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Friday 21 June 2013

Harriet Cooper And The Wizard's Sacrifice - Spell 1

Harrriettttt !!!

Here she comes in her first adventure...Harriet Cooper and The Wizard's Sacrifice - Spell 1 !

This also is the very first chapter of a brand new serie that should be subdivided into 3 main stories of 4 chapters ^^

This new saga is the fruit of my collaboration with JNightShade, so please give him a warm welcome.


This serie will aim to satisfy you with shorter chapter, that could be released more ofen and with a touch of humor that I hope will also entertain you.

The story is fast paced and you shouldn't be bored reading this comic ^^

Once again give it a try, give it a chance and if you like...give it all your support !


Let's not wait anymore and let's dive into this fantatic new universe

** Please note that this comic contains content which is only suitable for adults - All 3D models in this comic are 18+ years old intended.







137 comments:

  1. How long does the upload usually take?

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    1. should be finished in less than one hour now ^^

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  2. Does that mean the series will be funny? Not like TFS?

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    1. it won't be a cartoon of course...but yes I think funnier than Fallen Star

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  3. Lies! Do NOT believe Shinra!
    18 years ago, we didn't have these 3D models! >_<

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  4. Very good story and the pictures are very awesome, say to the other author that congratulations for this comic

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  5. Absolutely amazing. I'm such a huge fan of both you and JNightShade that I've been anticipating the release of this chapter ever since it was announced - and my expectations were surpassed! Well done.

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  6. Wow, what can I say. Another Fantastic comic from you Shinra!! Demons have always been a big favorite of mine (Probably why Mariah is faveorite character in Fallen Star). Congrats also to JNightShade for this great collaboration. I've been a fan of your work over on Hypnopics- Collective. Do you have any other work besides what is on that site/ here?

    The story was fast paced as you said it would be but don't be afraid to make it longer if you need to flesh out the characters a little bit more, we have the patience for longer issues. Most of the pics seemed great but a number of them looked a little blurry but maybe that was on purpose. You listed the "main" characters at the beginning of the chp, but when they were introduced some didn't names. So on pg. 52, is that Harriet, Penny, and Donald from left to right? And is that Minea entering in the next page or are these simply cameo characters that won't play a roll down the road? Why does "Penny" simply disappear mid-conversation before they go to the cemetery?

    Aside from those thoughts, I have a few technical questions on how you did certain things as I work on my own scenes/ stories. I can either ask them here or you can email me - naptragichen@gmail.com.

    Once again, great comic and keep up the phenomenal work. I look forward to Fallen Star VII in a couple months.

    PS- Its nice to know the name of the next chp of Yuro No Majin!

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    1. Now that you mention it, Yoru no Majin's next chapter does have a new name!
      I thought it was going to be "Need your HELP Urgently". ;P

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  7. good job and great last pick, ah ah so much wisdom!
    Really gj shinra-kun even this work is just great!

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  8. Shinra, i have a problem, i don´t know the reasons why i didn´t receive your email of warning telling me that you put on g.e-hentai your new comic.

    I put my email direction, but the program that you have say to me, that my direction is already in your sistem

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    1. ???
      maybe because I've created the post and then updated it with the link but I'm not sure

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    2. So as it's not a new post, it does not send another email maybe

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  9. Ok, thanks, was that i visit your page all days, and i saw your link to the comic.

    I am telling you the truth

    The page 75 of your comic is ¡¡¡¡AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

    I would be very nervous when you put 100% here (WIP section) and after i would see the chapter VII.

    ¡¡Come on, quickly!! ¡¡Come on, quickly!!

    This lasts sentences are a joke.

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    1. Isn't it a bit rude to praise the one page of the new comic that isn't about that same comic? >_<

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    2. I think he's just excited about the next Fallen Star, as am I. But Harriet Cooper is also awesome.

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  10. That Miss T on the last page
    Absolutelly based

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  11. Well done to both Shinra and JNightShade!
    A very good read that's easy on the eyes, feels lighthearted (despite being a demonic story), and still manages to provide all the juicy bits that people awaiting your comics are looking for.
    The quality of the graphics have improved immensely since you started making comics, but they're getting better and better with each new issue, both the backgrounds and the character models. Especially the character models are so much sharper compared to your previous works...love it!
    Another thing I really liked was the color of the pentagram. You perfectly captured that glow-in-the-dark effect using a brightness of a color that is otherwise unusable and would really look out of place in a comic like this with 3d models.

    The story doesn't let down either, but in all honesty, it doesn't even get a chance to do that because of the story telling speed! It hardly settles down anywhere and is always either preparing or already showing the next "money scene" (except the one scene with Harriet).
    This is great for what this story is supposed to be: a pretty looking 18+ corruption story. It delivers exactly what it should.
    ...
    But it doesn't do anything more. That's probably done on purpose (you admit that the story is fast paced), but it comes as a surprise after getting to know Fallen Star and Yoru no Majin. It's as if your goals for this comic are not as ambitious.
    With some exaggeration, I could say that page 02 contains more information about the characters than the rest of the pages combined!
    With the number of future issues in mind, you'll have to either greatly slow the story down, or introduce a truckload of new characters: you're burning through your characters like there's no tomorrow!

    But once more, if Harriet Cooper was fully intended to be an easier, quicker story, then you did everything right because no page feels wasted for those goals.

    Some final thoughts and whining: the story hurries so much at times that there are some continuity "problems", particularly when characters are undressing for a sex scene. Clothed one pic, nude the next pic, and the clothes are nowhere to be found lying on the ground. 65 to 66 to 67 just seems really weird and rushed.
    I also think it's a bit of a shame that no one in this first chapter is really resisting. They must be really craving sex and corruption! I know of course that it's due to mind break, drugged sangria, and the fact that there needs to be sex and corruption in a sex and corruption comic, but still... Bella gives in way too soon and too easily (65 and the party), and Tom is completely unrealistic.
    As with all of your comic issues, there are a couple of typos and punctuation errors. Nothing noteworthy usually, but "cemetary" instead of "cemetery" is pretty noticable with the way it appears on page 55. (Just telling you in case you didn't know.)

    As is usual with my reviews, I end with mentioning some negative aspects, which may make it appear as if I'm negative about the issue.
    Not the case, nope, not at all. Hopefully you know and recognize this by now! >_<

    Oh, and to all readers new on this blog because of this comic: page 41 top right picture, you're not missing anything. There is absolutely nothing hidden there! XD

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    1. I'm glad to see you are having to work hard to find faults. I think both Shinra and I feel this series actually GETS BETTER as it progresses. The first chapter was intended to introduce the main characters, and get a feel for the challenge they will face. I think we accomplished that.

      As to how "easy" Bella gave in, I don't think it was that easy, and there will be some further explanation later (sorry no spoiler). The pace will slow a bit as evil has taken the low hanging fruit, but only a bit. A couple more characters will be introduced, but you've met most of them. And, lastly there will be some character development-but I've attempted to stay pretty close to the characters they parody (hopefully that should be obvious enough).-JN

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    2. I agree with mpgrey that I got more out who the characters were on page 2 then the actual story but I understand this will be a series so they can flushed out in later issues. Bella, (IMO is the sexiest in the story so far), has only done it with a succubus/ incubus twice so there might be still time to slow down her final transformation. In the intro on this blog it said 3 main stories in 4 chps, so does this mean 12 issues or 4 issues? Also do you have work besides what is on Hypnoptics? Keep up the good work!!

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    3. Hell of a Critic22 June 2013 at 02:33

      Hello Shinra, Jnightshade2

      I have to say that's a pretty good comic you both did there.
      I'll start with the good and then with the "bad" (understand less good)

      As Mpgrey said previously, Shinra, your art is getting better and better as time goes on. The settings, the characters it's all improving greatly and the best example is Bella who is for the moment, I believe, the sexiest character you ever represented.
      I think that's because she seems much more real than most your other models. She doesn't have the pornstar look or build, yet she has a genuine innocent look and still appears sexy. That makes the corruption scene that much more efficient. To resume, she looks human but in the real world would probably be the most beautiful girl of her college/workplace. ; )

      Also Jnightshade2, I think the concept of your story (a corruption comic in a Hogwart School of Wizardry setting) is just genius. And I believe I speak for all of us saying that we all waited a long time for it. So, thank you.
      Your main evil protagonist is an efficient one. He's menacing and got a bodybuilder physique which makes the sex scene nicely contrasted with the frailer looking body of the young witches.
      Your "archetypes" are easily recognizable and the other new characters well introduced so no complaint here. Also I like the fact that the steps and ways to the corruption are clearly explained. Even a Fantasy or Science fiction stories need to have its own defined set of rules that the reader can understand and integrate otherway he can't really be invested in it.

      Now for what could be improved :
      For Shinra, I think that the Hermonee character doesn't look very much like her "couterpart". Yours looks like she is the less innocent of all the witches represented while she should be the most ingenue of all.I'll expalin: the tanned skin associated with the light brown hair isn't very natural and gives the weird impression she would have spent some time getting her tan in a tanning booth. Also Hermonee is a native BRITISH and furthermore a bookworm so she should be very clear skinned anyway.
      Storywise I agree that it went a little fast, it was efficient nevertheless and "pushed all the right buttons" but the characters sometimes weren't developed enough. For Gellina, it was normal because her corruption started prior to the begining point of your story but some of the choices and reactions Bella had just weren't consistent. For example there was this scene when she just seemed slightly surprised by the fact that her friend was a succubus. "So you're a Succubus now ? Okay". Or then, when she immediatly started practicing dark magic while she was given the means to do it by a demon ! "Hmm a crearly evil looking book of dark magic ? Okay let's use it". It's necessary that she falls in those traps I agree, but she could be reluctant or confused or at least a bit frightened about it. You could precise that some time passed, make use of ellipsises...
      I think that's everything I had to add. All in all it's a very good first comic and the next one is eagerly awaited.

      PS: A special mention Shinra for the transformation of Gellina into a succubus. It's one of your best rendered transformation sequence so far .
      Although I'm not a great fan of the piercings and trinkets (bracelets,pointy necklace...etc) she wore after (I would have prefered no clothes at all) , I liked the idea that the fact she was a succubus influenced her human appearence.

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    4. Hell of a Critic22 June 2013 at 02:38

      Oh and also good work with Bella corrupted. It's still her, she still has all the traits that make her sexy but also a few traces of corruption that show her evil conversion. That's the best kind ;-)

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    5. Hell of a Critic22 June 2013 at 04:53

      (of corruption)

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    6. Page 41 hum hum that's because i did not had the time to finish my sentence...Hum Tom...I......can't feel anything between your legs !

      Ahahaha

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    7. @Mpgrey - @Hell of a Critic

      Thank you for all the praise ^^

      I will be short on the good things as I'm not gonna throw flowers at myself...I do love Bella as well, she could even become one of my most prefered character.

      For the less good thing (yes less good because bad is kind of negative ^^)

      First Hermonee, to tell you the truth, JN and I have reworked her because we found that she was not innocent enought. I Guess we she should have gone further. But I think something I did wrong especially with Hermonee, is her behaviour. I positioned her more as a hotheaded character taking the lead than a shy and innocent bookworm. My bad :-/

      Regarding the pace and flow of the story, yes it's going fast...sometimes too fast. And I have to admit that when you guys, Hell of a critic and Mpgrey, are expressing critics, I more or less already know about it as I can kind of feel it when I'm working on the comic. And most of the times, it's the thing I'm not really happy with that comes up.

      So yes, some retort sounds dumb, some scenes have even been lenghten to make them more believable. We discussed about it with JN and took it into consideration to improve this as from chapter 2.

      This chapter could seem a little bit unbalanced story wise but I think this is mainly due to the fact that H.C's gonna be made of quite short chapter and it's kinda difficult to fit a good dose of action,story and sex in so few pages. But again this issue has been disussed and adressed.

      I hope you really had fun reading this first chapter as for me H.C is and will be a quite entertaining story ;-)


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    8. HOC, thank you very much for the review. It is nice getting some constructive negative feedback. I think we will manage to rectify most of your complaints for part 2. I'm tinkering just a bit with the dialogue make the corruption better.

      As to "Hermione", Shinra and I had a back and forth about her (the first rendition of her I was critical of-and I think Shinra improved her), I failed to home in on the tan, which I'm not sure I would have said was the problem. I simply asked for "more innocent", probably should have included a photo of Emma. Still I think readers will, wiith a little imagination, forgive us.

      Thank you on the transformation scene (I think I get a decent amount of credit for that as it was well described). Shinra's execution was brilliant and spot on.-JN

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    9. Hell of a Critic25 June 2013 at 23:03

      Hello Jnightshade,
      I can only agree with you about a rendering of Hermione/Minea closer to "Emma". That would probably be the best as readers are most familiar with this incarnation of the character.
      Of course it must be done within the limits of Shinra-kun desire, possibilities and tolerance (mostly his tolerance for me trying to meddle with his design).
      Finally, I have no doubt when I see the great ideas and concepts that you already introduced in your story that you'll do a great job on the second chapter of Harriet Cooper.
      So till' next time,
      -HOC

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  12. Top notch work from both you and JNightshade, I've been a big fan of both of your works so it's great to see the colab work here. Also lol @ MPGrey pointing out page 41 haha.

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  13. Amazing work, once again. Can't wait for Chapter VII of Fallen Star Either!!

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  14. Good job, I have to say I like this comic better than the yoru no main comic. Also, I can't wait for the Fallen Star Chapter 7, how many pages would you expect it will have?!

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  15. OOOhhh miss T i love you

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  16. Have to say awesome job, hits all the right buttons as usual. Keep it up. no pun intended.

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  17. Question: Are there any female corruption story fans out there, and what did you think (I keep telling Shinra there are some)?

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    1. Huge fan!!! Both written and visual such as these comics. Currently working on my own that will eventually make its way to the internet. As for thoughts you can see my comments above.

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    2. yes but...are you a female ?
      JNightShade keeps on telling me that there should be some female fans and that we should hear their voice as well, see if we can take into account another gender view on those comics

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    3. Lol, no. Read that as a fan of female corruption instead of females who are fans of these stories. My GF is kinda interested in this stuff, she likes other things in stories but I will she if i convince her to post here. Mauser8mm said his wife is, so maybe she will post also. With 181,779 page views (@ the time of this post) there is bound to have been some ladies here.

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    4. Hello Jnightshade I was wondering if your characters were more attached to the ones who corrupted them in your story ?
      I'm a fan of once someone is corrupted she loves /get attached to her corruptor. Will this be the dynamic?

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  18. I'll get my wife on it after she gets off work she's a big fan of Fallen Star as with me and if I won't know better shell be commenting on the wardrobe and Bella's green high heels.
    Thanks a lot guys now I will have to go shopping once she sees them.

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  19. Wooow, great first ch!! kinda want part 2 right after the next fallen star. cant wait to see how cooper gets corrupted

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  20. Ayayayay, I'm late >_<

    Congrats for your awesome new series Shinra!
    Great jobs as always ^_^

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    1. Now we are waiting for yours ^^

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    2. Nope, we are waiting for The Fallen Star Ch VII. Come on now Shinra, prove you can work faster than G9 ;) Make him sweat a little xD

      Good work on this one. Never tought i would see high heels in hogwards xD

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    3. Above all when G9 is working on his blog layout instead of working on his comics...Come On G9 ! I wanna see Tifa in Action :-p

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    4. I would not worry about G9 is faking working on his blog, not updating the progress bar and then BAAAAAM

      He's gonna come up with another amazing comic coming out of nowhere

      GO G9 Go !

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  21. Why is it still 57%?

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    1. Patience, he is resting on the laurels of another successful comic. When the time comes, it will move.

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    2. Anonymous: you're something you're NOT even paying for...

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    3. demanding for***

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    4. Shinra has his own defence force, holyshit

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  22. Hey, Shinra, this is really good stuff. I wanted to ask you, however... I'm new to Poser/Daz3d and I've been trying to make squirt-like effects like the ones you do in this comic (at the end of the transformation sequence), but I can't find the resources or options to do so. What resources are you using? Would you know of any which may be of use and are also free? Thanks.

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    1. I think there're a few ways to do so...

      1/ use gimp brushes - you can find a lot for free on deviantart
      2/ use a water plane prop and change the color - there's some free on ShareCg

      3/ create a plane in Daz, deform it, apply texture, bump and displacement - totally free as you create it yourself

      4/ you draw it yourself in photoshop - free if you have photoshop and give the most realistic result. I'm working and trying to improve myself on this one ^^

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  23. good work :) the story has potential. Pretty characters, Gellina looks super sexy, the cute girl tf to a sexy lady! very good!
    We are curious to see how Bella will look like.
    7 women and 3 men tf and corruption in 3 parts that´s a lot of work
    I'm looking forward to the girl with red hair band or the girl with the glasses on it that they will tf and corruption
    I do not like that everywhere were the pentagrams!
    sorry but that sucks: (
    instead to show us the 75% of the fallen star, I would prefer that you show us the alternative of H.C. with the ziagarete, but only on your website!!!

    the corruption was to fast at my opinion but good :)

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    1. Could explain me this again :

      instead to show us the 75% of the fallen star, I would prefer that you show us the alternative of H.C. with the ziagarete, but only on your website!!!

      I'm not sure I totally understood you

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    2. you have asked us a week ago how the corruption is to run.
      because of the past, some people have found it is not good to be seduced with a cigarette.
      I believe that you have something already begin to "create or paint" and then you've taken a new mountings because of the voting of the people.
      i will see your first thought what have you create ! maybe with the cigarette:)

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    3. It was about "Yoru no Majin" (second chapter). It's another comic not related to Hariett Cooper.

      Me,I've read the critics of HC and I agree, it has a great atmosphere in it.
      Loved the transformation scene of Gellina it was the best I've ever seen in a comic ! Her face and body as a demon was great but when she reverted back to human form the face was too different from her original one that I preferred. Bella was better done I think (her corrupted human form was very good ).

      Also, wouldn't it be time to change the first picture at the entrance of your website ? It's getting kind of boring and I don't like the peircing that much...
      Anyway great comic Shinra-Kun !

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  24. I disagree the girl on display is so hot I never tire looking at her besides the pierced nips reminds me of my wife's tittys Jessica has a bar bell in each nip and there so fun to play with when she got home from the CWS she was so wasted and horny she was my little play toy for hours.
    Keep up the awesome work Shinra-Kun
    Getting more and more interested in the Swarm comic idea. I hope your creative juices flow with the story line.

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    1. You are a strange man @_@

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    2. Thanks I bet we sit next to you in church ;-)

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  25. I agree that the first picture could be changed that would be nice and also that the piercings aren't my cup of tea either .
    But that's Shinra's choice before all ;-)

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    1. I'm working on something to get the banner improved...

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  26. is your plan now to work on (Yoru No Majin) in exchange with (the Fallen star)
    2 Day working on (Yoru No Majin) 1 day working on (the Fallen star)

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    1. I will focus on finishing Fallen Star but will Start working on Yoru and H.C. 2 as well ^^

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  27. The strangest thing happened - I no longer care about the fallen star release. It's been so long, I awaited it for so long that it doesn't matter anymore.
    Sorry.

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    1. That's quite an obvious trick to get Shinra to work harder, y'know. ^_~

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    2. As I motion my hand in front of you mpgrey and say (these are not the stories you are looking for)... Dammit that didn't work.
      Ahh screw it I'm going over to the Dark Side they got better outfits anyway.

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    3. It's nothing like that, mpgrey.
      It just lost its magic.

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    4. I don't think that kind of comment even worth to be answered but as any other fan, dear Anonymous #72, you may deserve my consideration...

      Coming here to write : "I don't care about Fallen Star anymore...It has lost all of its magic...because..... I had to wait too long"
      Waouw that's a Hell of a Critic (^^)

      Tell me that you don't like it anymore because it has become boring, because it has become too much of a fan service, because there's not enough sex, because there's too much sex, because there's none of your fetish represented in this comic but please don't tell me that it's because you had to wait for too long...a few months hum hum.

      If that's really the case, there're a lot of movies, books, games,... you had to give up on because this is well known that you only have to wait one month max to get your hands on the next movie of lord of the ring, Harry potter was it seven years or 7 month for the complete saga, I can't really remember,...bref If that's the case there's nothing I can do for you.

      Eh Shinra are you getting cocky or what, How dare you comparing your stupid comic to masterpieces like Lord of the ring or Harry Potter, at least I had to pay for those...

      So I think there's another solution that could suit your needs and it's called McComix, there's heaps of comics full of "magic"
      it's only 14$ a month but eh...there're new releases every week ;-)

      A better yet, you should start doing your own comic so that we could start whining about you being so fast to release comics that we can't keep up with your pace...but don't worry that's really easy and above all, it only takes 4 to 6 hours a day...every day.

      It took me at least 10 min to write this post, and I think I should go back to work now while I still have some fans waiting, with shining (fallen) stars in their eyes, for my magicless comic to be delivered....

      Naaaaah everybody here knows that I already have 2-3 chapters done that I'm keeping on the side just because I like to see you wait......

      To summarize, I try to keep an open mind, I'm opened to discussion, if there's something going wrong with what I'm doing...happy to debate about it.

      Yes this post may sound a little bit sarcastic or rude but I'm just really disapointed that "some" people can't understand or even measure the involvment required to produce those kind of comic.

      I guess you can't please everybody...

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    5. well the real fans know how hard it is to make this kind of comic and i think this series is a masterpiece and in my opinion you have become much faster than in the past with more pics and better graphics so what you write is correct and i liked your sarcasm xD i think i can speak for the most when im saying we are all behind you as real fans.

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    6. I see Shinra already replied while I was considering what the best way of replying was, without sounding needlessly rude or offensive, but Shinra just basically said it all.

      Anonymous, it's nice of you to be honest, and no matter what your reason is for losing interest, it remains the reason that counts for you, no matter what we think of it.

      But have you considered what the value of your post is? What kind of message you are giving to Shinra?
      Are you saying you honestly think he works too slowly, despite seeing the progress bars being filled VERY frequently?
      Or are you saying you deny Shinra the chance to work on other comics beside Fallen Star, thinking they're useless distractions keeping him from working on the only comic that really counts?

      Again, everyone is entitled to his/her own opinion and you're no exception, of course.
      But some opinions are better left unwritten because it is needlessly rude to the maker of the comics you (used to) like, who puts just about all of his spare time in these comics and offering them to you for FREE.
      Don't forget that.

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    7. Hell of a Critic1 July 2013 at 23:26

      Hehe...
      "a Hell of a Critic " you should be ashamed Shinra ^_^

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  28. is the Fallen Star 62% current?

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  29. 2% for 2 days .... very slowly (

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    1. ...I can't believe I'm reading this...
      Especially after the other posts earlier today.
      Thanks for your kind words of encouragement. I'm sure this will make Shinra feel more motivated and do his best even more to provide you with your free comic.

      Oh, and that was sarcasm.

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    2. same toughts here mpgrey, 2% is better than nothing, and even if there would be no progress in some days i know that he is working hard and is maybe fixing some problems.

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    3. Lets try to talk about something else please!
      I know what about a rain scene with lighting and white out crashes like the negative panel when Aki took the head off of the First dark disciple in Yoru No Majin I think that would cool.
      maybe that could be used in Harriet Copper 2 or a character could make a long shot splattering one of the paints on the wall of Sister Mary Elephant and she reaches out to hold a character while another gets down and dirty? Just an Idea. (thoughts)

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    4. If the author can't handle that maybe it will be better for him to stop making comics alltogether. The kids will find a new thing to cling to and everybody will be happy.

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    5. I'm sorry, but that comment was just uncalled for. Shinra has been clearly working hard on multiple (meaning more than one) stories and doing a great job to not only work on each project equally, but with fairly good speed as well. I think that you are being incredibly rude by making such comments whining that it isn't finished. I think I speak for many of us on hear when I say just sit down and wait it out. No one wants a rushed comic, plus these things take time.

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    6. I got a better idea there anonymous. Why don't you just leave. I am sorry, I do not like talking to you guys like this, but this has gone way far. I can tolerate the waiting comments, I know people wait a long time for things. But these kinds of comments are ignorant and unwarranted.

      Dude you don't like it here then leave. Myself and the other fans who can act like adults and be respectable will stay and enjoy his comics. A man like you who acts like a child and cannot compose himself respectfully doesn't even warrant attention. You tell shinra to leave, that is "kids" will go somewhere else. This IS where we want to be, and you are the one who should go somewhere. Trolls like you are just embarrassments to themselves, not being talented enough or intellectual enough to contribute to anything around you. All you can do is complain and hurt others for attention. I have seen men like you come and go in my life and let me tell you, the most justice this life ever gives is that people like you who exist to cause trouble will always be a lesser value than people like Shinra and G9 because at the end of the day they make people happy at the expense of themselves. So get off this blog and out of my face. Your done here.

      Another thing I need to express is this bashing of shinra and G9 comics for taking too long and saying the hurtful things. You guys get to read these comics for free, it literally is as easy as laying back clicking your mouse. You guys fail to comprehend how much time they take to do these comics for nothing else but entertainment. Both these men work full time jobs, sacrifice all their free time, and work effortless without even shedding a profit. They do it for now reason except for entertaining us. Does it suck to wait long? Yes like anything in this world it does. But they do not need harassment because you hate waiting. These people give and give and give and all you do is take and take and take. All they ask us patience...that is it. I feel they should at least get spared hurtful comics like this. You want regular updates go to mccomix. One issue of the comic takes 1 year to come up. They update one page per week if that. So I don't want to hear about how this man can't take it and how he doesn't care anymore. This man gives more than enough and takes nothing from you. There aren't many men who would even give a dying man water without asking for money in this world so be happy he gives us what he does.

      Ninja out (drops mic)

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    7. You have to be glad I actually paid attention to the wall of text and read some.
      Yeah, nah, you are a chidlish cunt.

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    8. I got it O_O
      Timmy...I know it's You

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    9. damn xD, hey shinra i have a question its something based on mauserms request. my question is, if you have ever tought about putting a sweat film on the skin of the characters if the corruption ah i mean the fucking is getting really hard and horny so they would start to sweating a little bit maybe like a low shining of the skin. and also i would like to know if this would be too difficult to render or if this is only a waste of time this is only a question and im not trying to make you put this into comics just a question.

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    10. Ooh sweat wet got me going like a turbo vett I like that thought too shivers
      Shinra lol Timmy ha ha he must still be grounded

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    11. the author slacking again, ahahahah

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    12. @Chimera-zofa
      I made an attempt in this 7th chapter but not in an erotic scene and I'm quite uncertain about the result, not really perfect..either it's barely noticeable or the character looks like coming out of the swimming pool.

      You'll tell me if it's good or not ;-)

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    13. nice, yes i will

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    14. I think the idea is rather interesting and we should check it out more, maybe play around with it a bit. Maybe there is a way to change the texture or pattern to make it look realistic?

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  30. About the mysterious woman on the picture 9 and 10,
    the Blue stuff on her body is it organic or just fabric of her outfits?

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  31. in the next update will we see Carla? I mean the malicious Carla :) like Mariah!
    and besides how far are you? I hope that of this question no kids give stupid Comentars on this web page, like the last time:(

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  32. My question is how many pages will Fallen Star have?

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  33. Will T next the Fallen Star continue to corrupt zell? What do you thinking it will be ready to release the comic? in 1/2/3 weeks?

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  34. more than 3 ? have you a lot of work in real life? or what is happen?

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    1. Once and for all guys...
      Producing ONE pic takes in between 30 min and one hour + Edition + postwork + correction + write the story + administrate the blog +++

      This one chapter only, not even talking about the other comics, should count around 900 pics...I'll let you do the math to understand how many hours I have to spend to create ONE chapter.

      Yes I have a lot of work in my real life and I have to travel a lot for my job, I do have other hobbies, I do have friends, I do have family so to summarize like all of you...I have a real life



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    2. Don't let it annoy you, it's just a measure of how much people love your stuff :)

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    3. No, it's the reason people are here in the first place.
      Nobody asked him to make near 300 pages, it's his own fault of doing so.

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    4. Haters will hate, some people want more pics because around 50 or 100 is not enough for them and others want to see new comics much faster in my opinion they have crazy ideas how fast a person should make a comic like this and by the way its for free so stop flaming around he is doing what he can to please everyone and i think his comics are worth waiting.

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    5. Hell of a Critic3 July 2013 at 06:42

      God "anonymous" ,
      You know respond to you isn't even worth it. Your comment just takes unnecessary place and doesn't achieve anything. It just proves that you are a spoiled brat clearly not mature enough to visit this website. You'd better leave because nobody wants you there, and you clearly don't like to be here either

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    6. Learn English, shitter.
      I'd do whatever I want whenever I want. If you actually believe all that was me you are more stupid than I thought you were.

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    7. Hell of a Critic4 July 2013 at 07:45

      English isn't my mother tongue but I'm always ready to learn. Could you tell me what my mistakes are ? I'm honestly curious. There can't be that many.
      I know you probably aren't the one behind all of the anonymous comments. But writing one criticizing Shinra's pace under this "pseudonym" just after the troll we had here led me to mistake you obviously for someone else . My mistake ,if it was one, was honest.
      But we can't check this. Can we ?

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    9. To this Anonymous two above me:

      You know I read you put down the author of these comics, talk shit to all the members of this blog, and just cause trouble in general.

      I just have one question for you. If the artist is doing so bad, what would you do different? Let's say you have in your power to put out your own comics. What would you do that would fix all the "bullshit" these comics generate?

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  35. have the 5 girls from page 150 (The Fallen Star 6) in the future nor a meaning as the sisters? (I mean will they more tf)

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  36. has the old rama any meaning in the future?

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    1. Yes the old man will have some role to play in the story

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  37. and the easter bunny has he a significant in the future
    and and and :)
    boys patience ;)

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    1. Mmmh easter bunny I'm still not sure...
      But the tanuki from Super Mario...definitely ^^

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  38. are you still working! that is a lot night shift for this product!
    in name all thank you for so many hart working :)

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  39. has lisa a important meaning in the future or is she an understudy

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    1. As all the girls from Starlight's inner circle friend, yes she will have her role to play in the story

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  40. i like the green of saga (p.244) will she keep it in the future or have you other plans for her eyes?

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    1. Mmmh yes, if i'm not mistaken I used those eyes several other times ^^

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  41. Great comic! Can't wait to see what happens next

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  42. what do you think will you give us a new update this week by 75%?
    friday or earlier or maybe more next week?

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  43. are you planning to give us an update tomorrow with a lot new nice picture ?

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  44. has Leto a important role in the next comic like Tethys ^^ ;) NO I know :)
    I joke only :)
    you are still working?

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    1. he already mentioned that a new teaser will come out friday or next week so he is still working

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  45. I do ^^??
    Update today?
    :)

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    1. if today...most lately late tonight...like really late ^^

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  46. is Ok i live in another time zone :)

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  47. upload ! 75 %
    :) :) :) :)

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  48. yes ! :)
    in a 1 hour ?

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  49. I'm currently working on a few little tutorials about how curves work and how to use them to get a certain look in your photos, so keep your eye out for that :) Online Photoshop

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    1. I'll definitely have a look.
      Let me know when it's ready

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