Hope you're all doing good on this beautiful Saturday!
Also hope you're ready for some ass-kicking corruption comics because, tonight is THE night!
Yes, ladies and gentlemen, no more waiting, no more teasing, no more testing your patience,
only the pure bliss of reading 300+ pages packed with corruptions and transformation!
I know it took a long time, but good stuff takes time to produce I guess ^^
I hope you guys will be blown by this second part, I really put my heart into it.
And of course, I hope you guys won't think all that time waiting just for this... >_<
So in this chapter we'll start straight back just where last part stopped.
No more mythology, no more back stories, no going back home now!
It's high time for the all out war between Heaven and Hell!
And don't tell me that nothing is happening in this chapter!
I always make bet with myself about specific parts of the story people will whine about...
I'm sure this chapter will make no exception, and all I can say is... don't jump the gun ;)
Once again, I would like to shout a massive thank you to Mpgrey and so should you.
He and his bionic eyes have done such a great job.
It might not be the sexiest or the most interesting part of the job, but you put all your heart and so much effort into it.
Thanks Mpgrey for all your hard work. Without you, those comics would not be what they are right now!
Let's not forget to also thank HoC for being my soundboard back when I was still writing this chapter.
Do not forget...this comic is free but above all, contains content which is only intended for adults 18+ !!!
All 3D models in this comic are 18+ years old intended. And we'd like to remind you that H3N Comics
do not promote violence toward women under any circumstances.
Give us some constructive feedback, share your mind, share the love and above all...Enjoy peeps!
From H3N with love.
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Great news
ReplyDeleteThanks you Shinra
Also thank you MpGrey
DeleteCan’t wait
ReplyDeleteWhat time zone does Shinra live in?
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ReplyDeleteIn my experience, I think It will takes 6 hours.
ReplyDeleteEven 10h is ok.
Delete4:51pm here
GOD SHINRA
ReplyDelete*Devil Shinra
DeletePraise the elder gods!
ReplyDeleteits almost here
ReplyDeleteIs that Tatatata meant to be the 20th Century Fox intro? lel
ReplyDeleteSo much hype!
No I think it's a Christmas song ;)
DeleteFinally it has been relea....wait NOOOO it's so close soooooo freaking close.
ReplyDeleteLet’s celebrate for this moment! Finally! We’ve been waiting for two years and now there’s only a matter of hours left to get it!
ReplyDeleteLooks amazing Shinra, thank you for all the hard work you put into this thing! I look forward to reading it :)
ReplyDeleteI will use the time of this delay to "read" the other 8 chapters, we need to catch up with the story before this new release. Thank you for all your hard and amazing work !!!
ReplyDeleteCongrats Shinra-kun for another hype train.
ReplyDeleteThe wait is almost over. Thanks to you both! :)
ReplyDeleteExcellente!
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the work and effort Shinra.
V.
Hey where can I look for an announcement from you regarding your work? Do you have a blog of your own? My apologies for asking here but I have no other way of contacting you.
DeleteThanks again!
Don't worry, you'll come across it. I'll post it here or in easy to find places when it's ready! (and it'll host on E-hentai like Shinra's work).
DeleteSorry for the secrecy, but it's purely to prevent people from googling the amateur crap I made years ago as a newbie. Still need to delete that stuff before launch.
Great bob !!!
ReplyDeleteIs MP still checking it or does Shinra just have to upload it?
ReplyDeleteI finished about an hour ago. Still found 14 text-related issues and a picture that could use a (simple) photoshop effect, so the final review was worth it.
DeleteMy work is now basically done except for one page I still want to discuss with Shinra about a possible text change. Nothing that will cause any delay, though.
So something along the lines of text changes, back to you for review and then back to Shinra for the final upload?
DeleteNah, back to me for a new review would take too long. The fixes are simple enough. Only thing that could go wrong is that Shinra's software messes up how the text is getting placed inside the bubbles, so he'll simply need to double-check that part.
DeleteAs for the page that I want to discuss, that will be a matter of either keeping everything as it now is, or me coming up with two or three new sentences.
We still have plenty of hours to get these last tiny hurdles out of the way.
Wouldn't it be faster to upload the current pages and then edit the changes in later? I'm sure small text errors won't affect the overall story. Afterall... Chp9 part 1. The devil himself asked Leto to Curry favor for him XD
Delete@mpgrey What software/tool are you using to get those nice speech bubbles?
DeleteAll I do is write. ...Well, "type" actually. I send Shinra massive reports of written out fixes and suggestions. He is the one playing around with the software, so it's a question for him.
DeleteTo the anonymous above you: was there anything wrong with that sentence you bring up as an example? As far as I know, the text doesn't contain any errors...at least to my knowledge.
As for your other question, we obviously want to release a huge work like this in its finest state. It's true that very small errors won't really hurt the overall experience, but those small errors are taken care of alongside the bigger ones.
Unless i'm missing something, i thought it was meant to be carry favor and curry was a typo. But anything goes as long as i get the comic so its cool.
DeleteNope, I'm afraid you're mistaken. The expression seriously is "to curry favor/favour (with someone)".
DeleteDid I originally know that? Nope, but that's why I check, double check, triple check and quadruple check basically everything that is even slightly questionable using various grammar websites and dictionary websites. And this is also why working through pages containing multiple problems can take so long.
Interesting, TIL.
DeleteI've been a long time reader and I wanted to really thank you for taking the time to proofread everything. I believe back in chapter 6 I made a comment about how a lot of the text mistakes kinda broke the moment. I genuinely meant it just as constructive criticism and I completely support you guys but I think I came off as a bit of a douche last time. Thank you so much for making this the best it can be. :D
DeleteI am not offended in the slightest. After all, I didn't help out Shinra earlier than chapter 8. I was actually in the same boat as you: having a recurring regret to see an awesome work not reach its peak potential because of hopeless text blunders that broke the moment again and again.
DeleteI see it as my job to make the reading experience as smooth and natural as possible. I hope that was the case for you in chapter 8, 9-1 and H.C. 2&3, and I hope it will be so in this newest chapter.
All aboard the Hype Train Destination Hype City Choo Choo motherfucker!
ReplyDeleteShinra you are amazing :P
now~ now ~ nownow
ReplyDeleteF5 time
ReplyDeleteAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh YYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSS finally it was worth it to wait for it
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ReplyDeleteHow many pages will there be?
ReplyDelete311 story pages and a cover.
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ReplyDeletenow uploading?
ReplyDeleteomg omg sweet cant wait !!!
ReplyDeleteSweet Deliverance.....!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteShinra and mpgrey delivering again! Thank you so much for your hard work!
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ReplyDeleteIn my opinion there has never been so many f5 in the world hahaha
ReplyDeleteCan anyone confirm the time difference? I have no clue what today and tomorrow is.
ReplyDeleteDoes he Friday Saturday or Sunday (eastern standard time)??
The release should be well within the next 24 hours.
DeleteThanks for your hardworking!
ReplyDeleteAmazing. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteLegend .... wait for it .. dary
ReplyDeletedope
ReplyDeleteIs that "not uploading" caption meaning an error or that you haven't begun uploading yet?
ReplyDeleteJust a sign to everyone here that the uploading hasn't started yet.
DeleteAny more reviews or is that it?
ReplyDeleteHow is Shinra doing on those fixes? No more renders I hope!
k thanks
ReplyDeletehoping for some damn good corruption!!
ReplyDeleteThe wait is tearing me apart lisa
ReplyDeletethank you
ReplyDeleteWe have to wait again sir ?
ReplyDeletehow many hours ???
ReplyDeletehmmmm, great cover... The precision and quality of your work should inspare us all.
ReplyDelete2 years of waiting is worth it
ReplyDeleteThank you for bringing such a good work.
DeleteThank you for your work.
ReplyDeleteUpdate???
We are almost crossing the finish line. Have a little more patience
ReplyDeletePlease Shinra Mpgrey,news.
ReplyDeleteI really wish he hadn't put the teaser up, now everyone's just hopelessly F5-ing...
ReplyDeleteWell, i suggested it in the previous post, guess it backfired, im f5ing too...
DeleteUploading is a long process. Even if your F5-ing makes you see that the uploading has started, it will still be a couple of hours before it's available on e-hentai.
DeleteAnyway, the last page has been taken care of. The chapter is out of my hands now.
The difference is, everytime we f5 the process is closer. We're almost there now, the F5 gets more intense when the upload begins.
Deleteyes! :D
ReplyDeleteAnd it has begun!
ReplyDelete100%!!
ReplyDeleteWhere's the link? Where's the link?? WHERE'S THE LINK??? :p
So it begins
ReplyDelete8%. It's actually happening. It didn't seem real to me until I saw the 8%. Wow. Thanks for all your work Shinra and you too Mpgrey! Amazing. I have work to do so hopefully that will keep me occupied.
ReplyDelete13%.wow
ReplyDeleteHow are you guys seeing the upload progression bar?
ReplyDeleteUnder the cover picture above. Shinra manually edits it, so its not real time.
DeleteOh right.. lol. Back to the F5!
DeleteThis seems to be taking longer than previous chapters. I think Shinra's upgrades on his computer is too much for the site
ReplyDeleteeHentai is awfully slow to upload. The night is going to be long for me >_<
DeleteShinra, why don’t u make a torrent or upload it somewhere else, and then when you have some time, you can let your pc to upload it on eHentai.
DeleteGoogle drive seems to work efficiently? I still remember the days you bought dropbox for this.
DeleteAnd then my account was suspended after half an hour for exploding the allocated bandwidth ahahah ^^
DeleteWorking on something much better, based on google technology to distribute content but that's still far from being finished ;)
I second the torrent suggestion! For your dedicated, blog-following fans of course. Haha.
DeleteSplit it into multiple .rar files perhaps?
DeleteCurious as to what you are doing to grant us access, are there any alternative methods so we need not wait for daylight to see this masterpiece?
Else i guess a torrent works
Well a quick google search shows Amazon drive :/ Maybe give it a go?
DeleteI'm here supporting you Shinra! ;)
DeleteThis is a very exciting day!
Big hugs!!!
Just curious, is some alternative being done Shinra? Or are we just letting it upload to e hentai?
DeleteOK everyone, rise your hands, let's give Shinra some bandwidth.
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Busy reading previous chapters. Sorry, can't do that now.
DeleteAs a side note, Presidus Comics link goes to a dead page, and the author has been MIA For years now. Might want to consider removing the link off your page.
ReplyDeleteLook at that spike of fan views on the counter to the right!
ReplyDelete༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ SHINRA-SAMA TAKE MY 'NETS ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ
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Wow. 40% Its happening. I'm just so ready for this. But I have a feeling it is going to be a while...
ReplyDeleteThis wait is killing me!
ReplyDeleteCurious why uploads take so long. You'd think with all the compute power and bandwidth that we have at our disposal in 2018 would make this a lot quicker. Any clue why E-Hentai is so bad at this?
ReplyDeleteAlways well worth the wait, just wish others had the patience to not nuisance you about when the next chapter comes out.
ReplyDelete1 year is a long time. Not everyone is spiritually transcended monk.
DeleteIt was 2 yrs. But its been worth the wait.
Delete50% now, will be nice wake up tomorrow
ReplyDeletewhat a great
ReplyDeleteHoly fuck this is stupid. I really wish you hadn't bothered to put up this fucking uploading bar. It's going to take another day at this point. For someone who bitches about the way fans act, you really taunt them with this shit. You say 'I thought I'd be finished by now' over a month ago, then put up this announcement page three days before it actually comes out. It's just dumb and I don't get it.
ReplyDeleteYou need to fuck off its finally out learn some god damn patience ya little shit.
DeleteIt's not a matter of patience. I can be patient. I've been patient tge last two years, dropping by to check for updates, and it was fine. It's the posts promising 'next week' 'tomorrow' 'almost done' 'coming out today' that wear away my trust in this blog. They're just drumming up attention, I'd be perfectly happy if thry had just done the reasonable thing and NOT FUCKING LIED about time estimates they knew they couldnt reach.
DeleteExcited to read this. I just want some good Miss T scenes. While the fight should be interesting, I don't think the most interested in that. I want to see if there are more unexpected betrayals.
DeleteI think that seeing more corruptions/betrayals is pretty much a given at this point. We’ll just have to see who’s left at the end of this chapter. Rhea will still be left and probably the Oracle as well. There may be some new characters introduced in this chapter as well.
DeleteThe intriguing storyline and the slow corruption of these characters is the driving behind this comic. Part of me wants the forces of Heaven to prevail, but I don’t think I’m alone in wanting to see everyone corrupted and the story end in one massive orgy of darkness and lust!
driving force*
DeleteWhat a fucking loser you are. It's a free comic. They don't owe you shit. Get the fuck out.
DeleteI got so turned on listening to him whine, he's just like the bratty insolent little angels in the comic.
DeleteOnce he goes off to read the actual chapter he's gonna go back to being a subordinate little demon.
dat dial up connection tough
ReplyDeleteHey Shinra I seriously can't wait! Hype is killing me and I'm sure this new chapter is going to be awesome! This last 20% can't be complete soon enough!
ReplyDeleteIt's awesome having really long chapters though I'd suggest you take into consideration the possibility of having shorter but more frequent mini-chapters so fans can rest easy and not have a meltdown like i've seen it happen here.
A lot of Fans need to Relax. When its out, its out.
ReplyDeleteHi everybody.
ReplyDeleteSo lad that will arrive... but i can see the result the page annonce that upload to 84%, that's normal?
Yep. It takes a while to upload to e hentai. It doesn't update in real time. Shinra comes back to the site and changes the status to reflect what is going on. It'll happen.
DeleteI'm hyped.
*glad
ReplyDelete*but ican't see...
sorry for mistakes, thatwas a long day...
the wait is almost over but what if they annouce ww3 today? yeesh
ReplyDeletemother fuker 84%
ReplyDelete20 april
ReplyDeletebirtday god . king . adolf hitler ture man
heil hitler
Thank you for spending all night uploading this! I know it cant be easy!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your patience...
ReplyDeleteanother 20-30 minutes and it should finally be online T_T
Loves You!!! I have been refreshing non stop. If you ever do a comic-con I am a transwoman that will cosplay Mariah
DeleteThanks Again for your Amazing Work
Thank you for all the work, get your well deserved rest.
DeleteLet this damn upload finish then I'll definitely go to sleep mode Zzzzzz
DeleteMaybe next time upload completed pages to a drive so you wont exceed the limit at one go?
DeleteMore then 8 hours to upload ouch... thx for your great work Shinra!
ReplyDeleteShinra, you're da BEST! Congratulations on this piece of eden you've created. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot shinra
ReplyDelete96% !!! so close
ReplyDeleteFinally after 10h of uploading... T_T
ReplyDeleteCongrats! If you're on the same time zone than me, it means you stayed up all night for this, but we did it! Enjoy the chapter, gonna go catch a hours of sleeps.
Enjoy guys.
Hopefully I won't wake up to an angry mob ^^
The night hath begun here! :D A biiiiiiig fucking thank you!
DeleteGet some rest, Shinra! You deserve it!!
Delete"It's the Final Countdown!"
ReplyDeletehttps://youtu.be/9jK-NcRmVcw
When I think of the Final Countdown this is what comes to my mind https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vj7_fxZWDsc
DeleteNormal that the link is chapter 9?
ReplyDeleteYOU DID IT! THANK YOU
ReplyDeletety ty ty
ReplyDeletewill someone please upload a torrent as well??
ReplyDeleteDone, check it on E-H.
DeleteNot all heroes wear capes
Deleteoh my god I love Tethys
ReplyDeleteGreat work as always Shinra!!
ReplyDeleteBut I do have a question, what happened to that red haired Malakim angel that Eve took control of?
We might see her in the final chapter ^^
DeleteAbsolutely AMAZING Shinra! Beautifully done, and well worth the wait. Congrats to MPGrey too!
ReplyDeleteDoes anyone have a link to it? When I go to e hentai it only shows the last post which was a German translation.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Shinra, well worth the wait; thank you for all the hard work you put into this! :)
ReplyDeleteCant find new chapter on ehentai, pls help =(
ReplyDeleteDid you click on the link at the top of this page right under in cover photo?
DeleteNope, but i finally found the torrent on e-h. Thx anyways!
Deleteawesome job shinra! loved it from start to finish. but you leave it at such a cliffhanger, hopefully its not another 2-3 years for the next part. Not criticizing, i know we all have a life. But i wish you the best of luck man.
ReplyDeleteThanks Majorchainpain. I promise I'll deliver something much sooner than 2-3 years ahahaah
Deletewhen i see the incubus corruption scene, I can't wait to see HC04, Miney Corruption scene ><.
ReplyDeleteSuperb job n nice plot..Next chapter will be battle around relic vs sciense :D
ReplyDeleteChapter review time!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat work as always, no doubt. Just some nitpicks...
Why did Tethys stop being blue? Was her corrupted form done in the previous chapters and then scrapped? Her corrupted form looks great, but it would had been better if you gave her a more succubus like outfit instead of a punk rocker outfit.
Valar was corrupted by eve's gang, so i guess it would make sense she would take the form of a monster, but she looks more like an insectoid than a succubus which made my boner confused.
Miss T's old outfit actually looks better than her current one unfortunately... The symbiote thingy wrapped around her represented her corruption better than just a shredded latex suit. Still sad to see no sexy action for her, chapter 10 it is.
Finally... Was looking forward to see the Mariah double futa, but guess we have to see that in chapter 10 too. + Page 526, Mariahs face scared the shit out of me, reminded me of that recent Truth or Dare movie.
Leto + Tethys scenes were great, the rest were okay i guess.
THE CLIFFHANGERS AHHHHHHHHHH
ReplyDeleteAs much as I absolutely love this, I'm really not sure how Shinra plans on closing all of the plot holes and such considering he even added new content like the new relic in this part. Shinra, I have to say, you've grown so much over the years. You transformed from this amateur writer to this fucking master craftsman. I guess you've succumbed to your own work and got stronger like Karin did. :D
WOW that was outstanding shinra and mpgrey, your best work yet and well worth the wait, thank you for spending so much of your time making these comics and sharing them with us!
ReplyDeleteShinra your work is again outstanding. So many little twists and so much corruption in such a beautiful way. You really are a great artist.
ReplyDeleteThe waiting time was definitely worth it and the cliffhanger is really bad again :-)
Thank you so much!
Brilliant once again.
ReplyDeleteThanks for this huge work.
ReplyDeleteLove it. Any chance there is text free version? Or pin ups of some of the "ladies"?
ReplyDeleteNope sorry >_<
DeleteWhat about pregnancies in your stories?
ReplyDeleteHaven't explore this at the moment.
DeleteHell yes! Tethys is amazing. Great design and transformation. You really gave her that look in her eyes that matches her exactly. I love her!
ReplyDeleteI'm not so sure about Ran's model though, something seems to be lacking design-wise.
Anyway, a masterwork of craftsmanship. The page layout and bigger scenes in a single frame allow for some excellent visual focus.
However, I sure hope you're not gearing up for a ... Good Ending.
I noticed Kimi's personality is still in there, as well as Lilith's "failed" exorcism, and now there's an overpowered sword. It sure adds to the tension, but I really hope there will be a Bad Ending for this amazing series.
Cheers mate, all the best
Cool!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWhat will you be working on next part 10 or h.c?
ReplyDeleteHC4
DeleteGood question!
DeleteIf you like heroine corruption, you might enjoy Black Pharaoh's Forsaken Souls comic http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/TheBlackPharaoh/485997/Forsaken-Souls-Page-1-Finished
ReplyDeleteGreat work shinra, I loved Tethys transformation, can’t wait for the next part!
ReplyDeleteJust simply amazing.
ReplyDeleteFantastic,such attention to every aspect from render to writing.
Please knock Harriet out of the park next.
GRANT US EYES, GRANT US EYES
ReplyDeleteWas cleaning out browser tabs that were forgotten for a month in a separate window when I saw this and remembered I haven't checked it since. Was like "oh right, with me forgetting about it, how funny would it be if it was completed this weekend..."
Ayy let's fucking go! Won't be able to look through until tomorrow but already know it's going to be great.
Hope you (and MPGrey) feel happy with how the final product came out as well as perhaps a bit relieved. Especially for a chapter that sounds like it includes a higher amount of action renders, including large-scale scenes that have even more details to worry about.
Cheers guys
Dude you and MPGREY are the best the wait was definitely worth it :P
ReplyDeleteJust wondering which character was your favorite to corrupt?
For me personally, if you're talking about the transformation result, it's definitely the two cherubim near the end of the chapter. I like the wider variety that "team Arachnea" is capable of compared to how all members of the Gadriel fan club visit the same bondage & curvy horns fetish shop. I especially like the end result of the twintailed cherub because that design is sort of like a summary of her corruption process: black stuff that started at the legs, then travelled upwards and covered her eyes.
DeleteStory-wise, my favorite was Tethys and her resulting scene with Ran and Hanuman because it was a joy to write the text for. I feel that Tethys really shines in this chapter and totally claims the spotlight in the scenes she is involved in, so it was motivating to emphasize that by getting as much out of the pictures as possible.
A special shoutout to Alana (dark blue-haired Moyira maiden). Doesn't really count because her corruption was really in the previous chapter, but we see her result now for the first time. Unlike her fellow sin eaters, she didn't get any horns or other gimmicks, yet she looks just as scary-but-still-sexy. Good reminder that sometimes less is more.
Amazing as always Shinra; this installment has been one of the most beautiful and action-packed ones yet, and your style continues to improve tremendously! I liked how the initial lesser angels being corrupted were like an entree to what was to come :p AND finally more Captain Valar!
ReplyDeleteI know there wasn't enough time and room to fit in more and the cliffhangers are always there to keep us hooked, but I hope you will give this series a proper finish. Take as much time as you need to polish it so that you are happy with it without stressing too much.
And to those who are worried about happy/bad endings, perhaps you can consider making alternate endings that a lot of other comics/doujin/games do (e.g. good ending, corrupt ending, silly ending)?
Once again, thanks for your dedication to this series Shinra c:
Fantastic chapter! Thank you, Shinra! A big thank you to MpGrey and HOC as well. Thank you for all of your hard work. It shows in the finished product.
ReplyDeleteI hope that Faye will be permanently corrupted at the end of the series?
ReplyDeleteWOW just WOW. Now I need the next chapter oMG.
ReplyDeleteFantastic chapter. Surpassed my expectations. I was worried that Tethys and the other corruptions/transformations would be like Saga/Miss T that was underwhelming but clearly you learned from that chapter. Loved the backstory about Tethys making the unconscious fall to the dark side. What I like most about corruption is when the character embraces their new persona after fighting the corruption. Whoever did the script for Tethys after her change did a great job.
ReplyDeleteWas not expecting Faye to be corrupted and that was a nice little surprise and well done. Great job on the page where she sees talons growing as she’s fighting it/terrified it's happening.
I figured your last update introduced two new characters would set up a tease for the next chapter. But instead you gave us one of the best scenes so far (and took the characters from scripture - naughty naughty). You introduce these angelic pure characters and immediately corrupt them! I loved the look of the dark cherubim - by far my fav so far. Just to take her and so quickly corrupt her into the exact opposite. I loved the black look head to toe and her teeth being all sharp really made the look complete. My only criticism is I would have liked a few pics of her fighting/transforming and then to embrace after the change.
My only criticism is I didn't like the colour Valar changed too. Distorts her features and just didn't work for me (though the script with her was great and how it happened).
Thanks for the great chapter
Your post makes me very happy. Proves that it's worth it to go to that extra length with the text for every single picture.
DeleteWow, that's fantastic.
ReplyDeleteThe good side is falling drastically and the dark side is winning. Just wonder will there be any fighting between Arachnea and Gadriel?
mother fuker 2 years just 311 pic
ReplyDeletenow 2 years next chapter???!!!! fk u fk u
but ty i love The Fallen Star
2 years everday chak u pag fk u son of bitch
i thing lose my mind
again fk u
plz fast next chapter
I only have one thing to say to those people out there that keep complaining about time. Go read mainstream comics like marvel and dc that have a team of writers and artists to put out a single 25 to 35 page comic in a month. And think he this is not in 3d.
DeleteWhat happened to Tethys being blue lol love all of the corruptions though especially Tethys aha
ReplyDeleteMPGrey what happened to Pam and Betty my I ask will they ever appear again corrupted? Chapter 8
ReplyDeleteAnd will we see the corrupted kids of Caras school and the police station
ReplyDeleteI know everything about the chapter I'm working on but nothing about any chapter yet to be made, so I cannot answer any story questions about what is to come.
DeleteI assume, though, that the scenes and locations you mention could be used if there is going to be a scene where Karin will unleash her virus on Earth.
As for Tethys' blue look, I have bugged Shinra about this a lot because I was convinced readers would ask questions about it. After all, Gadriel clearly says in chapter 8 that "she is ready". Among all the questions I asked about lack of logic or continuity mistakes, Shinra always dodged this one. It came to the point where I didn't want to bother him by bringing it up for the umpteenth time. I suppose it is simply to be left up to the imagination what happened to her blue skin, such as that her nipple device neutralized this color, and that it transferred her physical signs of corruption to more mental ones...
...I don't know. Be creative here. >_<
Or maybe it was just an illusion created by the refraction of light through the cocoon.... ^^'
DeleteHaha thanks MPGrey yeah I guess maybe the blue could of come from the last year cause she was in that world for ten years maybe after all that corruption her body began to turn more demon alike and adding a blue tinge to herself
ReplyDeleteJust the that those two corruptions do look different she has tats >_< and horns but no tail until she gets even more power from the “Cure”
Wold of been cool if those two events were matched cause they looked like to complete different places like she was in a castle but before she was suspended in the air by stone statues in this comic they were black goo love all of the corruptions but I think ran could have looked better if you left some skin on the hands like the green scale corruption at the start and even if the volcanic skin was added to just little parts around here chest and stomach that would of looked so cool
Thanks for the quick reply hope that you have a great time celebrating with Shinra about the amazing comics that you guys create and the absolutely unreal effort that you guys put in to create these awesome characters that turn on anyone just by looking at them. Pat yourselves on the back and keep up the abundant effort and thought of these “beautiful stories” lol more like wet dreams aha
Very awesome chapter indeed! Was surprised by the coercion of the potions lady and the Cliffhanger ending! Even more excited to see what comes next!
ReplyDeleteI finally had a chance to gather my thoughts and put together a proper review of this latest chapter. I apologize in advance if this is a bit lengthy, but I wanted to touch on each transformation/corruption as well as offer some feedback in regards to the plot and future corruptions. I also will be referencing page numbers from e-hentai if you want to look up what I am referring to. If you want the tl;dr version, you can skip to the end where I will offer my thoughts on Issue 9 as a whole.
ReplyDeleteCorruptions/Transformations
Unnamed Angels
They are basically corruption fodder. I liked their scaly appearance, it's something we haven't seen much of. I'm not even sure we get to see their final, transformed state unless we see it on pg. 280? The corruption sequence is nice, we have some good penetration shots on pgs. 262 and 265-266 and a good closeup of some fingering on pg. 276. Mariah is involved in corrupting one of the angels here, but we don't see her do much else for the remainder of the issue. She's kind of wasted here, hopefully we'll see more of her in Issue 10.
Tethys
Since it was revealed that her actual corruption took place during her 12 year tenure in the 5th Circle of Hell (which was a nice revelation, by the way), I'm just going to focus on her transformation here. I really enjoyed how she had a two-part transformation, as it echoes both the transformations underwent by both Starlight and Mariah. They were both already corrupted, but didn't achieve their current look until engaging in further depravity. After Tethys gets the 'cure' from Ran, she gets a second set of horns, a tail, wings, longer hair, tattoos and blackened nipples/areolas. Her 'true form', if you will. Perhaps it is because she had to deal with years of pent-up anger and desire, but I am really liking Tethys and how she has embraced her calling as Legion, the Devourer of Souls!
Hanuman/Ran
I liked how the corruption of these two was assisted by Tethys. Gotta keep it in the family! The sex between Tethys/Hanuman here was good, but I felt there were some missed opportunities. I would have liked to see more of that black squirt we saw during Leto's corruption during pgs. 365-367. I just think it would have been hot to see Tethys squirt on Hanu's face. A bit later she says "I'm gonna fucking cum" but we don't see anything. I also would have liked the sex to be more of a factor in Hanu's corruption, but the tipping point seems to have been when she bites his neck like some vampire. I greatly enjoyed when she tells Hanu to "dig up my booty", a nice line indeed! There also were some nice penetration shots/angles on pg. 376 and pg. 378.
I didn't expect Ran's corruption to be as involved as that of Leto or Tethys, but it was expectedly on par with Hanuman's. She does a nice job of resisting Hanu's advances, but gives in completely when Tethys breaks the vials of serum over Hanu's cock. The serum is used to further enhance Ran's corruption, but I prefer the sequences involving the girl giving in to her subconscious desires to engage in lewd acts as opposed to having it assisted by another source (dark matter, poison, etc). It seems more natural to me and gives the corruption more of a psychological and philosophical bent to it. Ran gives Hanu some nice oral, but I would have liked her to try and take in as much of Hanu as she could. Again, we have an instance where the girl says she is going to cum, but get nothing (pg. 403). If you're going to have a girl cum, let's see it! We've seen it before with Leto and it's sooo hot seeing that black squirt as she is lost in the throes of ecstasy! We get a nice closeup of Ran's pussy on pg. 390 and some nice penetration on pg. 397. Ran also has some very nice dirty talk during this sequence!
It looks like I've reached the text limit. To Be Continued!
The Continuation...
ReplyDeleteI don't really care for Hanuman's demonic form all that much. It looks like someone dumped tar over his neck and shoulders and the eye drip is just ok. Luckily, most of it is covered up by his armor. I feel that not enough was done with Ran's demonic form. We have nothing on her face aside from the flame tattoos on her temples. Nothing was done to her chest, stomach, or thighs. Basically she has horns and the flames covering her hands, lower arms, and lower legs. Would have liked to have seen a bit more from her transformation. I do like the three of them together on pg. 410 and enjoy the fact that both Tethys and Ran have nothing covering those lovely breasts of theirs. Keep them uncovered, I say!
Faye
I honestly wasn't expecting her corruption to last very long considering how we were just introduced to the ultimate absolver of sins in the Sword just minutes before. I absolutely loved the 'voices in her head' with the effective font usage on pg. 441 telling her to give in to her most base desires. Would like to see more of these special fonts used in future corruptions (pg. 441 and pg. 449). There isn't much to Faye's corrupted look, possibly owing to Shinra not wanting to dedicate more thought into something we'll only see for a short time. She's got the requisite claws and horns, plus some red eyes and blackening around her eyes and black face paint. We get to see some nice images of her naked body during the corruption process and some nice penetration shots like those on pg. 454 and pg. 456. Faye has a rockin' bod and she's definitely showing it off on pg. 463!
Zeliel gets some nice action as well, and I've got to say - possibly the luckiest Angel ever? He gets to fuck a bevy of beautiful demon babes and ends up being the hero of the day. Nice!
Captain Valar
Valar's corruption sequence was short, but sweet. She was already on her way to the dark side after being fucked back in Issue 8, and now she just needed that push after taking that vial of dark matter serum. That extra push comes in the form of some soul-sucking sex with a hapless malakim and Big Red Demon Dude. I enjoyed Valar's transformation for what it was, her look is a bit different from what we've seen thus far. We get some nice penetration shots on pg. 485 and also pgs. 487-488. I also like the shot of her on pg. 489 with some nice dialogue. Like I said, was a good transformation. I liked the change in skin color as well as the noticeable increase in her breast size. It reminded me of Mariah's change.
The Cherubim
I kinda figured these two weren't gonna put up much of a fight, and they didn't. The very definition of corruption fodder. However, I do have to admit that the cherubim cat transformation was the most unique I've seen yet, especially considering that a cherubim is also a type/breed of cat. Very clever! Her transformation was one of the most animalistic and full-bodied ones we've seen. We don't really get to see the other cherubim transform at all, but she very much looks like a leatherclad S+M freak, and that's a good thing because she also has a different look to her. I love the mouth full of sharp teeth she has. Gotta be careful with those, especially if she plans on sucking off any demons in the future! There wasn't any sex with these two during their change, but I hope to see them both getting down and dirty in Issue 10.
More To Come...
The Conclusion...
ReplyDeleteTaken as a whole, we have five major plot points in Issue 9. We see Gadriel achieve the full extent of his power after receiving the Unholy Rosary from Leto. He seems unstoppable, he's the Devil after all.
We see the first seraphim from the First Generation in Leto, fall from grace. Her corruption/transformation has been the gold standard for me. This is how future corruptions should be. It was the product of Gadriel's handiwork 100% of the way. He saw sin in her all those years ago and he seized that opportunity to turn her to the dark side. Leto's transformation into a Demon of Sin had everything. It had purpose, it had history, and had plenty of sex. I absolutely loved seeing her change from image to image to image. It was glorious. There were all kinds of positions as Gadriel turned her into his loyal servant; vaginal, anal, fingering, that delicious black squirt from Leto, great dirty talk, I could go on. Her transformation had everything.
We see the introduction of the Sword of Methusaleh, an ancient artifact that can most definitely turn the tide in this ongoing conflict. One strike from this sword absolves all of your sins and you revert back to your non-corrupted self. I'm not trying to be negative here but we're heading into 'Deus ex Machina' territory with the introduction of this sword, especially so late in the story. We were given no hints that an artifact of this much power existed, and we have angels and guardians falling left and right to the forces of darkness with no signs of it ending any time soon. It just seems to me that in order to secure a feasible way to have a 'good' ending to this story, something like this had to be created. It seems silly to me that the Sword would get stolen or destroyed so soon after it appears, so the intent is that it's going to be used somehow (and not just to cleanse Faye and Veritas). I guess we can only wait to see how Shinra plans to use this heading into Issue 10.
We see the product of Karin's research and Arachnea's key to strengthening her monster army effectively be all for naught as it's stolen by Gadriel. Gadriel easily turns Karin to the side of demons and commands her to take the black matter gas to Earth in hopes that the human population will all turn towards sin and embrace darkness. The fact that the dark matter gas is being taken off-world lends us to believe that it won't be a factor in future corruptions, which is good for those of us that prefer more natural corruptions.
We also see that even though Oracle/Metatron was "deflowered" by a poisoned Zeliel in Issue 7, she can still heard God's words. This makes me think that the whole virginity angle in terms of not being able to speak with God is a bit flawed. We don't see the blood from Oracle's torn hymen during her scene with Zeliel as we did with both Starlight and Saga. I could just be overthinking this or it could be that Shinra just overlooked adding that detail in, but I think that it serves to move the plot forward due to the importance of Metatron. Metatron is one of two archangels (the other being Lumiel/Miss T who is a pawn of Arachnea) and basically is the right hand of God. I think that God is going to impart some of his Divine Power to Metatron to really kick things up a notch. Hopefully this will also give Oracle a new look as she is kind of bland right now. Maybe our first Angelic Transformation?
More To Come...
The Future...
ReplyDeleteFuture Corruptions
Zeliel - Yes, he will be corrupted. He's had his time to be the hero and is the only one remaining from the Third Generation to not be corrupted.
Rama - Will be corrupted. He's basically just a lackey, but could be instrumental in assisting with corrupting someone like Rhea.
Rhea/Hyperion - Yes, they both will be corrupted. Yes, Rhea is considered the leader of the Guardians, but doesn't have the strong will that Tethys had. I expect her corruption to be on par with that of Leto's, if not better. Once Rhea goes, Hyperion will follow.
Oracle/Metatron - Could go either way. If she is corrupted, I expect it to be nothing less than epic. Right now there are two archangels - one good, one bad. Oracle hinted at another in Issue 8, so if she does get corrupted we have that new archangel along with the Sword to provide a little faith for those looking for a 'good' ending. She will also be the most difficult to corrupt as she now has a renewed bond with God.
The new Archangel is definitely a wild card as we move forward into the final chapter. Is is going to be an already existing character or a brand new one? If it's an already existing character, my vote to who it might be goes to Faye. We already know that the Order of Kael aren't just mere humans. Even though Faye has already been corrupted once, I think she's a character with some growth potential. If we're going to continue with the '2 female, 1 male' thing, my vote is for Zeliel.
We also can't forget Lilith, who was partially 'exorcised' by Veritas back in issue 8. We later see her cough up some blood, so I hope we get to see what happens with her in this regard. I doubt that she is going to return to a non-corrupted state due to this, but she might begin to have second thoughts in continuing to serve her Father.
It will be interesting to see what Shinra has in store for us as we move on to the final chapter of this epic story. I hope to see more awesome corruptions, fantastic battles, and more sex sex sex! We need to see Arachnea get fucked by someone! If she can't transform into a more human form then let's see some kinky ovipositor sex!
In terms of the last issue, I do hope Shinra breaks it down into smaller mini-issues so as to lessen the wait until Issue 10. Two years is a very long time. I think our final teaser image has some great potential to set up smaller content releases. Each encounter teased in that last cliffhanger image can serve as one mini-issue. Each one can feature a battle and also a corruption/sex scene. Would be more than enough to tide people over for a bit and could be done in any order while also breaking away to continue the main story. We have some really great pairings in:
1. Carla vs. Valar+Demon
2. Starlight vs. Lumiel
3. Rhea vs. Lilith
4. Leto vs. Hyperion
5. Rama vs. Mariah
All of the encounters could feature a cutaway to what's happening on Earth, what's happening with Gadriel, what's happening with Metatron, what's happening with Zeliel and the Sword, what's happening with Arachnea and her march on Eden, etc.
Anyway, I apologize for being so long-winded! If anyone would like to further discuss this issue or anything else related to Issue 10, just let me know! Thanks again to Shinra and MPGrey for a fantastic piece of 3D sex and story!
Thanks SupermanikSol for taking the time to write such a great feedback and for putting so much thought into it. Just know that it is very highly appreciated
DeleteGreat chapter. The story, the scenes and rendering was superb. It was all worth the wait. Tethys stole the show and made this chapter great.
ReplyDeleteI think I speak for most when I say I
hope the sword to fight the harness falls into the wrong hands. Most dont to see the good guys win. Also I hope Arachnea takes a human form at some point.
Thanks again for all of the hard work Shinra!