was said that Sagas venom, with whom she bit him, only works for several hours, after that it's back to normal.
Deletei cant't wait to see the new starlight look, her revenge againt Carla, the Leto's spider corruption, and i hope to see Amelia again.
ReplyDeleteAmelia appears in this chapter VII, Berluskaz (i think), it is in the page 274.
ReplyDeleteShinra, correct me if i am wrong.
Yes But I think Berlukaz means he's already waiting for chapter 8 ;-)
Deleteexactly Shinra
DeleteShinra,
ReplyDeletenice artwork, at least even the biggest critics have to admit, that you have developped a quality, where even some of the pay sites in this business could take an example from you. The story was quite chaotic this, although i really liked the new twist/enemy you introduced into this universe. With the fraction of monsters we have now a third party to enter the game for world/heaven/hell domination and really think that it was the best decision you could have made, because in my opinion the light side still lacks completely the capability to handle the situation at even 1%. I always hoped that Starlight would become so rotten and would try to crown herself to the ruler of hell. I really would like the picture, where this sissy of Lucifer, has to realize, that his biggest success in converting Starlight, was his on demise. Hope this will be part of the upcoming chapters. Really a fine story. There is only one point i would ask you to change and that is, that i wish myself the light side to be a bit stronger and that they don't always act like a bunch of complete losers.
Great work like always and nicely done. I just believe, that the number of pictures will probably have to rise even more in the next chapters, due to the complex story you have now created with this chapter. :-)
Nice work dude, I liked the story, but damn those cliffhangers! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat story with wonderful twists and turns, I never expected a third party to enter the scene! That was a brilliant stroke. I loved that everyone struck out with guessing who the woman in the pool of blood was! Well done!
ReplyDeleteOne question I have:
at the end- was that emika impersonating the oracle? I was a little confused on that detail. It seemed like the oracle was undergoing a conversion and not yet ready to assume her new dark role... Am I mistaken?
Yes you are Bob, that was Miss-T/Lumiel that was impersonating Oracle. And the real Oracle is held captive just like Ziel because Miss-T still has use for them.
DeleteAnd Shinra-kun one longer question that is on my mind that nobody has asked. Who is "her"? I'm reffering to the spy/woman(guessing) that gave the devil information about the unholy devices. Is she a new character or already a existing character, that is important for the future story plot? Of course you don't have to answer because in a way it's a spoiler question. XD
I don't know what you're talking about...^^
DeleteWooow!
ReplyDeleteGreat!
Buuuut but i dont know about Saga with this damn worm controlling her!
Yeah, that thing with the worm wasn't sexy, it was disgusting, in my opinion.
DeleteLate again! Now how can I write a sensible review if Naptragichen, Legion, and others have already mentioned everything?
ReplyDeleteShinra, you're keeping the tradition alive: the tradition that each new Fallen Star chapter is the best yet. I have no idea why it is your own conclusion that the pace has been slowed down in this chapter because there is so much going on, it's maddening. All that combined with dynamic scene changes made a very pleasant and interesting read.
You did the best thing ever that you could have done with the story, and that is introducing a third party. As others have already mentioned, the hell side was winning way too easily, so it's good that not everything is proceeding as flawlessly for them anymore. Now the heaven side needs to make a bit of a comeback to get 3 factions that are more equally balanced...though not too balanced, otherwise the story will need another 20 chapters (not that that would be a bad thing).
It was too bad, however, that you needed to fall back on a cliché story structure to get the good guys into trouble: nobody ever informs each other of what they saw/heard or gets together to make plans. Evil profits because every good guy thinks he/she can solve the problem on their own.
It would have been a little more interesting to see the bad guys needing more and better tactics to deceive the good guys, apart from profiting from their stupidity! >_<
But hey, don't worry. It's a cliché because it works. We all write the stories this way. It's not as if the Rangers are a bunch of intellectuals!
As you did in the previous chapter with the angels, the introduction of Arachnea felt so natural and smooth, it's easy to forget that this was really the first time she is seen or mentioned. She gets a good portion of the story without overdoing it. It's enough to make me jealous of your balancing skills, that's for sure!
You did a similar right balancing thing with Vore. Vore would be a perfect candidate for a funny wise-cracking sidekick character. Good for making him a nice amusing duo together with Saga, who is also the least serious out of all the angels.
It could have been great, but....it wouldn't have fit into the story, certainly not now that we're in the middle to later stages of the story.
I like to believe that you reached the same conclusion and therefore chose not to fool around with Vore.
Unlike some other posters, I think the Carla family scene was a great addition as well. Nice to see another scene in the real world again and see how the lesser demons help and serve the devil in their own way by going after normal human beings. It's very believable that the devil would send his lesser servants to do these easier jobs.
And because this scene had the extra function to get the focus on Starlight again (it started to become easy to forget about her), you made the right choice to spend some pages on Carla's family.
For a "slow-paced" chapter (your words, not mine), this had many corruptions and tf-scenes, and I've never liked them more than the ones in this chapter. Before, you relied heavily on triggering the tf's during sexual activity, and that was far less the case at all in this chapter. The difference is really noticable, but I personally like it a lot better this way.
DeleteAre there no downsides at all? Unfortunately there is a noticable downside of semi-importance and it has already been mentioned: the many grammar errors.
I felt uncomfortable mentioning it here, but seeing others mention it, and you taking it as positive criticism, I'll mention it as well.
As has been said, this chapter had probably more grammar errors or typos than all other chapters combined. (Punctuation has always been...lacking.) And seeing that, ironically, this is the first time you had someone proofread it, that's really unexplainable. Especially as this "someone" is none other than HoC.
I was very relieved when you told me that HoC was the one doing the proofreading and was looking forward to see that extra finishing touch with this chapter, but instead it looks like there is one less finishing touch than normal.
HoC, if you're reading this (you probably are): it's nothing personal and I'm sure you also did manage to find many other mistakes, but I cannot see your extra input. Receiving criticism is not exactly pleasant so I hope I didn't hurt you, but I cannot put it any other way.
One other thing I'd like to mention is the length of the comic. It's long but it also took a lot of time. That can be frustrating for a lot of people here and it shouldn't even be necessary.
Shinra, you have the whole story more or less already ready and written. Only you decide that this chapter needed to consist of almost 300 pages. Look at the chapter: so many little cliffhangers followed by a scene change. You could break up the chapter practically anywhere! Why not split the chapter, make it shorter, and release it sooner?
As an example look at the midway point in this chapter: Zell and the oracle. You could have easily ended the chapter after page 153 or 154. We still would have had a nice cliffhanger and we would have had half of this chapter a few months ago.
It would still have taken you until early september to get the remaining pages done but then the wait wouldn't have been so long.
You'd only need to make an extra cover and introduction, but as a trade-off you'd also get feedback earlier for the pages that you already did release. I think it's a win-win situation and really fail to see why the chapters need to be so big.
This series is in good hands, you keep proving that. Looking forward to the following chapters which, as is tradition, are all going to be even better than this chapter! O_O But for now, I have really no idea how that is going to be possible.
Heya Shinra,
ReplyDelete300 pages? First of all, thanks for the mega update of meganess. Much appreciated for the huge amount of effort involved. And the quality is actually quite good but with nitpicks which follows.
The long format does have a downside: Storytelling. The story itself was quite cohesive this time and everything flows pretty well, but it was way too long for 1 sitting. This one could have been 3-5 separate releases and it would have been even more awesome. Consider:
1) From chapter start to discovery of Arachnea and subsequent initial control of Saga. Dun dun dunnnn cliffhanger!
2) End at Saga's transformation. Dun dun dunnnnn new and improved Saga! OMG Can't wait!
3) End at Miss T's cocoon scene. What will she look like? zomg!
4) Miss T emerges near middle of chapter and end at confrontation with Oracle!
5) Zell appears, gets corrupted and ends right when he snaps out of it for a short while. Will he? Won't he? TUNE IN NEXT WEEK!
And it goes on. It's fine now, it could have been more titillating!
Transformation scenes. I have brought this up before with your Yoru No Majin chap 1. Needs more conflict. Right now, it's very very VERY predictable. Bad guys are infinitely more powerful than the good girls. No drama. Darkness wins. Of course! What do you expect?
The post transformation forms are <3. Sexy as hell but uhh, also a little too predictable. Maybe invert this by making them decently dressed (Like Miss T's disguise near the end, but with more spikes), unlike their Good forms? I'll leave it up to your imagination, but maybe you can use the long robes/dresses/elaborate costumes with convenient openings/cutaways for the sexy tiemz? I mean, yeah they are sexier when evil, but it's possible to look sexier with more clothing. Perhaps with shapelier, more body hugging stuff?
Devil suddenly being distracted is fine. But him being distracted away from both Arachnea and Starlight is a little out of character for him (Just 1 is believable). I know it's no use now that it's already been written, but any comeback for him now would look a little too Deus Ex Machina.
Now, I am basing this off the assumption that you are aiming for maximum sexiness (Hentai with good action) and not for maximum action (Action with good hentai). If you are, you have my apologies and I will have to write another review for you.
I told myself the same thing a million times when I was rendering this chapter, yes I could break it here and there.
DeleteIt's just me being afraid that the impact won't be the same if the chapter is shorter.
One remark tho'...the Devil is far from being stupid, don't worry for him ^^
Thanks for the review.
Think you can make the good girls more powerful though? It does take the fun out of the whole corruption if they are all so weak and meh when faced with corruption. =(
DeleteGuys how many guardian do we still have ?!
DeleteWe've only scratched the surface with them corrupting Saga and toying with Zell...who both are part of the newly awaken last generation "trinity" of guardian.
I would not worry too much about them...they won the last war after all...
sorry for my english!
ReplyDeleteNice story!
You said in a earlier Comment, that it would not take 7 months for chapter 8!
you sure??
I think it's good that there are now various fronts! This gives the possibility of different fronts to become new corrupt and Tf for a other Player☺
Saga could be caught be the evil Queen and she "recorrupt" her for herself :) so that vora must flee from her and he goes to Emika and to Arachnea back!:)
Or the order of Kael "recorrupt" the sister! Back to good :)
The sister of the order of Kael her face has a lot of potential (very pretty)
If carla now become one of the Nine Princess of hell does that mean, that she will become a update (TF)? In the moment she is on the same lavel as the sister! But but she looks hot! aber she not so strong as Mariah
It looks as if they were 5 different powers (maybe even 6) in the story!
Araknia (Saga, leto (Spider horny horny horny :)) Miss T (Lumiel) the child is of no real Araknia will independently and build a second a power with the (oracle and Zell ) the rest of the Angel wake up and build the third group. The evil queen is now so powerful that she is fighting against the devil! The devil did not see that so that he must go to build five group or to connect with a other group!
And the Sister of the Moyira Iceland cut make the 6 group:) because they are powerful warriors and fighter! they cure the Demon and fight this those against the evil power maybe for a short time befor they will corrupt :)
That would be a lot of action in it:) and alot of caracter would be Cor. and Cor and Cor and TF and TF :) Just an Idea ``
Was the intention with Lisa Lilla skin color ? Or was it a emergency solution, because the "program" could not handle all tattoo!
I found in this comic that Lisa was not differed from the other corrupt people in this part.
Tip for the next time! if she is a laboratory rat for lilith then let her addicted for the next venom (Demon DNA) and let make Lilith experiment on her!
For a better serum (venom) , but then after the experiment she is not satisfied with the result, and give her you a different venom and she changes again. But these picture you must show us in a comic and not over several comic, otherwise the feeling is away and it becomes boring!
Unfortunately, I must also say that I was a little disappointed of the Tf of Miss T! You are playing this us over 3 comic and then she gets a little poison in his mouth and everything is over, and it is evil:( Ok you was playing this us that we all was thinking that she is the one in the labor☺. But after the pictures in part 6 I would expect that she not only dark eyes but also that she has a tail coming out ouf her ass, a small mutation!!! but not like this! sorry but I not happy about this:(
DeleteThat Zell healed her was ok!
I'm also not entirely happy with the final result! it is ok but it just lacks something! I think it was not your plan as well!
Saga Tf was ok! but the colors was a little fighting with each other, the color of tail and the color horns! I liked her new Hair color.
The sisters were just hot hot hot Very good work!
Will the Evil Queen kept a little bit of the red hair or eyes in the future?
I hope that we see Emika or Amika in the next on maybe be a Littel changed more Sexy or that she will then Cor. and TF and become a Kid Araknia ( she needs sold, as the 3 Power!! )
I also hope that we see leto full corrupt and Tf and not in 12 months ( in Chapter 9).
If this is the case you has a Fan less ☹
Also, I hope the tethys will and the cor. in the next one! how will she look??(The attack are stronger now and takes not so long to Cor. !)
I'm really sad now that we have to wait for Emika, Karin, the Oracle, the Evil Queen and Zell to see what happen with them ☹ this is too many people at once, 1 or 2 is Ok but not like this ☹ ☹
Now you has also the problem to show us in the next update this people and also show us Picture of of leto carla, tethys otherwise you show too much ☹
What are you going to show us??
The story with Carla Family was to much ☹ ( the only funny thing was p104) it was Morally wrong Bullshit! Sorry !! but now she more evil than Mariah
And please do not use names like Elohim ! This are things, dont play with this powers!!!!!!
Your Comic is just fantasy and not more but du not mix It with this World ☹☹
use fantasy names!
Ps. you told us there were 3 Oracles in the story but we now only one oracle at this moment!?!
this thing with the 3 oracle was a joke ^^
Deletethere's one and one oracle only
with the new power of Saga can she infect tethys for a short time end live her in the hell, were she will be caught and after the infection kann the evil Queen she corru. so that she is a member of the Evil. Or Saga can bing she in the time of the infection to Arachnea so that she becomes a Child of her! Or Saga can mix her venom this the blood of Arachnea and infect her!
ReplyDeletethe effect of angel are limited! but not for human (testobject Emika maybe :) ) ??
Ps. who is now really talking or evil thinking, saga or the Vore or both???
are they now together forever as one? ( as two in one:) )
both entity still exists
DeleteI think in the next one is alot of action and a lot of TF and Corr.
ReplyDeleteUntil now we have in working Emika, Karin, the Oracle, the Evil Queen and Zell and leto, carla, tethys are maybe the next then maybe someone on the Island or some Human ( Saga is testing her power) and maybe some healing from the angel ( but do not make it like you make it with Miss T that she looks just normal as Zell found her and heals her )
so how much are they? 11people Maybe more :) ??
I think, that the Angel will fight back the next time:)
in the moment wie have
over 20 people of the side of the Devil
and 6 people on the Good side (Angel) ( maybe more of the Island moyira )
And one the side of Arachnea we have only 1 Saga (ok 2 "Vore")
Miss T has the blood of Arachnea but she is not a child of her ( who is her Master? The Devil or Arachnea or is she her own "Master")?
And Emika, and Leto will maybe become members of Arachnea (by the way, both are super sexy).
I think Arachnea need more child to play on this table!!
And on with side is Karin after her corruption? Monster or "Miss T"
PS. are there more Angel in the story or was this all Angel? 7 Female and 4 Male Angel?
nice work
ReplyDeleteI looking forward to the next story
Shinra......WOW...WOW ..WOW, W.O.R.T.H. T.H.E W.A.I.T!!! you outdid yourself on this one, it has every element i asked you about previously, (hmm, i see you even included a scene from ALIEN SEXFILES) in it also... (plant pod spore scene), I've reread it about two times now, & its still WOW... this is the corruption story of champions! I've loved all of the fallen star chapters up to now (especially the one with the nuns), but this one is well paced,not rushed the conversions are well thought out, i just want to say thanks, it was extremely satisfying!!!!!! THEANTJACK
ReplyDeleteThank you Mr jackson ;-)
Deletethe story that Miss T tells Karin was this a true story and important for the comic story or was she just Jocking, to fool the young Karin?
ReplyDeleteThe enzyme that Karin has Create, cut it heal all the people ( the sisters and the student, the police officer....) or is it so strong to it cut heal starlight and Kimy, Mariah and the Devil himself ?
Mister Hanu is now the only one, who knows that of the good guys?!
But the "enzyme" and the "holy sperm" has no effect on Arachnea "Moster" children, to cure them, is that richtig??
Ps. how long, do you thing, must we wait for the "8" chapter?
thumbs up!! good story;)
No this story was actually true !
Deletewether it will be important or not in the story...all I can say is that the theme of the 9 princes of hell will be used here and there in the story ^^
For the "enzyme" Karin has created, I don't know, I haven't tested its potency yet ;-P
But yes it would not have any effect on Arachnea's monster
How long for chapter 8...Mmmh good question, too early to give even a rough estimation
After waiting so long for this chapter, I devoured it as soon as I could, and I was not disappointed! If I had one little gripe it would be that Miss T, after wavering back and forth against the demonic corruption for so long was perhaps a little too easily overcome by the monstrous corruption
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next chapter, that's for sure!
I was pleasantly surprised yesterday when I discovered chapter VII of this series and read the whole thing. Even though I did like it a lot, there's one thing that's really bothered me: The whitewashing. What I mean by that is that every character is white. No black, Asian, brown, or even Latino characters. This applies to the series as a whole as I've read every chapter. If that could somehow be addressed in one of the later issues, that would be great. A fun way to fix that would be to have one of the newly corrupted girls or guys go to, say, a Shinto temple in Japan or a shamanist building somewhere in Central America. Not only to build up the numbers on the evil side, but to make the cast of extra characters quite literally more colourful. I am white myself, and even I think that a high school in a city where everyone is white is a little weird. Hope you take my advice to heart. Happy corrupting!
ReplyDeleteI like that everyone is white. The high school I went to, there were two black kids and a few half-Asian kids. But the vast majority of students were white.
DeleteIt's bit like saying that there's actually no asian character in mangas...
DeleteTo be honest, I did not really do it on purpose.
There's other project of mine who have more ethnic characters.
Unfortunately with this, I also know that I have to be veeeeery careful as people can get offended very fast.
you use people of other ethny, that's racism, you don't...that's discrimination, you use small people...that's mean, you use small people wit big dick...that's a stereotype, you use nun...that's an heresy
All of this to say that I'm trying to be very careful with what I'm using in my comics.
By the way, and as somebody else mention on the blog, Ran is supposed to be from a darker skin ethny, Emika is supposed to be Eurasian, and nearly all Yoru character are supposed to be asian...
See they're not all gringos in there ^^
And don't forget Mariah: she is red.
Delete@Anonymous, hmmmn? i never thought of it that way....i think RAN is meant to be a African American girl, especially with her dark skin and all, but that is a good point to up bring for future chapters, but even if Shina doesn't use varying ethnicity s, his work is amazing...im a big fan,& i cant wait to see the next chapter of FALLING STAR
ReplyDeletehttp://antjacks-femalepossession-mindcontrol.blogspot.com/2013/09/shinra-kun-fallen-star-ch-7-lightbearer.html CHAPTER 7 http://www.hardsextube.com/video/2147851/SHINRA-KUN-YORU-NO-MAJIN-THE-TOWER-OF-SIN-BONUS-xMLx-DEVOTION--UPDATE
ReplyDeletethx for this ;-)
Deletewelcomed.....THEANTJACK
DeleteIn the next Yoru No Majin: Night of the Red will something happen to Nee san or Aki nee?
ReplyDeletemmmh good question, yes some random stuff will happen to them.
DeleteBy the way, Aki-nee and Nee-san are not their name...they refer to a word meaning big sis' in japanese ;-)
Great work on this comic Shinra !
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you reintroduced the nuns and the other characters like Lisa and else...
Just a personnal thing however: Is that just me or is there no men character actually relatable (and not a moron or a "sissy")in G9's or your comics?
I liked the Devil but he just acts very stupidly in the second part of the chapter(why would he so obviously prefer Carla over Starlight when he tried so hard to get her and make her his bride?)
I think that because the women become sexy and evil it doesn't mean they should only act like dominatrix or lesbians. I get it it's nice but it's not my only fantasy. I like that the guy just "fucks the brains out" of the girl until she is his. It can be more complicated or intriged but shortly that's that.
I know it sounds weird but I think your comics don't give a really good example of men.
You want good examples of men and mention that you want to see him fuck the brains out of girls until they're his?
DeleteThat's an...unusual "good example" of a man. You must lead a very wild life! ;P
Euh does everybody skipped the part where Zell actually rapes the Oracle ?!
DeleteFor the Devil...he's the devil after all. He sins by prode, he sins by lust, he's greedy BUT he's far away from being stupid...let's wait for chapter 8 ^^
So far if we make the count, he first raped a girl then starlight twice, then Kimy, then that's true he seems like resting a little bit on his achievments.
If you look on Yoru, naughty sorcerer ! he fucked Aki like a mere puppet, worst...he makes her SMOKE O_O
And where I don't agree at all is for G9 comics, if my devil likes to make jokes and play it dumb, the dark emperor on the other side is quite the badass, keeping all the girls for himself, killing his underlings and corrupting every good ranger into devious dark soldier
Yeah I have to agree, Dark Emperor is a real model corrupter no problem there. As for the Devil I suspect some hidden badassery coming up : )
DeleteI'm weird like this :p
ReplyDeleteWhen I say "good", it's complicated.
In this comic we root for evil right ? And I believe this side lacks an interesting and likable male character. You know strong, smart so that the heroines can't have a chance to resist his corruption
; )
In this comic, I can see it only happen with one of the remaining male angels using their holy charms to win all the females back to their side (nah, don't worry. I don't see that really happening! ^^)
DeleteAs for G9comics, wouldn't you agree that the Dark Emperor is a total stud? >_<
Agreed The Dark Emperor is a stud He's able to corrupt with fineness and savvy.
DeleteSeconded,
DeleteI hope you will develop the character (in SR0 for example?)
Wishfull thinking =p
what a shock it would to learn that our actual super badass dark emperor is in fact...born from the "plant" monster G9 showed us in his last update :-P
Deleteit is interesting to think that the devil has a plan! why he act like this, to corrupt only some special people like Kimy,starlight, carla and then to make starlight jealous or to relieve Arachnea and so on! And this all was his plan at the beginning of the story!
ReplyDeleteor the other side, why must so many good people fall? but than in the end all will to be saved and cured, also Arachnea! :)
and devil will be defeated and dies :)
I hope not : (
Deletewhat?
DeleteYeah, You just described the worst ending I could imagine o_o
DeleteNooo !!
DeleteDon't kill the devil he is the best !
He must become more pwerful and show Starlight who is Boss !
i was surprised at the beginning 14% so fast! 5 day are past now ( weekend is past) is it still 14 %? sorry for asking :(
ReplyDeletei think it is good for you and us to give us only one day the week a % update ( for example every Monday) So that people can see how far you've!
It was ok with the Update picture ( 25 50 75 100) on Friday or on the weekend, it is something, to have "fun of" and to visit you website for it.
If I know, every to week, there will be a Update waiting ;o)
i am Joke ;o)
can you now say, that saga is now like the Prinzes of the Monster
ReplyDeletelike the starligth ist the Prinzess ( evil Queen) for Devil
will sage more "tf" more in the next one, like the starligth or Kimy or the sisters and so on?
I would not really qualify her as the princess of monster.
DeleteI'm not sure I will have a much time to spend on each and every character as T took with starlight or Lilith but let's see what the future is made of ;-)
in the next one, will we see more than 4 corr. or tf.?
ReplyDeleteIn this one you left us alone this hope that we will see in the next one the New Evil Queen and the new Karin and we all hope that leto will becomoe a child of A. (I hope so fast like with Saga ;o) ) and of course we have Emika to tf.
Have i miss some one?
I Think that Karin will need to Corr. and tf the Ora. and Zeliel
Ps. if the Ora. is Corr., she no longer need the blindfold, because the contact she has, is gone!
and last but not least we have tethys the little spy! something must happen to her in the next on!
and the devil and (Angels) needs that something happen of the the island!
or the angel must find a cure of A. poison!
Please tell us how many Corr and tf will have the next one!
only a small clue :o) !!!
thanks
A few but not that much ;-)
Deletewhat an answer :o( :o)
ReplyDeleteyou mine less then 4 !
am I right?
Ok the the Evil Queen is finished but we haven´t seen her yet!
Karin could be saved!
also Leto could be also saved! ( but I hope that the chapter is hers )
And you told us that Emika is important in chapter 8/9 so maybe!
I don´t think that the Ora. or Zeliel will corr.
also I don´t think that tethys will be corr. in the next one :o(
So that means Leto, Emika, Karin and if we have luck tethys
was the answer you gave based on 4??
Ps the sister and Lilith are really hot hot hot now
Mariah I think is ok how she looks now ( but it would by nice to see her as a human again just for the reminder)
carla is also hot now but as a princess she needs maybe a dress update!
That's because it will depend on where I cut the chapter ^^
Deleteyour answer are wonderful!
ReplyDeletei hope that be the next one you don´t have so many open Corr. and Tf would be, that is not funny:(
I usually consider the corruption process as a "3 steps process"
Delete* The trigger which is gonna introduce the corruption and it could be a lot of different thing
* The corruption process itself which can be rather long or short depending on the victim, the story and all the events that have led to this situation
* The "Tranformation" which see the victim being reborn into something darker that her old self
So exactly tell you where I would be for each character in terms of "corruption" is, first, quite hard to say right now as I haven't decided yet where to cut the chapter and secondly it would ruin all the fun it I was revealing everything that early in advance ^^
next weekend a update maybe (25%) or is this to a quickly prognosis ask :o)??
ReplyDeleteAn update on "something" should arrive quite soon ;-P
Deletehave you began now to work on the new The Fallen Star?
ReplyDeleteor, are you make a little break for now to work on this project , to get new ideas and powers and more fun, to work again on it?
The script for chapter 8 is done and I'm currently working on the storyboard.
DeleteI actually have already rendered a couple of pages but they were more like test.
In the meantime, while working on the storyboard for Fallen Star, I'm working on my 2 other projects Yoru no majin 2 and H.C. 2 and something else ^^
Anyone who needs a quick corruption fix while eagerly awaiting Shinra's next dose, as I am, can take a look at my own similarly themed comic on (boo) MC Comix. The latest installment of Astral Boy VS Vultura finally depicts the corruption and transformation of Astral Boy's beloved stepmother into the erotic evil super witch Vultura. Please check out the free link at http://www.mccomix.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=15621.
ReplyDeleteSPAM
DeleteThis isn’t SPAM, Anonymous. I’m a huge fan of Shinra’s work and frequent contributor to his site, as well as a working screenwriter (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YjhkQm5jvNE) and secret erotic comic writer, currently of the most popular series on MCComix.com. I post my updates here because my comic on MC Comix is in the same vein as Shinra’s, if not the same league, and those who enjoy his work might just enjoy mine too.
DeleteStill SPAM, if you enjoy Shinra's job, just state it, don't take advantage of everyone here to go to MCcomix and pay the fee for your comic so you can get a gain for that. Regards,
DeleteFor the record, I get nothing, and want nothing from my corruption comic sideline, other than entertaining likeminded people the way Shinra and G9 do. If you think that's taking advantage of everyone there, that's your misguided opinion, hopefully not others'. Regards back.
DeleteThen publish it in a free blog!! If you believe it is not taking advantage of everyone! Right?
DeleteGuys...can we stop this squabble around Lou's post
DeleteHe has most likely be one of the most supportive fan so far financially speaking, So I don't think Lou's motive is to make money but rather share another good comic serie.
Yes it's on MCComics, yes you have to pay for it, but don't forget that Lou is not the one who makes the comic but he's the one who writes the story. So Unfortunately for us, he does not decide where the comic is uploaded.
I'd rather hear from people having access to it, what are you guys think about it.
Thanks, Shinra. And to your other fans: if and when Shinra starts a paid site where he can provide his crowd-pleasing art at a welcome pace without being sidetracked by survival work, I'll be the first to sign up. As Don Barzini says in The Godfather, "Certainly he can present a bill for such services. After all, we are not communists."
DeleteAs a person who does belong MCComics, I have to say Astral Boy is very well written and rendered and I have enjoyed it quite a bit. I got into the site for another artist, Firstborn and "his" corruption stories (he is the one who also wrote a series called Fallen Story) and I have been pleasantly surprised by the other series on the site. So keep up the good writing Lou!!
DeleteThanks, Naptragichen. You're very much the discriminating type we do this for.
DeleteHey, Naptragichen, if you like Astral Boy enough, please vote for it to continue on MCComix at http://www.mccomix.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=42&t=15669. And please ask anyone you know who's a site member to do the same.The artist is being cut to one title, and mine just happens to be the best one. Thanks for your support.
Deleteis saga and vore now one body, or can vore leave her and can live in a other body ? maybe on the point when she is so much corr. that she is all doing from herself so that she don´t need the evil vore!
ReplyDeleteMmmmh no...they have not been fusioned into a single body, they rather share it
DeleteTOTM???
ReplyDeleteanother project now ? that is too much!
Ps how far are you? %
Knowing that TOS won't start before the very last chapter of fallen star normally
Deleteand Nemesis XIII being on hold for an undefined period...
+ I first have to finish Fallen Star storyboard before starting to work on it
So no, as long as I'm not working on everything at the same time, that's still manageable.
I will update the progress bar very soon ^^
just need to recalculate the % more accurately ;-P
I think it is too much for a new project and a new layout when you still have three up :s! I would recommend you to focus on the ones you need to finish and then think in new ones :s! (another Anonymous, lol)
DeleteIf he says he'll be fine, then it will be okay. I trust Shinra!
DeleteTOTM 24% ??? update be 25 maybe:o)
ReplyDeleteIt won't start before the very last chapter of fallen star normally ?:)
No TOS and TOTM are 2 different projects ^^
DeleteTOS will be my next big Project after Fallen Star and that's why I can't wotk on it right now.
Yes Update should be there quite soon ;-)
Exciting to see new stuff from a potential new series. Also nice to know the chp name for the next Fallen Star. So you took down the bar TOS because it won't start till after Fallen Star?
DeleteYes ToS will be a project as big as the Fallen Star (most likely way bigger).
DeleteI'm actually working on the story which I want to be much deeper but also much wider than the Fallen Star.
This time I wanna create a serie with its own universe, its own mythology, a lot of meaningful characters but less cameos.
All in all a massive project, so yes, this one will most likely start after Fallen Star.
The Mother of All !!!
ReplyDeletethe sound of that is promising :)
it is sad that on this point that you have not the 10% 14% 24 %= 48 together on the project the fallen star :o)
do you with that there is a changse gives that it will be finished befor chrismas ?? :)
Euh no it does not work like this ^^
DeleteYou can't do an average of an average, 10% of 4 apples + 14% of 11 pears + 24% of 8 oranges does not make 48% of a watermelon.
On top of that, I can't work on the Fallen Star right now as the storyboard is not finished. Script and story are done but I still have to envision all the pics and all write all the dialog.
So, to my humble opinion, I think that's better for you guys if I work and deliver something else while I'm polishing the next chapter of the Fallen Star, rather than having nothing for quite a while...
are now 3 comic coming before, The Fallen Star Ch VIII?
ReplyDeletedo not misunderstand i like the comic of H.C. and The Wizards Sacrifice - Spell 2
and i hope to see soon
but in the moment are more waiting of the The Fallen Star ;)
Ps Legion: Thrall Of The Mask update tomorrow?
They won't necessarily be finished before the next chapter of the Fallen Star, the only thing is that they are way smaller chapter, so they tends to be finished faster.
DeleteYes update tonight...normally ;-P
a hour 2 ,3 ?
ReplyDeletewhen will chapter VIII come out ?
ReplyDeleteHere is just an idea for a wardrobe in Mother of all Monsters
ReplyDelete4 The woman was dressed in purple and scarlet, and was glittering with gold, precious stones and pearls. She held a golden cup in her hand, filled with abominable things and the filth of her adulteries. 5 The name written on her forehead was a mystery:
I was thinking of not post this cause you already know of this and it maybe to much but as the outfit dances in my head and if you add some spikes and some swirls on the hips and tits in my opinion the best dress ever!
Got to say this series is the ONLY one I've encountered where the story for me personally is actually rather good love how it isn't just another good guy v bad guy ending with good guys miraculously winning instead you have the bad guys slowly and tactically corrupting the good (be nice to see bad guys win for a change) with a third faction thrown in to mix things up a little, great job thus far keep it up ;)
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