Harrriettttt !!!
Yes, she's finally back at Hawthorne University to continue her fight against the forces of Darkness!
It's short, it's fun, it's light-hearted... it's Harriet Cooper and The Wizard's Sacrifice - Spell 2!
As you know, this saga is the fruit of my collaboration with JNightShade, so please, don't forget to send him some love too ;)
As you will see, this chapter features a brand new full HD format, closer to the a graphic novel.
It's meant to be watched in full screen mode, so do not hesitate to zoom in Ahahaha.
I'm sure you will like the the depth this format gives to details, and specially with the hum hum money scenes ^^
Let me know what you think of it, and if I should keep on using it or should I rather return to an original comic strip layout.
** Please note that this comic is free, and contains content which is only suitable for adults
All 3D models in this comic are 18+ years old intended.
Enjoy!
Yes its done jehaa thx!
ReplyDeleteAs usual, awesome work Shinra! Thanks for such quality content.
ReplyDeletegreat you are the best i love your work :)
ReplyDeleteYES!!!! i hope it has at least one really great dark corruption
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately there was none, only the first steps of corruption was initiated, bella was already a succubus, and it was basically just bella, gellina going around having sex.
DeleteHow to open? I only see upload 90%
ReplyDeleteThank you for your awesome work !!! You're the best !!
ReplyDeleteI already see a problem with the new HD format. Text in the boxes and balloons are really small.
ReplyDeleteGreat job, the size text is a little too short
ReplyDeleteI hope for the next chapter the lord will not only create succubus/incubus but introduce some other demon corruption to fulfil other specific mission
nice update, and so glad to see you working hard for us corrupted fans of yours. Only criticism I have is the writing format in this was a little small and kinda hard to read, but if that is the only complaint then nothing to really worry about so thank you :D
ReplyDeleteI love the HD format as it allows us to appreciate your work much more.
ReplyDeleteWe don't go as quick through the pictures and can really enjoy them.
Just think about maybe making the text a bit bigger. Honestly the pictures are awesome but the text is almost undecipherable.
Very good Second story and the corruption for this chapter are more better than the first chapter, Shinra. Congrats to do something special with this second Chapter of Harriet Cooper.
ReplyDeleteah, hopefully someone does a torrent for this. it will likely look better downloaded, especially the text.
ReplyDeleteIt definitely looks better when downloaded and viewed in full-screen. Ironically, the text looks even bigger than usual that way.
DeleteThis seems to be the same mistake as G9comics did with Shadow Ranger Zero: because the original pages are so big, it's easy to forget that everything, including the text, will be downsized so much when viewed on e-hentai.
Shinra, you did a very, very good job on the last-minute page 088 fix! The result is perfect.
Great. But a little succinct story wise.
ReplyDeleteI think Im right in saying this would be about the same size as the last chapter if it was in comic format and would probably need some extra images for that. But for me this seems to lose some of the motion or impetus of a comic. It is just one image after another not a moving scene as such.
Perhaps its just me but I prefer a comic layout.
Thanks for this chapter and have a great trip
Excellent work, as always Shinra and thank you for all your hard work to give this to us :)
ReplyDeleteYou asked for our opinions on the format: While there is nothing wrong with new way, I really do prefer the old presentation method; with this method you really go from page to page very quickly while the older method had more on it per page.
Which does segway into my next point that because of the new method, this chapter wasn't really any longer than the last one, despite having almost double the pages. This is because in the old method you would have, on average, 2-3 renders per page, like a graphic novel or w/e, whereas this one only has an average of 1 render per page, so while I got excited when you said that there were almost 150 pages, we really only ended up getting about 70-80 or so by the old method.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to be critical, these are your stories and I'm fine with whichever method you want to use, but if I had to choose then I'd rather you use the old fashion (and with a lower resolution so e-hentai doesn't squish everything down).
Still, I think it's worth saying again: you did excellent work AGAIN and I look forward to your next project when you release that as well. :)
Shinra i noticed you made the succubus skin lighter compared to the previous H.C, it makes their skin look shiny/reflective/plastic in a sense, was that intentional?
ReplyDeleteProps to the burning charcoal tail for bella, its creative but the burning circle at the tail looks weird like the tail was smelted onto her back xD.
Awesome work as always and even laughs.
I always celebrate new Shinra-kun releases with a 40 minute shower.
ReplyDeleteI wonder why you take a shower xDDDDDDDDDDDD
DeleteYou need to explain me how the hell you can take a shower whilereading the comics Ahahahah ^^
DeleteBe very careful with your smartphone/tablet, that's how.
DeleteNot that I don't like this series, I'm a bigger fan of the Fallen Star one, so I view this as one step closer to Liber Genesis being released
ReplyDeleteI liked more when it is a comic version... this way of publishing is so mainstream...
ReplyDeletePraise shinra!!
ReplyDeleteI didn't really like the storyboard format (one panel per page), aswell as the small text.
ReplyDeleteI (and probably more) have a small monitor, not a widescreen so I much rather prefer the comic book format (multiple panels per page) with bigger text. The high-res models look great tho, even if I have to zoom in to notice details.
As for the content, it was all teasing IMO, preparing the stage for chapter 3. Still a great work of yours.
Thank you for doing this, Shinra.
Congrats to another good story Shinra. Or should i say your royal highness, your highness? xP
ReplyDeleteI've never thought about it... but now that you say it... royal works fine for me :P
DeleteLike other commentors, I had difficulty reading the text in exhentai. I liked the story though, even if I found it a little anticlimactic - lots of people had their corruptions initiated - Prof Calliope, The DJ, the blonde girl, the one with a crush on Harriet, and Ranger - but we haven't seen an of them fall all the way in this chapter
ReplyDeleteJust like the previous TFS, hyping everything for the next chapter. Shinra the suspense master.
DeleteWell you know what they say....always leave them wanting more...
Delete=w= b very good story thank you shunra- san
ReplyDeletehi! as ussual the story's very good! so as the nice graphics!
ReplyDeletei preffer the comic style, and here is a sample of how it look likes to me, on a 13"
my normal zoom (100% or 120%) on fallen star http://postimg.org/image/bixwatnlt/
harriet cooper same zoom http://postimg.org/image/c8ugs0uqv/
harriet cooper maximum zoom http://postimg.org/image/fo253pett/
the text balloons look very small, then affect the reading
keep uppin!
thanks!
* (110% or 120%).. sorry
ReplyDeletegreat work Shinra!
ReplyDeleteI love the new display of pictures (one panel each pages).
ReplyDeleteWe can check out the art so much more.
I never realized how much quality the pictures were at.
Honestly it's much better.
I think the real problem was the small captions that's why the storyboard format wasn't well received.
ReplyDeleteI really think the format for HarrietCooper 2 is the best format you've used so far.
Usually I go through the comic much faster and feel a bit cheated because your graphics are so detailed that it doesn't have any place in such small boxes.
Here it was an awesome read except for the small captions.
Good stuff overall but I do have a few critiques...
ReplyDelete1) While this was a fun experiment, I much prefer the normal comic format. This "HD" format makes it feel too much like most other comics like this. While it makes it easier to see the full page on one screen, I would usually just scroll down and read it like a comic. A lot of laptops have touchscreens now with tablet modes as well. I hope you go back to that format.
2) I was disappointed not to see any corruption in the end. I think you can balance building the story with corruption. This would be fine if like... we knew part 3 was coming in a month or so but you'll be going back and forth between multiple series so hell, we might not get part 3 until the end of the year. I think it's good to make sure there's one big corruption per chapter.
3) I like that this is a bit more "simple" than Fallen Star. I love Fallen Star but I think there were too many side-stories and it's maybe gone on a bit long. I think G9's 7 chapters for Shadow Rangers (and it looks to be the same with Gaia rangers) is perfect.
I actually think you and G9 could learn a bit from each other. I think he has better plotting and length but I think your transformations/corruption is a bit more satisfying/evil.
Please keep in mind this was written with the intention of one coming out every couple of months. I also think it gets less "simple" as it goes-though more linear than FS.
DeleteAlso, been chatting privately with Shinra and I think a hybrid of his old comic style and the new style might work best. Old style with more full page graphics...just my thought. And sorry about the small print-looks fine on the download Ehentai squishes it quite a bit...-JN
A hybrid of the formatting would be best. Use the comic layout advancing the story and showing flow/action with a mix of two/three panels per page.
DeleteThen when either emphasis or a stunning image is desired use the full page.
Nice work, very seductive.
I don't think I would call the story simple. The first two chapters do not a book or comic make. they have set up the story and while the second was succinct it did its job a bridging the beginning to the rest of the story it allows an opening up to the rest of the story.
DeleteA hybrid would work I believe.
Thanks for all thework on this.
Part 3 would not be out till like next cycle, after the TFS, yoru, legion and so on i believe. Probably in a year time at least, heck the previous Harriet chapter came out 2 years ago.
DeleteI have to agree with you on the G9 plotting length, G9 has a better balance but g9s transformation is not my cup of tea, whereas shinra's one is much more similar but somewhat lackluster in the transformation sense in the recent updates. Bella has an odd circle where the tail is attached to her back (might be intentional but looks like a weird texturing error) , and comparing the old gellina and the new, the new one looks better but the details (nipple piercings, etc are removed). While the texture and quality of renders have improved, the amount of corruption details have dipped.
Thank you, but honestly I don't think Shadow Ranger has a good plot >_<
DeleteIt was made without a good planning (no planning at all). I made it chapter by chapter, even page by page.
In Gaia, me and mpgrey (yes, he helps me a lot on those plot length and paradox removal) tried to fix those mess into one "solid" story line. Still it's quite a mess compared to Shinra's comic.
About the transformation style, your are correct, me and Shinra has a different "taste". I prefer "beauty transformation" over "evil / demon style transformation".
But, I prefer that way, so there are some choices for reader to choose their favs.
About the small text. I've had this problem before, and maybe you guys no idea, that we never thought that the text gonna be that small. It's weird but that's true.
An enjoyable read, but it was a bit disappointing that there was no real corruption going on. But I am looking forward to see what happens next.
ReplyDeleteThe small text also makes it a bit annoying to read it on the tablet in bed. Spell 1 allowed for much more comfortable reading.
small text, no corruption and not enough story per page
ReplyDeleteloved the HD though, hybridize with old style
$5 says the headmaster is evil
Actually, would it be possible to maybe upload the previously rendered pictures for us to admire. Since its already there its a waste to just stash it so let your fans admire your work more
ReplyDeleteif the previous 22% includes the old bella succubus render, perhaps show it to us so we can give more feedback
DeleteThe first 22% "draft" did not have Bella in succubus mode.
DeleteBasically it's exactly the same picture of the scene with the headmaster and the beginning of the scene with Bella and professor Caliope.
If there's a real demand, I could upload them but that would not be before I come back as I don't have this under my hand here ^^
Always be interesting to see the before and after, that's what corruption is about anyway >;). This chapter is over and now we go back to lurking mode and await the next great shinra release coming in 6 months ;_;
DeleteA question though, since the next TFS would be in parts, and it wont be the 500 page chapter, would it be around 70 ~ 100 per part? That would be slightly faster right
Ok the first feedbacks have come up, so I guess it's also time for me to react to them...
ReplyDeleteFirst, I'd like to apologize for the small text >_<
In all the test we've done previous to the release, this never came out and it's only after uploading on eHentai that we noticed it was squashing the text and the resolution to something quite low. This HD format was really a trial for me and I also understand that this might not be the best way to go in the future but that you'd rather like a hybrid version. This type of layout is, as an example, unusable for a comic like fallen star, and it was not in my plan to use HD for TFS. But maybe using this HD format for money scene only, I'm sure you would appreciate Miss-T doing a great spread in a full HD format.
On an other topic, I'm glad I can still feel what will receive a "less good" feedback when I'm reflecting on my work. Mpgrey will be here to tell you that the lack of corruption, or rather the lack of corruption "process" was something that I've foreseen a while ago. Unfortunately or fortunately, this saga is different then the Fallen Star. It's much faster because much shorter, the story is more light hearted, more fun and I'm not the one writing it. So it will obviously differ to what you're used to in terms of corruption with TFS. Please also don't blame this chapter of Harriet for the mistakes I've done with chapter 8. I can still feel the bitterness against it, but don't worry I've learnt my lesson.
But I won't back down with one thing... chapter 8 was not too long in itself, chapter 8 was just missing the parts that you guys were expecting, and if it had been there, nobody will have complained about the side story taking main one's spotlight >_<
But back to Harriet Cooper, where because I have all the script already :D
I know that the corruption processes to come, might be different to what you are expecting. So in good and attentive artists hum hum, This is maybe something I and JNight will have to take into consideration for future release.
Miss T "spreading" sounds like a good idea, we haven't seen any of that good stuff since she was corrupted, shes half naked all the time without the real action, hope the next TFS has some good scenes with her.
DeleteAaaand yes, the previous TFS was more or less about tethys and we did not get to see the final one but instead it was more of moriya island and the introduction of the unique angel that is brainwashed/corrupted but still has angel powers so i guess that lost the "corruption" factor for that chapter.
Congrats on another well done comic!!! I loved it for the most part, The pacing and the story itself were great. The HD images/ renders were also great. As people have stated earlier, I'm not a big fan of the single/double shots in the pictures. I prefer the comic style of previous comics and save the single shot pages for money-shots. Also as you have seen and explained about the writing being small. Thankfully I have a huge screen to read it on.
ReplyDeleteMy only question is that did time pass between chp.1 and chp.2? You make a point at the beginning to read the rules and that Bella only did it twice. So in this issue Bella is clearly a demon along with Tom who only did it once. So I'm a little confused...
Congrats again Shinra and Jnightshade on another fantastic comic. Can't wait for more HC in future!!
A short period of time passed, keep in mind as chapter 1, ended Gellina was off with a "places to go people to fuck." You may infer that it was Tom she was off to see....
DeleteFirst of all, I'd to congratulate Shinra and Jnightshade for your amazing work (H.C. is my favorite comic just behind Fallen Star). I have some questions and comments :
ReplyDelete1) Like it was asked above, why did you choose to not show us Bella's final transformation ?
2) Concerning the format, the quality is awesome. You are improving your skills from chapter to chapter. However, I still prefer a comic format (many frames within a single page) even though it means poorer quality pics. When I read that chapter I felt you were wasting place with only one picture by page.
2) The plot is taking place smoothly, it is not as simple as it might appear and it opens a lot of possibilities (very good end !). I think that Dumbledore's scene was really too long (20 pages !!) for nothing much, but it was perfect otherwise (Thus, you could have saved some pages for Minea and Bella scene ^^).
Great job guys ! I can't wait for the next chapter (but rest before okay).
Bella final transformation (though I hesitate to use the "final") happened at the end of spell one. We were going for subtle after Gellina's rather spectacular transformation. I thought a second rather similar transformation would be redundant and anti-climactic, I hope you don't feel too cheated.
DeleteGellina absorbed that guys " life essence" and grew stronger, would it be that she and bella might further transform since you hesitated to use the word final are you hinting that they might further change? This chapter initiated the corruption of four characters, the teacher,the random girl, random lucky guy and the minea, shinra probably has a lot of succubus/incubus models to do in due time.
DeleteMaybe in the next chapter, more details can be added to the succubuses or at least have a succubus outfit like gellina in chapter 1, the corruption feel is stronger and they dont look like they just changed their skins color.
Like anonymous above stated, gellina and the last bella scene could have been longer, but i guess the story part still has to stay. The gellina part was quite a skip though, she was transforming and in the next moment the clothes were all off, it would have been a sight to see her in that outfit and then taking it off. ( Further stretching the money scene ;) )
I don't agree on this point.
DeleteI think the corruption feel is stronger when it's more of a body/mental change than a simple outfit change.
It's much more realistic.
For my part, I was glad that the piercings had been removed for Hariett 2.
(to Jnightshade) I really liked Harriet Cooper II. The new form for the "Hermione" archetype (I don't know her exact name) looked much better and very cute.
DeleteIt lacks some corruption savage corruption from the master male succubus. I hope he'll be the one to corrupt Hermione or Ginny (although I liked the girl on girl action
Great job Shinra and Jnightshade. You guys delivered a fun comic with an interesting new format, albeit had small text but I honestly liked the new style because it gave you more to see in the hard work and details. The story was short and sweet and had a good deliverance which I felt was a positive effect on the story, I am very interested in Harriet's corruption, and I like the contrast of the ball to have a sinister mask to something deviant happening. All in all I liked it very good, both should be proud :)
ReplyDeleteNow may I ask, does this mean Yoru 2????? :)
Well if he does procude yoru 2 , TFS will only be out next year it seems.
DeleteSure some of us feel the same way that the previous TFS was "unfinished".
Problem with too many comics have caught up now it seems. If Shinra is going to make yoru instead of TFS there better be some good corruption in it, the previous chapter wasn't really corruption.
When you say previous corruption do you mean in Yoru or in TFS?
DeleteI was referring to yoru, the previous TFS did not really have that much of a corruption, but there were still some.
DeleteFor the most powerful ninja to have fallen evil, thats some pretty underwhelming corruption. Her corrupted form wasn't anything spectacular at all, maybe something you would do for your side characters. 2 things make a corruption comic, the transformation and the things they do after the corruption, yoru 1 was focused on the dude toying with her that was why it was a weak chapter.
Shinra probably is going to remodel her cause of the new technology he is using, and hopefully she gets a more "evil" appearance and have some scenes of her doing evil stuff.
Yoru is my least favorite series (probably cause of the weak chapter 1) and if i'm going to wait another quarter of a year for TFS cause of yoru, yoru 2 better be good.
I honestly hope Yoru will come after the new chapter of TFS or Legion II.
DeleteThe corruption is really focused on cigarettes which makes the whole comic more of a personnal quirk of the author than something that can be enjoyed by most readers.
I don't mind but I'd prefer any other comic to be released before this one.
Well I can respect your decision, but here is the thing. Yoru 2 has been delayed and on the back burner for 2 years. Personally corruption is a matter of opinion. Just because a corruption doesn't span an entire series doesn't mean its bad. To me the corruption is the corruption. We all have different means to what it means. Making a girl dress differently is not my idea of corruption and the only reason Yoru was the way it was is because the concept is in the corruption of people as a whole not the character. I know you may not like this, but it is fair to assume that there is different tastes out there with different ways to show it. Plus I feel it is time for a Yoru 2 comic just because 2 years of patiently waiting is long enough lol. It is up to Shinra if he will grant this wish or not, but I been waiting very patiently to have my next installment told.
DeleteJust giving my opinion. Your comics focus on a very specific fetish so not everybody is interested. I think it's logical.
DeleteAnd don't assume that I just look for "costume changes" in my corruptions. On the contrary, I really like the focus on mental liberation (focusing on some of the restraints being broken by the corruption).
Honestly, I don't really care. I just voiced my opinion.
My bad i forgot to include that my opinion is based on what i expect from a Shinra comic. Shinra tends to go for mental and appearance changes and some of them are really appealing. Yoru looked more like a G9 comic instead of a Shinra comic and i favor shinras style more and don't be mistaken. I'm not saying my kind of corruption is the only one that can exist, i'm here giving my opinion and its more of how its not something he normally does instead of me trying to change what he does.
DeleteLike the anonymous above stated, yoru is based on a different fetish from Shinras TFS and judging from the sin fighters comic you commissioned g9 no doubt you will look forward to yoru. I myself would also prefer any other comic than yoru but to each its own, its still Shinras decision at the end of the day afterall.
3rd anonymous here.
DeleteAt least Yoru gives us a male villain who actively corrupts the heroines.
The cigarette stuff depends on people (I could do with or without, it doesn't bother me that much) but the rest: ninjas, demons, great sex scenes (etc) hasn't been in much comics. So yeah, I wouldn't mind more.
I prefer Yoru than Legion. In Legion literaly nothing happenned and there is no male villains.
DeleteWell as you said we all like different styles of corruption. Personally for me corruption can be two ways. The style you are talking about is more realistic to corruption. It is similar to the style of watching a friend go down a dark path and begin to pop these foreign new thoughts and ideas and morals to the point you barely recognize them anymore. With Yoru I wanted to do a more fantasy approach. I did not want to spend so long on the corruption because there were many more people beyond the main character. That seemed to be an issue, because the story is not focused on the characters, it is focused on the world and its villain, and has a more sub tone to the story. It is not about the demise of these characters as much as what is causing it and what is happening to ensure this demise. Plus, TFS is Shinra's story. It is his most devoted outlet in comics. It would not have been fair for me to be like, well we need to have X issues and really stretch it out as well as TFS. In the end I had to consider Shinra's feelings too, and we did talk it out as to how much I could put into it. Also, I wanted to not get him burned out to not do TFS because he loved it so. So I made a comic that was completely different, and while not traditionally like the others, I feel the focus laid more on going into the comic and seeing a story from a natural view. You cheer for the villains because you want to see corruption. You want to see them get the sex from the heroines. At the same time, you cheer for the heroines, who you want to see attempt to fight the villains and be females who give it their all and not just want to fuck because they are horny.
DeleteTo me, corruption is something different. I respect all opinions, and I write a story that really had power and thought put into it. I know I am against the masses because of the smoking but it is not a comic about smoking. It is a comic of corruption, hypnosis, and a struggle that has yet to be even explained. While I understand the hype of TFS, I also point out that I have waited 2 years for Yoru. I been patient and let everyone have a turn to get their comics out and even been patient enough to significantly cut my planned number of issues because of other circumstances out of my control. I have some good tricks up my sleeve, but remember I only got 1 issue that was around 113 long 2 years ago. The very first fallen star was very quick...very short....and did not have much long term corruption in it at first. It took time to build it into what it is now. But it had interesting ideas and it was different. I think I can bring some new WOW moments to the table, and at least give new ideas and concepts that have not been out there before.
Well we all have have stated our preferences and since you claim you have some tricks, if yoru is out first it better not be a dissapointment. I ignored the first few TFS , it was more of story and only read them later on to understand. What caught my attention was the 6th chapter, so lets hope the next chapters to come will have something thats interesting.
DeleteIn my personal opinion, the smoking aspect was kind of hot, and it's not because I like girls that smoke. In fact, the concept generally disgusts me. The reason why it's attractive in this instance is because of the context. The smoking symbolizes rebellion, hedonism, moral degeneration, which are all related to corruption. The negative aspects, such as smell and health issues, would normally be what turns me off, but in the context of these corruptions, where magic can be used to mentally and physically alter human beings, I don't see it as being significant.
DeleteI think corruption is the same way. You put me in front of a giant slimy tentacle creature or a psychotic super-villain in real life and you bet your ass I'm gonna be too scared shitless to even consider anything sexual. But that's what separates fantasy from reality; it lets us explore dangerous, exciting scenarios without any real danger or risk. In my mind, the story did a great job representing the fantasy side of smoking, highlighting what makes it attractive.
In real life I hate cigarettes. I do hookah occasionally, but I'd never touch a cigarette.
In real life I have absolutely no opinions on cigarettes.
DeleteI don't "love" it or "hate" it.
It's like cars or soap: I just don't see what it has to do with erotic stories.
I don't know. It kind of makes me laugh and gets me out of the story myself.
Thanks. I liked it a lot. Looking forward to the next chapter!
ReplyDeleteShinra hello I wanted to ask you who am the female character in bottom of the page 24 of the Fallen star episode 5 afflicts for the delay but by reading again it I am request which was this character
ReplyDeletePS: this episode is my to prefer because I adore the corruption of nun if not your work is just extraordinary
if you could remake an episode of the kind
sorry for my English im french
plz just The Fallen Star Ch IX: Liber Genesis plz The Fallen Star Ch IX: Liber Genesis plz The Fallen Star Ch IX: Liber Genesis
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ReplyDeleteThe http://g.e-hentai.org cannot be open, is there any other site where I can watch?
ReplyDeleteThat is pretty weird. The link at the top of this thread (below the cover picture) should always take you directly to the comic. You don't need an account or anything for g.e-hentai.
DeleteIt's working fine for me. Can you try again? Perhaps the whole website just had a slight hiccup when you tried before.
Still cannot work for me.I cannot open http://g.e-hentai.org nearly 1 year, bc I am in China, and I come here through free gate, Could you please copy it and e-mail to me?
Deleteshawn7290@gmail.com Please help me.
Deletewhen will shinra be back ? Awaiting the final verdict whether Yoru or TFS will be out next
DeleteI assume it is your internet provider, way too big to e-mail. Probably a solution can be found, up to Shinra.-JN
DeleteMy IE explore is Google. I dont know how to solve this problem. Use software jump fireware of internet is illeagal here.
DeleteThe Great Firewall of China blocks most all pornography sites from all of China, so there's a possibility that there's simply no way around besides using proxies.
DeleteFrom what I hear though, almost all of my computer-savvy friends in China use proxies in some way, and they haven't gotten in trouble. Just read up on and learn to use a proxy.
I can't wait to read whichever series Shinra is planing to work on next, I hope Legion gets a 2nd chapter soon though
ReplyDeleteI'm not a fan of Legion.
DeleteThere is no male villain taking charge.
I fear it's going to be more femdom rather than maledom from what I've seen.
:-P
Same here.
DeleteI really prefer to read stories with big muscly men taking charge.
As a woman, I find it much more sexy :-)
Well TFS spotlight is on the great devil himself so you are in luck for big muscly men. I think shinra has too many comics on hand now than he can handle, comics have to wait for a yearly interval before being released. Only way to solve the problem mc comix approach where a small 10 ~ 15 page comics is released every half a month but shinra said before he wants people to judge the whole thing instead of part so he refused to do parts in the first place.
DeleteNonetheless, of course all of us would read whatever shinra produces but each of us have our own favorite comics :)
I like Legion because of the female villain, and the transformative aspects - Sexy women becoming even sexier monsters is my thing
DeleteI think we're the same.
DeleteBut I like it eve more when they become a male villain's sexual monster.
I can identify with the male villain this way.
Me, I would corrupt heroines, make them even more desirable, and then send them to corrupt even more people for me.
:-)
I just hope Shinra will choose anything but Yoru...
ReplyDeleteThe first chapter was not bad, but the whole cigarette fetish is completely out of place in a ninja world. It would have been good to see a good story taking place in feudal japan with ninja techniques and all but IMHO, we already had Sin Fighter from G9 and Yoru, and I think it's time to switch to something else than smoking ninjas, it has been done twice already.
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Deleteit would be wasting shinra's time an energy to work on another chapter of Yoru No Magiin. It does not worth it. I don't find ninja girls smoking sexy and it looks like this guy is only commissioning story with smoking involves. I'm sure nearly all corruption in Yoru would involve smoking... no thank you. Please shinra, work on the new chapter of fallen star
As another anon above was saying, I think Shinra has too many on-going projects on his hands. For me, he should focus to finish Fallen Star and then he would be more available to continue the other projects.
DeleteActually, if I'm not mistaken, Shinra told us about another big project he was preparing for the after Fallen Star. I'd rather see him working on this one after fallen star. Shinra has the best stories and I'm sure he is preparing something big!
I DOn't Mind Legion, but I woulds choose Liberee Genesis for fallens star if possible
DeleteThis is not a poll... Shinra will do whatever he wants to do.
DeleteSorry to say that about Shinra but Yoru was the worst comic he has done so far. Legion was better, more promising.
DeleteIt might not be a poll, but i'm sure people, especially Shinra, isn't stupid enough to spend time producing something only a small majority like. Especially when it comes to comics like these which takes a few months.
DeleteLike i mentioned above, if he really has to do yoru due to commissions or whatever, it better be good enough to sway or at the minimum pacify majority of the fanbase for his other series. There are too many comics on hand and with all the long production times there is no space for yoru, all the other series seem more promising and appealing to majority of the fanbase.
A solution without completely neglecting the yoru fan base would be to release it in parts, so it does not greatly impact Shinras other comics.
Actually, my two first choices are:
Delete1) Hariett Cooper Ch.3
2) TFS Liber Genesis
Yoru was great everywhere... The only part where it hurt was its focus on the cigarettes that take you out of the story.
DeleteOtherwise there was a very good villain, great sex scenes and an amazing setting.
I agree. It was my favorite comic except for the cigarettes.
DeleteThe corruption/sex scene was great with a good mix of the two (the corruption form was a bit too ugly but the way until there was awesome).
One I really like was Harriet Cooper II. The new form for the "Hermione" archetype (I don't know her exact name) looked much better and very cute.
It lacks some corruption savage corruption from the master male succubus. I hope he'll be the one to corrupt Hermione or Ginny (although I liked the girl on girl action)
Chapter 3 and 4 should be much more focus on corruption ;)
DeleteShinra are you referring to chapter 3 and 4 of H.C?
Deleteplz just The Fallen Star Ch IX: Liber Genesis plz The Fallen Star Ch IX: Liber Genesis plz The Fallen Star Ch IX: Liber Genesis
ReplyDeleteYou guys do realize Yoru was a paid commission and still is a paid commission. Ever think the person who paid him to do it deserves to see his or her vision come to life for the money they paid?
ReplyDeleteAnd that person has to realize just because Shinra allowed him to do paid commission, don't delay the comic that made this site big with a comic that has the lowest rating on this website. Its the least interesting story with a forced themed.
DeleteYes in due time it has to be done and published, i hate it, i'm sure others do, cause this guy with the privilege of being able to commission goes around taking up the time of the only few corruption comic producers with the most mild and unentertaining fetish.
Its been 3 years dude
Delete3 years and barely anyone complains, delay TFS by another few months and many people come up to complain, get the picture? 3 years or 10 years, no one cares if it sucks, cause no one wants it, just because its been a long time does not mean time should be spent now to salvage it, Shinra has too many projects on his hand now and heres a nice opportunity to kill one of them and maybe remake it after his other projects have been completed. Final decision is up to shinra himself, after all all this is a drawback from trying to have both quality and quantity.
Delete@mpgrey is it allowed to write an email to you for an normal follower here, or is it only used for serious buisness like g9 work and shinras work ?
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely. I am able to do normal talking and stuff too.
DeleteAmazing, right? ;P
But seriously, yes, that's of course what email is meant for.
I'll see you there.
well i dont have an google account and dont intend to make one (sorry), so i cant see your email adress thanks to the option hey you can only access this when you open it with google mail or yahoo :D, so i use gmx email a free german one (greetings from germany i guess). can you write it down here or is it a bad idea? P.S i saw a small little thing on the left side of my screen that says follow here with email, so does that mean i can be a follower without being on google mail etc. ?
DeleteNo worries. I didn't know it doesn't my email address if you don't have a google account yourself.
DeleteYou can find me at masterpasje (at) hotmail (dot) com
I am not familiar with the "follow by email" option that the blog gives you.
I suppose it should work for any email address and not just for google mail.
*doesn't SHOW my email address
Deleteok thanks
Delete@Shawn...RE: China Firewall
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I hope this helps :)
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@ Shawn
ReplyDeleteRE: China Firewall
A good friend of mine uses TOR www dot torproject dot org
I hope this helps :)
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Woooo we're getting serious here, the dark/deep Web...
DeleteI guess it's customary for a blog who's talking about corruption Ahahaha...
Unblock US is also really good and cheap, internet as if you were in the US.
It's the one I was using to get access to netflix while it was not available in my country yet ^^
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When would you start a new project?
ReplyDeleteHopefully... really soon!
DeleteYou can finally put the debate to rest in which wheter Yoru or TFS would be next
DeleteHey, why not HC spell 3...(actually I'm hoping Shinra will do a part of fallen star and sneak in spell 3 somewhere)...
DeleteCheeky Jnightshade2. Why not? H.C is getting interesting
DeletePlease finish TFS, it's your best work and starting yet ANOTHER project now will mean we get to read the final issue 5 years from now.
DeleteYou're the best and we love you, Shinra
I'd love to see HC spell 3 soon.
DeleteCan't wait to see Minea being corrupt!
I think you mean corrupt(ed).
DeleteBut I agree fully. HC has been my favorite comic so far. The professor against the dark arts is a good villain and I hope he'll corrupt Hariett.
Its impossible for H.C to be out next, since it was the previous release, its either TFS or H.C, or maybe if Shinra decides to troll all of us , Legion. H.C 3 might come in a year or 2 time.
DeleteShinra all your comics are great but please work on Yoru 2 first. Its been two years since it has had its chance at a sequel. It wouldn't take much time as TFS series or HC.
ReplyDeleteWhat makes you think yoru is faster to produce? For tfs, since its released in parts. Part 1 would most likely be faster as shinra already has some 3d assets from previous Tfs chapters. He would have to redo most stuff for yoru 2. H.C and yoru are meant to be short chapters so I dont see how yoru is any faster. HC maybe but Tfs part 1 is definitely faster.
DeleteReleasing TFS8 in 3 parts was an incidental exception because it was so big. There is no intention to release every TFS chapter in multiple parts from now on.
DeleteOh did Shinra change his mind? He did previously say
Delete"Volume? yes, volume... As for the last chapter, "volume" 9 will most likely be released in 3 chapters, giving you the satisfaction to enjoy your dose of Fallen Star on a more "regular" basis."
Ah yes, I stand corrected.
DeleteI had interpreted that as a new story arc that would be divided in 3 chapters.
All this mixing up of the words "volume", "chapter", and "part" is getting confusing. ^_^
He did say regular basis so i interpreted that it was going to be like TFS 8, but to clarify what it means is that 3 normal length chapters make up Volume 9?
DeleteYes, from the looks of it, TFS9 (let's just call it like this) will be like TFS8, with 3 parts of a normal size.
DeleteBut this is just speculation from my side. The big boss himself will need to confirm this.
3 parts of a normal size, wouldn't that be a 1000 pages?
DeleteBy Shinra's standards maybe, yes. >_<
DeleteNah, I meant a more healthy, normal size such as around 150 or so pages, similar to the three parts of TFS8.
Great, can't wait, still waiting for the big boss to give his verdict on which comic hes making next
DeleteShinra when are you resuming work?
ReplyDeleteShinra are you on another business trip? xD
DeletePatience.... we must have :)
DeleteBet hes probably working secretly in the shadows
DeleteHe has just updated the blog as you can see with a new link to HoC's blog, and a promo picture for a new idea "The Queen".
DeleteShinra has been putting a lot of thought into how to continue from here: so many titles, so little time. How to balance private life with finding time to work on these comics.
He'll likely update the blog any day soon and tell everyone more.
Yes i noticed them thus i said hes working secretly, sneaking links into the page. But i'm not too sure about the queen, shinra already has alot of comics on his hand, more comics will further divide the fan base.
ReplyDeleteThe new stories are nice because 6 things aren't happening at once.
ReplyDeleteAlso I wouldn't mind a bad ending for this title.
Amazing comic! Looking forward to the next chapter. Any idea when the next chapter will be published? I would happy to support your work. How could we do this?
ReplyDeleteI'm just doing this for the fame ^^
DeleteBut If you really want to support me, there's a donation button on the right hand side of the blog :P
I've started preparing the ground work for next chapter, but my focus is on finishing chapter 9 of Fallen Star first ^^